ff maneet (LOVE WAR)thread 2 part 60 page 46 - Page 5

Posted: 13 years ago

Awesome update

Loved it

geet past so sad

Can't wait 4 da next part

Con soon

Thanks 4 da pm

Posted: 13 years ago

Maan you are not heartless and you can love someone. You just have to trust them.

Posted: 13 years ago

very nice part.....

i wish maan will find geet .... n regain her faith n stranghten their relation further.....
 
pl update soon....
 
 
 
love 286pearl
Posted: 13 years ago
liked ur ff wanna read more do pm me when u update me waiting
Posted: 13 years ago
congrats on new thread................but pls dont make them go separate ways.............he has to b with her..........................
Posted: 13 years ago
Loved da updated
I want Maan to help geet
Posted: 13 years ago
                                                                   part 48
maan was walking on hospital alley. he thought, what he 'll do now.. he will go to geet & ask forgiveness or he 'll stay away from her. he was in dillima. he cursed himself many times. but all his angry & guilty incressed..  he went to the reception & told he want discharge now. receptionist checking his bill & all details.
receptionist: sir, ur admission bill is due still. we did not get any cash money.
maan shocked: how could be it. doctor said some other day geet i mean my  wife paid this before my operation.
receptionist: no sir, we have no details about it. there is no money recit or any paid ducoments here.
maan: may be ur old staff did not put it in hurry.
receptionist: thats not possible, every details should be here.
 maan became angry & shouted: what the hell is this! so much confusion. u said my bill due & ur doctor said my wife already paid it. lisen i want to make it clear now.
receptionist: ok, sir i 'll check it. she entered a security room got a file which was done by old staff. she found it that mrs msk gave a bengals against the money. she took it & show maan.
receptionist: sir, ur wife did not pay money, she gave a bengals as a security. we kept it coz it was an emerjency case. otherwise we just accept cash or cheqe.
maan shocked: what geet gave this bengals to save my life. he remind a flash back
in delhi,
maan & geet bump to each other at house. as usual their eyelock  after that when he turned back her bengals attached with his kurtas hand. he tried to remove it but when he forced to remove it tore. geet & maans eyes widen.
maan little angry: what the hell. ggeet, tumhari ye kahtarnak choori mera kurta farr di. kue pehenti ho aise khatarnak chori.
geet annoyed & said: pehle to ye choori nahi, ye kangan hain. or dosri baat ye khatsrnak cheze nahi hain ye mera fav ornament hain.
maan teased: geet, tumhari sath sab kuch khatarnak kue hoti hain. chahe kisiko marna ho ya pehna ho.?
geet made a angry face: keya, main khatarnak ho. acha hain or vi hongi. or khabardar agar meri kangan ko kaha.
maan: kue nahi kaho.. keya speciallity hain isme. he narrowed his eyes.
geet : ye mere maa ki akhri nishani hain. maa ko main nahi dekha leken onki ye nishani main humesha samal kar rakhti ho.
maan turned to normal hear this. he looked at geet & said: oh, to pher iss khangan such main khass hain. par geet, khass cheze ko khass tara samal na chaheye. iss tara pehenke. agar kho gayi to.
geet: nahi khoyege, ye main bohut samal kar rakh ti ho. jab mujhe maa ki yaad ati hain tab main pehenti ho. kuch v ho jayee main isse khone nahi dongi.
maan quite smile: good, sun kar acha laga tum kuch to ache se karte ho.
geet nooded : ha, then she realized what he said. keya kaha aap ne. iska matlab main baki kaam
bure se karti ho.
maan smarked; ha bilkull, khass kar jab tum mere samne rehti ho tab.
 geet confused: keya matlab?
 maan: kuch nahi. maa ki kangan hain iss leye tum bach gayi. warna mera kurta farne ka saja to tumhe de kar rehta. he smiled take care it then he leave. geet also smiled.
maan back his thought when receptionist called him, sir.. u have to pay ur bill.
maan: umm,  give me those bengals. i will double for it.  he sign a cheqe then took the bengals
and leave the hospital.
maan in car & looked the ornaments & thought: peachle one month se hum ek dosre ki sath hain. par tumne kabhi iss ki bare main nahi kaha. maine bohut kaushish ki tumhari bare main janne, par har waqt tumne mujhe na kamiyab kar dia. jis sawal ki talash main ek maine se kar raha tha kabhi nahi socha ki iska jawab aise milege. kue geet, kue keya aisa. bohut sare sawal ka jawab mujhe donhna hain or kahi sawal ki jawab mujhe dena v hain. iss leye mujhe tumse milna jarori hain. maan tried to find out her. but she was missing. he went her brother cabin but  she was not there. he tried to call her but her phone switched off. maan became restless. where is she! at night maans car stooped on middle road. he came out from the car he saw her but he frozed to see her. not able to move. his mouth sealed.
precap: bechara maan..😕
 
so guys.. maan will not going away from geet.  the kangan back..but  how he convince her. this geet is stubborn like maan. whay maan shocked to see her? any guess. lot of question. let see what will happen next.
do comments..😊
 
Edited by reea88 - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
dont tell me he has seen her with yash.......
Posted: 13 years ago
nice update............continue soon...............

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