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Posted: 18 February 2011 at 5:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by golu_1677

loved the intro waiting for the update...thanks
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
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Posted: 18 February 2011 at 5:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by nisha1984

nice intro
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
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Posted: 18 February 2011 at 5:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Mahak Sinha

Nice start.thanks
So new mixture of RN & PKYEK yaa its a comb of my two fav serial interesting but where is Vivian in the story?i dont know

If u are taking Pia than take Vivian too as i don't want Pia to be paired with Kabir.dont worry dear as abay loves pia so much and he reaches wherever pia goes  so might come here also by following his love pia  LOLLOL


 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
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Posted: 18 February 2011 at 5:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by danish1

its lovely introductionSmile
i glad you included misha's charac also.yaa
 with RN lead i am very happy and loooking forward for  this fic
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
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Posted: 20 February 2011 at 7:41am | IP Logged
nice fic...
 
raj...vaisa hi hai...jaisa nafrat me hain...
 
baki ke charah bhi interesting hain...!!! ab kahani jab aage badhegi tabhi toh pata chalega ki kya khichdi pakknewali hai...!!!
 
par main bhi Sumi ki tarah yehi kahungi ke tum kam se kam apni ek fic khatam kar diya karo...kyoun ke aise hi kitne achhe achhe fics tumne adhe me chod rakhi hai...
 
plz cont soon.

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subhe ke 7 baaj rahe haai sangeeta jee har roz ke tara kitchen mein sab ke liye chai aur nasta bana rahe hote haai jab koi unke pass aata haai aur unke picche se hug karte hue aapne meethi se awaz mein kahete haai "good morning mama"sanjeeta jee jo ke aaj kuch pareshan laag rahe the aapne dheeme se awaz mein kahete haai"utth gaye naina "naina jo ke aapne maa se bohot pyaar karte haai aaj unke awaz mein yeh fikapan dekh kar usse samajhne mein bilkul he der nahin laagte haai ke zarur sangeeta jee kisi baat  ko leekar pareshan ya dukhi haai woh sangeeta jee ko unke pareshani ke waaja pucchne laagte haai par sangeeta jee jo ke aapne baccho ko akbhie dukhi nahin dekh sakte haai woh subhe subhe aapne pareshani naina ko baata ke uska mann udhas nahin karna chhate the isliye aapne pareshanio ko aapne dil mein he dabbate hue woh aapna sar mein hilate hue kahete haai"nahin beta koi pareshani nahin haai "par naina usse samjhana itna aasan thora naa hai woh aapne ma ko aapne taraf turn karte haai aur unke gaalo par laage aasuo ko aapne figer tip pe leete hue pucchte haai"agar aap dukhi nahin haai toh yeh aapke aakhon mein kya kar rahe haai?"aapne beti ke yeh sawaal sunke sangeeta jee jo itne der aapne pareshani aapna dukhi aapne he dil mein dabba ke rakhe hue the ab unse aur seh nahin woh naina ko aapne seene mein bharte hue kahete haai"beta do din ke bad vaaishali ka janam din haai aur main usse wish tak nahin kar sakte "aapne maa ke muh se itne dino bad vaaishali ka naam sunke naina ke bhi aakhen bhar aate haai uska bhi maan karta haai rone ka aapne dil mein chuppe itne dino ke aasuo ko bhar nikalne kaa lekin woh jaante the ke agar is waqt woh aasa kcuh karege toh sangeeta jee ka dukh aur bhi bar jaayega aur aasa woh kabhie hone nahin de sakte haai isliye aapne aasuo ko woh aapne he seene mein dabba leete haai aur aapne hootho par ek halke se muskan laate hue kahete haai"mama i know ur upset for vaaishali but main hu naa aapke sath dekhna main sab thik kar dunge "sangeeta jee jis ka mann subhe se bohot he dukhi tha ab naina ke yeh baat sunke uske dil mein aapne liye itna pyaar aur fikar dekh ke unhe bohot aacha laagta haai woh naina ke forehead par pyaar se kiss karte hue kahete haai "beta tujhe dekh kar mujhe laagta haai ke zarur mainne picch le janam mein moti dan kiye honge jo is janam mein bhaagwan ke mujhe aahirbad ke roop mein tujh jaise beti diya haai " aapne maa ke aakhon mein phir se nume dekh kar naina ab atmosphere ko light karne ke liye kahete haai " uff oh mama aap bhi naa aapka naam sangeeta nahin balke nirupa roy hona chaheye tha jab dekho aap rote he rahete aapko acha laagta haai kya itna rona ?"aapne beti ko aase baccho ke jaise chirte hue dekh kar aur uske masumeeyat se bhaare baatein sunkar sangeeta jee ko bohot haase aa jaate woh haaste hue naina se kahete haai "such mein beta tu naa abhie bhi bacche haai " aapne maa ke chahre par phir se haase dekh kar naina feels really happy woh unke gaalo par pyaar se kiss karte hue kahete haai"yeh hue naa baat ab aap jaaye aur jaake papa ko unke subhe ke chai dekar aaye aur main jaake aapne pyaare pyaare sleeping beauties ko unke pyaar bhaare need se jaaga ke aate hue

 
 
 
 
 
 
naina aapne sleeping beauties yani ke uske dono pyaare payare bahen pia aur tia ko unke pyaar bahare need se jaagane ke liye unke kamre mein aate haai toh dekhte hai har roz ke tara uske dono bahen pia aur tia bohot he peacefully aapne teddy bear ko gaale laage ke aapne pyaar bhaare need mein khoye hue haai aapne baheno ko is tara peacefully sote hue dekh kar naina ka bilkul he mann nahin karta unhe unke pyaar bhaare se need jaagane ka lekin agar woh unhe nahin jaagayege toh woh dono he aapne school ke liye late ho jaayenge aur aasa naina kabhie hone nahin de sakte kunki she always wants her sisters to be the best isliye aapne pyaar ko aapn dil mein he dabbate hue woh un dono ko jaagane laagte haai but as they are naina's sisters they are not ready to get up so easily woh dono he aapne di ke baato ko ignore kar ke aapne blaket se aapne face ko cover kar ke aapne need ko continue karne laagte haai par naina bhi naina haai usse aapne baheno ke in nakro se lipatna khub aacche se aate haai woh un dono ke kaano mein jaake zor se chillate hue kahete "GOOD MORNINGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG MY SISTERSSSSSSSSSS"
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
pia aur tia jo ke aapne pyaar bhare need mein khoye hue the ab naina ke yeh chik sunke woh dono he ek dam se utth ke baith jaate haai aur ghabbarte hue idher udher dekhne laagte haai
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
aapne baheno ke aase puzzle haalat dekh kar naina ko bohot haase aa jaate she was laughing like hell ek toh subhe subhe is tara se jaagana aur uper se naina ka unpar aase haaste hue dekh kar pia aur tia dono ko he bohot gussa aa jaata haai they both started hitting naina with their pillow aur becchare naina jo ke abhie tak aapne bahen ke haala par bohot haas rahe the ab un dono se is tara maar khaate hue uska haal bohot he behaal tha woh apne jaan bacchane ke liye pure room mein durne laagte haai
 
 
 
 
 
after a long tom and jerry race when they all got tired and finally settled down on their bed tab naina unhe baatate haai ke woh is saal vaaishali ka birthday celebrate karna chahate haai naina ke yeh baat sunke pia aur tia gets totally shocked Shocked 
 
 
i know u all must be eager to know who vaaishali is so guys u will get to that as the story will unfold
 


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Posted: 21 February 2011 at 6:09am | IP Logged
thanx for the pm...plz continue soon......who is vaishali???

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