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Posted: 09 March 2011 at 4:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by BhartiKhushi909

awesome, thnaks khushi beautiful part. loved itClap
update soon.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
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Posted: 09 March 2011 at 4:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Pumpkinn

Hey read ur ff !
It is beautiful !
Loved it !
Awesome work !
Update soon !
Thnx for pm !
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
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Posted: 09 March 2011 at 4:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mamon.moon

nice update. thanks well finally raj has made his entrance. yaa he has come and wht an entrance. he is really arrogant. wondering whn and how raj and naina will meet. continue soon............
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
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Posted: 09 March 2011 at 4:23am | IP Logged

shayam ko aapne college aur school khatam hone ke bad naina pia ur tia teeno aapne maa sangeeta jee ko leekar kripa ke ghar jaate haai waha jaate he sangeeta jee gets totally surprised by seeing the arrangements done by her lil daughters for vaaishali unhe samajh mein nahin aate hai ke woh kaise aapne betio ka sukriya adda kare jinhone sirf unke khushi ke liye aapne papa se chuppa ke itna sab arragemnets kiya haai woh aapne aasu bhare aakhon se unke taraf dekhte hue kahete haai "beta aaj tum logo ne jo mere liye kiya haai uske liye zindage bhar main tum logo ke aaabhari rahunge " aapne maa ko aase rote hue dekh kar naina ko aacha nahin laagta haai woh situation ko light karte hue kahete haai"uff ohhhhh maa ab kya sirf rote he rahuge ya phir humare sath chal kar vaishali ka birthday bhi celebrate karoge " aapne beti ke yeh baat sunke sangeeta jee bhi ab haaste hue sab ke saath vaishali ka birthday celebrate karne laagte haai

 
 
 
 
 
 
 
itne dino bad vaishali ka birthday celebrate kar ke naina pia aur tia toh khush the he lekin sab zada jo khush the woh the sangeeta jee par jaise ke hum jaante haai khushi aur ghum dono saath saath chalte haai ek pal mein agar khushia haai toh dusre he pal mein dukh bilkul aase he kuch hua unke saath bhi

 
 
 
 
 
 
woh log jab ghar wapis aate haai tab dekhte haai ke kamal jee aapne aakhen bandh kar ke chup chao sofe par litte hue haai kamal jee jo ke kabhie bhi 10 baaje se pahele ghar nahin aate haai aaj unhe itne jaldi ghar mein dekh kar naina pia aur tia teeno ko he bohot haairaani hote haai woh log aapne paap se pucchte haai ke woh aaj itne jaldi kaise a gaye ?"par kamal jee aapne baccho ke sawaalo ka koi jabab na dete hue sidha waha se utth kar aapne kamre mein chale jaate haai aapne papa ko aaj aase unhe ignore kar ke chale jaate hue dekh kar naina pia aur tia ka dil ghabbra utthta haai ke soch ke sayed kamal jee ko unke party ke baare mein pata chal gaye haai woh teeno he aapne darre aur ghabbareye hue nazro se aapne maa ke aor dekhte hue pucchte haai"mama papa ko kahin humare party ke baare mein paat toh nahin chal gaye ?" aapne betio ko aase darre aur saheme se hue dekh kar sangeeta jee ko bohot dukh hota haai kunki aaj sirf unke liye unke betio ko is tara se darrna par raha haai woh aapne betio ko aapne seene mein chuppate hue kahete haai"nahin beta tum log ghabbaro mat aase koi baat nahin haai main dekhte hu tumhare papa ko kya hua haai tum log jaao aur jake so jaao " aapne betio ko unke kamre mein bej kar sangeeta jee kamal jee se baat karne ke liye jab kamre mein jaate haai tab dekhte ke kaml jee aapne kuch files leekar baithte haai aapne betio ke saath kaml jee ka aaj is tara se pesh anna sangeeta jee ko bilkul aacha nahin laaga woh unke pass jaake baithte haai aur and with a complaining tone asks him "kya hua jee aap ko aap tara se waha se utth kar kun chale aaye aap ko pata haai baccho ko kitna bura laaga haai?" now kamal jee who was looking really upset sangeeta jee ke yeh baat sunke he just lost his control woh aapne saree files ko zameen par phek te hue gusse mein chillate hue kahete haai"toh aur kya karta main unhe yeh baatata deta ke unke dad ko office se nikal diya gaya haai unhe aapne 30 saal ke job se hamesha hamesha ke liye chutti de diya gaya haai" kamal jee ke muh se baat sunke sangeeta jee gets totally shocked woh kaml jee ke taraff dekh ke pucchte haai"par kun kiya aasa unhone kya kiya tha aapne?" ab sangeeta jee baat sunke kaml jee aapne haalat par thora muskurate hue kahete hai"tum jaanan chahate ho naa ke unhone aasa kun kiya toh sunno

 

 
 
 
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aaj subhe main jab office pohochha tab mere jaate he humare ofice ke peon ne aake mujhse kaha ke humare boss yani ke raj sir ne mujhe aapne cabin mein bulaya haai main har roz ke tara accounts ke sab details leekar unke cabin mein gaya tab raj sir ke sectratary mala jee ne mujhe ek letter dete hue kaha"mr alluwalia aapko kal se office aane ke koi zarurat nahin haai u r dismissed from this office "mala jee ke muh se yeh baat sunke mere toh pure duniya he ghum gaye mujhe samajh mein nahin aa raha tha ke aakhir mere kon se galati ke liye unhone mujhe nikal diya haai main unse unke is faisle ke waaja jaane ke liye puccha"sir par mainne kya kiya haai ?"lekin jaise ke mainne tumhe pahele he baataya tha humare raj sir ke liye emotions feeling koi maainne nahin rakhte haai unhone ne mere baato pura ignore karte hue kaha"mr alluwalia as i am the boss of this company i dont think i need to give u any explanation for my decision "main bhi aur baat ko aage na barate hue chup chap aapna dismission letter leeke waha se nikal gaya aur chor diya us office ko jaaha mainne aapne zindage ke 30 saal beetaye the"kamal jee aapne dukh bhare aasuo aur dard ke saath aapne baat ko khatam karte haai
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
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kamal jee ke toh aapne dukh aur dard ko aapne aasuo ke sahara bayan kar dete haai lekin unke yeh sab baatein sunke sangeeta jee ka mann dukh aur pareshani se gher jaata haai dukh tha is baat ke kamal jee jo ke hamesha aapne kaam ko pujte haai aapne office ko aapna sab kuch maante haai aaj unhe bina koi kasoor kiye he us office se nikal diya gaya haai aur pareshan isliye the ke ab jab kamal jee ke nokri ke chali gaye haai tab unhe yeh ghar bhi khali karna parega kunki yeh ghar unhe office ke taraff se as a quater mila tha ab aapne teeno betio ko leekar woh kaha jaaye kya kare yeh soch soch ke kamal jee aur sangeeta jee dono ka dil he kaamp utthta haai unhe kuch bhi samajh mein nahin aa raha the ke woh log kya kare kaise aapne baccho ko is tabahe se bacchaye
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
ek taraff jaaha sangeeta jee aur kamal jee aapne baccho ke waja se fikarmand the wohi dusre taraff zindage mein pahele bar aapne papa se jhooth bolne ke liye naina was feeling very guilty usse bar bar aapne mann mein yeh baat sata rahe the ke jis papa ko woh bhaagwan maante haai aaj unhe ko usne dhoka diya she was not able to sleep bcoz of her guilt
 
 
 
 
 
 
aase he alluwalia house mein aaj ka din jo suru hua tha khushio ke saath lekin khatam hote dukh aur gham ke saath
 
 
 
 
 
 
aagle din subhe sangeeta jee aapne sare dard aur pareshani ko aapne ander dabaate hue har roz ke tara sab ke liye kitchen mein nasta bana rahe hote haai jab naina unke pass aate haai aur thore ghabbrate hue aapne ma ko pucchte haai"mama kal raat papa ko kya hua tha woh aase utth ke kun chale gaye ?"ab sangeeta jee jo ke itne der se aapne ander aapne dukh aur pareshani ko dabaa ke rakhe hue the naina ke muh se kal raat ka zikar sunte he woh jaise khud ko samal nahin paate haai aur phut phut ke rone laagte haai
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
aapne maa ko is tara acchanaak rote hue dekh kar naina bhi bohot pareshani ho jaate haai woh sangeete jee pucchne laagte haai ke aakhir kya hua haai jis ke liye woh itne pareshan aur upset nazar aa rahe haai ?"aapne beti ke yeh baat sunke sangeeta jee aur khud ko na rokjhte hue naina ko kamal jee ke nokri ke baare mein sab kuch baata dete haai
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
aapne maa se yeh sab sunke naina gets totally shocked usse samajh mein nahin aa rahe the ke koi insan bina kisi ko koi explanation diye kaise usse aapne job se nikal sakta haai woh aapne papa ke uper kiye gaye na insaffe ka karan pucchne ke liye singhania industry jaate haai

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Posted: 09 March 2011 at 4:50am | IP Logged
Its really sad to see Raj doing something as ruthless as dismissing a trusted employee of 30 yrs....he shouldn't have done that...so now after knowing the truth,Naina is going to Singhania Industries....so its time for Raj n Naina to meet....lets see the dhamaka now...Smile
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Posted: 09 March 2011 at 4:57am | IP Logged
awesome update
loved it
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Posted: 09 March 2011 at 4:58am | IP Logged
awww OuchOuch........ dat was mean Raj OuchOuch.............. how cud he do that OuchOuch........... it  was really disappointing CryCry.............

lets see if this makes raj-naina meet WinkWink........... waiting for the fireworks LOLLOLLOL...........
continue soon TongueTongue

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Posted: 09 March 2011 at 5:12am | IP Logged
hey ria....am not getting pms......Cry
how could Raj do thisShocked..........although i want to hate him for this actAngryOuch....lekin raj se koi nafrat kaise kar sakta haiEmbarrassedWinkEmbarrassed....waise bhi agar usne kamal je ko nahi nikala hota, to naina singhania industry thodi na jaati......LOL
kamal jee se jhoot bol kar, naina really bahut dukhi thi...she is a great daughter.......Tongue
leki ye vaishali ki mystery khatm hi nahi ho rahi hai.....Confused
waise kahin raj ke emotionless, sadu attitude ke peeche bhi to vaishali ka haath nahi hai na..............Confused......i have a theory to postulate......dekho, vaishali kamal jee ki sabse badi beti thi......wo aur raj ek college me padhte the.......tab raj sweet, caring, etc etc tha......wo ek dusre se pyaar karte the......then something happened....and vaishali disappeared and raj became total gussa, arrogant type, and kamal jee kyon gussa hain, wo mujhe nahi pata.........Kya Theory hai..!!!!!!Cool
khair jaldi-jaldi raj-naina ko introduce karao....and vaishali ka sach samne lao...warna main soch-soch kar pareshan ho jaungi.....
Really Nice Part..........................Clap
Update soooon............................Smile
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PS:-------I recieved the PM...so pt.1 bhool jao....




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