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Posted: 11 June 2011 at 1:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by monikaseth

awesome , great , mind blowing , superb and lovelybaap re so many adjectives  ..raj ko dimaag aa gaya pia amazing thank you and sorry for late reply its nottt ok
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
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Posted: 11 June 2011 at 2:22am | IP Logged
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due 2 xm i din read it...

newys as well fab superb update ..luvd it...interesting track going on...do cont sooon...luv yaHug
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Posted: 11 June 2011 at 10:31am | IP Logged

aagle din subhe se he naina ko bohot kamzore se feel ho rahe the picchle kuch dino se uske saath jo ho raha haai uske baaja se she was not able to take care of her health uska mann toh bilkul he nahin kar raha tha kahin jaane kaa par woh jaante the ke agar woh ghar mein rahege toh uske bahenein usse us ajaan shaks ke baare mein pucch pucch kar uska sar kha jaayege isliye naa chahahte hue bhi woh aapne university jaane ke liye taaiyaar hone laagte haai

 

naina aapne kamre mein taiyaar ho rahe the jab tia uske pass aate haai aur usse taaiyaar hote hue dekh kar pucchte haai"dii aap ne toh kaha tha ke aap kuch din university nahin jaayenge phir aap taaiyaar hoke kaha jaa rahe haai?" par isse pahele ke naina tia ke sawaal ka koi jabba de paate pia waha aa jaate haai aur as usuall apne di ko tease karte hue kahete haai"are tiaaa tu bhi naa bohottt buddhu haai agar diii university nahin jaayege toh aapne secret aashiq se kasie milege ?"pia ke baat sunke jaaha tia zor zor se maazee leekar haas rahe the wohi dusre taraff naina ke taan badan mein jaise aag se laag rahe the woh aapne dono bahen ko chup karate hue kahete hai"basss bohot bol chukke tum dono agar is ke kuch aur kaha naa toh dekhna mujhse bura koi nahin hoga "aapne di ko aase gusse mein dekh kar pia aur tia dono ko he bohot maaza aa raha tha woh dono naina ko thora aur chirate hue kahete haai"thik hai hum samajh sakte haai aap aapne love life ko kissi ke saath share nahin karna chahate haai par diii aap khud he socheye humare honebaale jiju ke baare mein jaane ne ka haq hume haai ya nahin "aapne baheno ke yeh baaein naina se jaise aur saha nahin jaa raha tha woh sochte haai ke its useless to say anything to her sisters isliye aur baat ko naa baarate hue woh aapne bags leekar kamre se bahar chale jaate haai

 
 
 
par uske bahen kya uska picche itne aasani chor sakte hai mmm kabhie nahin woh dono uske picche picche neeche aate haai aapne baheno ko dekh kar naina gets really irriited woh mann he mann soch leete haai ke is se pahele ke woh dono phir se aapne sawalo ka pitara chalu kare usse nikal jaana chahaeye woh darwaja khol ne baale hote haai ke unke ghar ka bell baaj utthata haai bell ke awaz sunke jaaha sangeeta jee ghabbara jaate haai ke wohi pia aur tia ko aapne di ko satane ka ek aur moka mil jaata haai woh dono naina ke taraff dekhte hue kahete haai "looo aa gaye di aapke liye mornng gift "naina aapne baheno ke baato ko ignore karte hue jaake darwaja kholte haai toh dekhte haai ek admi driver ke dress pahen ke uske darwaje par khara hai naina jo pahele se he aapne baheno ke baaja se pareshan the ab subhe subhe is admi ko dekh kar she just cant cntrol her anger woh aapna pura gussa us admi par baraste hue pucchte haai ke woh yahaan kya kar raha haai ?"naina ko aase gusse mein chillate hue dekh kar woh admi toh ek dam darr jaata haai woh fumble karte hue naina se kaheta haai"mem memsahab hum toh yahaan aapko university chor ke liye aaye haai aap hum pe kripa kar ke gussa mat hoye"us admi ke haal dekh kar pia aur tia ka haas haas ke bura haal tha woh dono naina se kahete haai"di aap bhi naa jab dekho kranti ke mood mein rahete ho ab in ka kya kasoor haai yeh toh wohi kar rahe jo huamre jiju ne inhe kaha haai karne ko isliye plz aap aapna gussa choriye aur jaake inke saath aaram se aapne university jaaye"

 

naian had no other option left woh na chahate hue bhi jaake car mein baithe haai naina jaha rahete hai waha ke log laag bhaag sabi middle class haai unke liye itne barre car dekhna kisi sapne se kaam nahin haai woh log naina ko aase car mein baithe hue dekh ke jitna haairaan ho rahe the uttha he jealous bhi feel kar rahe the

 

naina jaake car mein baithe haai toh dekhte hai car ke seat par ek baara sa teddy bear rakha hua haai jis ke hand mein ek brand new mobile hang kar raha haai naina was really surprised to see the mobile woh us phone ko aapne haatho mein leete haai but before she could think anyhting more the phone starts ringing and the call was offcourse from raj

 

naina jo ke pahele se he raj ke haarkato ke baaja se pareshan the ab raj ka no dekh kar uska gussa aur baar jaata haai woh raj par chillate hue kahete haai"mr raj aap samjhate kya haai aapne aapko aapne mere liye yeh car aur yeh mobile kun beeje? "ab raj jis ne happy go lucky ka way aapnaya haai woh baare he cool ho ke naina se kaheta haai "toh kya tum dhoop mein us BEST bus mein travel karte aur haan rahe baat is mobile phone ke toh naina jee aapko phone kar kar ke mere finger ek dam suj gaye hai isliye mainne aap ke liye yeh naya mobile beejaa haai jaaha mera no free haai isliye aap bejhijhak hoke mujhe phone kar sakte haai "raj ke baatein naina ko bohot irritate kar rahe the uska mann kar raha tha ke woh mobile ko uttha ke window se bahar phek de par as the driver was near her woh aapne gusse ko aapne ander he dabbate leete aur aapna chahere par ek fake smile laake call ko disneccted kar dete haai

 
 
 
 
naina jaaha roz bus ya auto se college ate hai aaj usse aase LANSER se uttharte hue dekh kar college mein sab log ek dam haairaan the jo log naina ke friends the woh log aake naina ko car ke baare mein pucchne laagte haai aur jo log usse baat nahin karte the woh log aapass mein he wispering karne laagte haai yeh sab baatein naina ke mann ko jaise aur pareshan kar rahe the naina jo hamesha reserved rahete the jo kisi se zada baat nahin karte the aaj raj ke in haakato ke baaj a se uske woh image jaise ek dam kharab ho gaye haai usse yeh aur jaise saha nahin jaa raha tha woh ab yeh sab khatam karna chahate the isliye aur na sochte hue woh raj ko phone laagate haai
 
 
 
 
 
raj jis ko har pal naina ka khayal raheta haai aaj aapne phone par uska call dekh kar he was just overwelmed woh baare he excited hoke aapna phone utthata haai aur kaheta haai" haan bolo naina "naina jo ke hamesha raj ke awaz sunke ek dam chir jaate haai usse jo muh mein aata haai bol dete haai aaj ek dam shanti se usse kahete haai"MR raj main aap se milna chahata hu kya aap mujhse mil sakte haai ?" naina ke muh yeh baat sunke raj ke dil ke dhakan jaise uske dil mein samaa he nahin raha tha woh naina se kahete haai"offcourse bolo kaha milna chahate hoo?" ab naina mantaining her coolness says"kahin bhi aap decide kijiye " ab raj jis ke liye yeh koi jaashan se kaam nahin tha woh naina se kaheta haai that he will meet her in the "golden restrurent" naina bhi koi bahas na kar ke usse haan kahe dete haai

 
 
 
 
 
raj ke liye jaise uska sapna pura hone jaa raha tha uske khushi ke koi tikana nahin the woh  aapne manager ko sab intezam karne ke lie kahe ke naian ke liye gift kharidhne jaata haai par usse samajh mein nahin aata haai ke woh naina ke liye kya kharidhe woh idher udher dekhne laagta haai jab aachanaak uske nazar ek ring par paarta hai the ring so beautiful that raj cnat remove his eyes woh jaake woh ring kharidh leeta haai
 
 
 
 
 
raj jab ring leekar restuarent pohochta haai tab woh dekhta haai naina uska intezar rahe haai naina ko aase uska intezar karte hue dekh kar raj ke chehere par aapne aap ek smile aa jaata haai woh naina ke pass jaata haai aur kaheta haai"sorry naina i am late mujhe aanne mein thore der ho gaye haai par kya kare khubsurat larki ke liye gift leena bhi toh muskil ke baat hote haai naa "raj ke yeh flirtly baatein naina ko bilkul aache nahin laag rahe the woh raj ko tokte hue kahete hai"mr raj aagar aap ke yeh baatein khatam ho chukke ho toh kya main kuch bol sakte hu?"ab raj jo ke aaj bohot khush tha woh naina ke taraff dekh ke kaheta haai"i know naina tumhe mere baatein mera kuch bhi psaand nahin haai aur is main tumahre koi galti bhi nahin jo bhi mere waaja se tumhe sahena paara uske bad its normal par ek baat yeh bhi haai ke aaj main tumse bohot pyaar karta haai i love u from the bottom of my heart" raj ke aakhon se aasu baheene laagte haai
 
 
 
 
 
naina jo ke raj ke liye sivaye nafrat ke aur kuch feel nahin karte haai aaj pata nahin kun raj ko aase rote hue dekh ke usse aacha nahin laag raha tha she was feeling bad woh raj ke pass jaate haai aur thore jhikjhakte hue kahete haai "mr raj aap aase par isse pahele ke woh aur kuch kahe paate raj usse ek dam se hug kar leeta haai naina jisse raj ka ehsaas tak pasand nahin haai usse raj ko aapne itne kareeeb dekh kar bohot uncomfortable feel ho rahe the woh raj ko aapne aap se dur kahete haai"mr raj plzzz" par raj jis ke liye aapne feeling ko aur rokhna muskil ho gaya tha woh naina ke haaotho ko thamte hue kaheta haai " naina plz mujhe galat mat samajho par ab main tumhare bina ek pal bhi nahin jee sakta tumhare ehsaas tumhare yaadein mujhe har pal satate rahete haai mujhe is tarap is becchainne se baccha loo mujhe aapna looo naina plzzz mere zindage mein aa jaooo" raj ke aakhon mein aapne liye itna pyaar itne tarap dekh kar naina ke liye dil mein raj ke liye jo nafrat ke deewar the woh jaise pighalne laagta haai usse ehsaas hota haai ke raj se zada pyaar usse aur koi nahin de sakega woh raj ke aasuo ko aapne haatho se pocchte hue kahete hai"mr raj aap sach mein winner ho aapne mere dil ko aakhir kar jeet he liya ehsaas dila he diya ke aap jaise pyaar mujhe aur koi de nahin sakta i i love u rajjj i love u" naina ke muh aapne liye pyaar ka izhaar sunke raj ke khushi ka koi thikana nahin raheta woh naina ko leekar garden area mein jaata haai where he had made all the arrangements for this special evening

 

 
 
The decoration the arrangements were so beautifull that naina cant remove her eyes she just got lost in that atmosphere naina ko aase khoya hua dekh kar raj aacha laagta haai woh uske pass jaata haai aur aapne ghutno par baith kar naina ke haatho ko aapne haatho mein leete hue kaehta haai"miss naian alluwalia kya aap mujhse shaadi karenge will u marry me and become my better half ?"naina jis ke liye jaise aashman ke sare taare uske godh mein aa gaye the woh aapna sar hillate hue kahete haai"yess raj i will marry u"
 
 
 
 
naina ke haan sunke raj ko duniya mein jaise sab kuch mil gaya tha woh naina ke finger mein us diamond ring ko pahennte hue uske lips   par kiss karne laagta haai naina bhi uska pura saath de rahe the
 
 
 
 
they both were fully immersed in their kiss when raj heard a faint voice calling his name raj us insan ko dekhne ke liye jaise he picche murta haai he gets shocked


Edited by ronojoy_ria - 11 June 2011 at 12:33pm

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Posted: 11 June 2011 at 12:42pm | IP Logged

awesome upd 

so beautiful

loved it

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Posted: 11 June 2011 at 12:51pm | IP Logged
yay dis tym i m nt lateDancing...
woo awsum  romantic...luvlyyy...luvd it..do cont

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Posted: 11 June 2011 at 9:03pm | IP Logged
aww so romanticEmbarrassed awesome update..Clap
Plzzz update soon i wanna know raj kisko dekhke shock ho gya...Shocked

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Posted: 11 June 2011 at 9:11pm | IP Logged
Update was very good.
Naina does not want to stay home because he is frustrated by the constant teasing of her sisters. Everyone including her is shocked to see such a big care wating to take naina to her college. She gets further irritated to see that Raj had sent her a mobile so that he could talk to her. Finally naina cannot take it any more and so she decides to meet raj and give him a piece of her mind.
Raj is excited to hear that naina wants to meet him. He tries to make the best arrangements. Hope that this confession of their love is not just Raj's dream
please continue soon

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Posted: 11 June 2011 at 9:51pm | IP Logged
bful part ClapClap ... so finally raj did it Dancing ...
hope its not a dream CryCry...naina sach mein maan gayi na TongueTongue...
having serious doubts ...was it reality or just raj's imagination ConfusedConfused

continue soon SmileSmileSmile

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