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FF-REMORSE-~maaneet-~THREAD 2 (Page 107)

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Posted: 17 February 2011 at 2:14pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by komlika

Originally posted by FireSafireFire2

@kom- yep.. The amount of torture she went through... I am trying my beat to keep it to the reality then fairy tale... And yes there are men like this in this world! Cruel... Love to see there remorses... Wish I could... That's why I am typing it... Lol


ur right ............ i mean how can we even think about having happy ending......... the damage done by maan is beyond repair or reversible.......... i mean he killed her child.......... how can geet live with him ........ she will always remember the death of her child no matter what maan does........ its sad but its reality........ she MIGHT(im not saying she will) forgive maan for others tortures n pain he gave her ..... but she will NEVER forgive him for the death of her child........ CryCry

Totally agree with u..........if she forgives him for killing her child then i would say she is not a human beingCry

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when r u uploading next part.........plzzzzz update soon waitingCry

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Posted: 17 February 2011 at 2:18pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by FireSafireFire2

@kom- exactly my point. That's why she was in fear of his remorses. :) xx
But now.. :( xxx

i read the question "how can any1 think of a happy ending"

because if we r pretending that u'r ff is a real life of geet then yes every1 shud think about happy endings. 
life is very harsh and cruel to many. if it is made hell by some1 we dearly loved at any point of our lives...even if the flame of love was short lived but if it was true...then one can never find peace in knowing that the other person is in forever misery. coz deep down as long as they r in misery, u'll keep on regretting every moment of u'r life with them in the past. u'r past never lets u free.


geet didn't know anything but to love maan...and once she was done with him...everything died within her...it's not like she is best friends with the rest of the world and enjoying her other roles of life...no she died with what maan did. she'll never become alive unless and untill restored by maan and maan only. he gave her poison ..only he wud know the remedy....

anyways u r the writer...and then there million of u'r readers who think that maan shud be in an eternal hell and that wud somehow cure geet. though i totally object...bcoz this was never geet's dream.........maan killed the baby.....he deserves punishment for this
 but 
as for geet, there is nothing in this world that doesn't heal with time. ... only if there is a right potion to undo the poison itself.

i hope i don't get jotis and chappals...i guess i'm a humanist...believes in the inner strength of conscious. i think ppl can change for good.... 

and one thing..that surly ppl will point a gun at me for...plz stop saying "killed the child"..killed the unborn child is the right sentence. huge huge huge difference....... ask some1 who has lost a fetus in their first trimester of their pregnancy and then ask the mother who's kid died at age 4...yeah huge difference...don't put them in the same category plzzzzz


Edited by basicquestion1 - 17 February 2011 at 2:50pm

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Posted: 17 February 2011 at 2:44pm | IP Logged
Great update...Smile

now i can see the new turn in the story...!!*~
excitedddddddddddddddd....Embarrassed

update soon!!*~

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Posted: 17 February 2011 at 2:45pm | IP Logged

part 17/ 18/19

 

oh no how could maan be so cruel that he had his own baby aborted. Geet must be beyond feeling pain now.CryCryCryCryCry

 

I just don't know how someone can treat a person so cruelly.CryCryCry

 

god sam shot geet in the arm just to make maan realise that he loves her. I hope maan starts to feel remorse for all the cruelty he has given geet.

 

me so sad at the way geet is at the moment, she is alive but feels so lifeless.CryCryCryCry

 

All of geet's anger and suffering is coming. I don't know why maan is surprised by her behaviour after how he has treated her.CryCryCry I am glad that geet told him how she felt about the way he has treated her.  A big hug for herHug

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Posted: 17 February 2011 at 2:52pm | IP Logged
I am reloging. Brb! Hehe oh I am loving this arguments! What I have done with you all with my Fiction. Grrr me! Brb!
I really need to know all of yours vies BCs I have mentioned- ending is up to you... I will wright in my way.. The whole story... With no change but the ending... You lot will decide upon the story!
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Posted: 17 February 2011 at 2:58pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by basicquestion1

Originally posted by FireSafireFire2

@kom- exactly my point. That's why she was in fear of his remorses. :) xx
But now.. :( xxx

i read the question "how can any1 think of a happy ending"

because if we r pretending that u'r ff is a real life of geet then yes every1 shud think about happy endings. 
life is very harsh and cruel to many. if it is made hell by some1 we dearly loved at any point of our lives...even if the flame of love was short lived but if it was true...then one can never find peace in knowing that the other person is in forever misery. coz deep down as long as they r in misery, u'll keep on regretting every moment of u'r life with them in the past. u'r past never lets u free.


geet didn't know anything but to love maan...and once she was done with him...everything died within her...it's not like she is best friends with the rest of the world and enjoying her other roles of life...no she died with what maan did. she'll never become alive unless and untill restored by maan and maan only. he gave her poison ..only he wud know the remedy....

anyways u r the writer...and then there million of u'r readers who think that maan shud be in an eternal hell and that wud somehow cure geet. though i totally object...bcoz this was never geet's dream.........maan killed the baby.....he deserves punishment for this
 but 
as for geet, there is nothing in this world that doesn't heal with time. ... only if there is a right potion to undo the poison itself.

i hope i don't get jotis and chappals...i guess i'm a humanist...believes in the inner strength of conscious. i think ppl can change for good.... 

and one thing..that surly ppl will point a gun at me for...plz stop saying "killed the child"..killed the unborn child is the right sentence. huge huge huge difference....... ask some1 who has lost a fetus in their first trimester of their pregnancy and then ask the mother who's kid died at age 4...yeah huge difference...don't put them in the same category plzzzzz


i do agree with u to some extend......n.....respect ur POV......... but ur right i should have said " killed unborn child" .......n.......im sorry if i have hurt someone feelings........it was clearly unintentional.........
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Posted: 17 February 2011 at 3:00pm | IP Logged
i m liking it....... just like maan ignored geets feelings and emotions... he must be
punished for that......
but still i dont want a sad ending
end ma sb happy happy ker dena!!!


Edited by softly_spoken - 17 February 2011 at 3:10pm

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