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OS-- Lets talk

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Posted: 14 February 2011 at 12:03pm | IP Logged

OS--Lets talk

 

My first OS...I am not really a writer but just felt like penning this down as a closure to all those loops which were left unclosed in geet...its just a wish that they show something like this in the serial...I hope you like it and pray for it to be shown someday...would love to read comments!!!

 



I was lying on the bed ruffling my husband's hair while he lay there on my lap reading "India today"'


"Maan Sunday ke din bhi aapko kaam hi soojhta hai kabhi toh mujhse baat karliya kare'"

"Geet tum bolo na main sun raha hun"


I gave up, I knew he isn't going to start the conversation....and begun with what I had to say...."Maan mujhe aapse humaare past se related sawaal puchne hai, main kaafi din se aapse baat karna chaah rahi thi"'

Maan who was lost in the article about the rising trends in market looked up and sincerely replied "Geet why do you want to talk about the past, it is over and today we know what matters is our love for each other, rite??"

I smiled, he was amongst those who rarely uttered "I love you" and hearing it from him always made my heart leap but today I wished to discuss those questions and had made up my mind.


"Mujhe pata hai par phir bhi....par aapse kuch bhi puchne se pehle main aapko ek baat batana chahi hun jo aapko nahi pata"'He finally kept the magazine aside and looked up at me with questioning eyes..i continued " Aapko pata hai woh Mr chopra wali party, usme sach mein meri galti nahi thi...Sasha ne mujhe nahi bataya tha ki clients half n hour pehle aane wale hai aur us hi ne menu change kiya tha...pata nahi par use mere join karne se hi mujhse bahut problem thi and who saaree bhi mujhe tasha ne di thi ye kehke ki aapne kaha hai pehne ke liye...uske baad toh aapne dekha hi kya hua tha...us time maine aapko nahi bataya tha kyunki main jaanti thi ki aap mera vishwaas nahi karoge par sach mein'"

 

He dint let me finish and said "Geet I believe you..main tab apni feelings ko accept nahi kar paa raha tha isliye kuch bhi hota tha toh tumhe blame kardeta tha...Sasha aisa kar sakti hai mujhe yakeen nahi, agar main Munshi jee ka karzdaar nahi hota humaare saath itna lamba kaam karne ke liye toh use abhi nikaal deta, khair ab toh waise bhi who London office mein kaam karti hai toh mujhe use milna nahi padega...warna main usko zaroor iski sazaa deta"

 I had not intended to tell him so that he would punish Sasha and let him know the same....He smiled at my innocence and gave me a small peck on my lips'"chalo pucho kya puchna hai begum sahiba"



"Maan aap hoshiyarpur mein kya kar rahe the jab dev aur naintara waha aaye the....aur aisa kya ho gaya tha ki dev ne aapse paise maangne ki jagah ye raasta chuna??"

 

He thought for a while before answering me.."Geet aisi bahut si baatein hai jinke bare mein tumhe nahi pata...main un sab ke bare mein baat nahi karna chahta par tumhe andhere mein bhi nahi rakhna chahta.. Main waha apni maa ko dhundhne aaya tha'"

 

"Meri maa aur papa ka accident hua tha jab main 15 saal ka tha ushi area mein papa ki body toh mil gayi thi par mumma ki nahi aur mujhe aisa hi lagta raha ki who kahi na kahi hai, intezaar kar rahi hai ki hum unhe dhundhe...meri mummy papa khush nahi the saath mein ...papa ka meri nanny pammi maa ke saath affair tha aur maa chahkar bhi unhe meri wajah se chod nahi paayi....tabse hi mujhe laachar aur bebas aurat nahi pasand thi jo apne hak ke liye nahi khadi ho sakti thi...maine apni maa ko itni tafaa rote hue dekha hai ki ushine mujhe pathar dil bana diya...dev aur kamya mere sautele bhai behen hai jabki vicky aur annie mere apne par daadi ne hum sabko ek jaisa pyaar diya aur bada kiya....papa ki death ke baad pammi maa alag rehne lagi kamya ke saath par dev daadi se bahut attached tha aur Canada nahi gaya' "

"Dev bahut bigadne laga aur jab usne apni mann pasand ladki nayantara se shaadi ki toh aur bhi laaparwaah ho gaya.. Bada bhai hone ke naate main use sudharna chahta tha isliye jab woh bahut zyaada sharaab peene laga aur jooye mein haarne laga toh maine faisla kiya ki who ghar chodke chala jaaye shayad tab who apne pairo pe khada hona seekhega...mujhe pata nahi tha mere ek faisle se dev ki zindagi sudhregi nahi balki who tumhari zindagi barbaad kardega..sorry geet"



"Maan aap kaisi baatein kar rahe hai...meri zindagi barbaad kaha hui hai main toh sabse zyada khush hun...apke saath ne mere saare gile shikve mita diye hai aur main kabhi bhi apni taqdeer ko badalna nahi chahungi'"'I said grasping everything maan said and realizing the bond which man had with his family'

I continued'"Maan Vicky kaha ha..??"'His eyes flashed pain and almost got welled up with tears...

"Geet main vicky ke bare mein baat nahi karna chahta..sorry"

"Maan aap baari baari sorry bolege toh main naaraz ho jaaungi..aapko jab theek lage tab bata dijiyega'main toh umar bhar ke liye aapke saath huna"'I eased his forehead and planted a kiss there....he looked at me naughtily and pointed towards his cheek..I smiled and kissed him there too..


"Geet aur bhi kuch jaanna hai??"

"Haan maan bas ek aur cheez...aap outhouse mein kyun rehte the??"

"Main naintara ko behad napasand karta tha...aur uske saath rehna mere liye bahut mushkil ho raha tha.. isliye main outhouse shift ho gaya...jab maine dev ko ghar se nikala toh dadi ne gusse mein aakar mujhe bhi ghar mein aane se mana kardiya....aur isliye main outhouse mein hi rehta raha..par tumhare aane se sa badal gaya...main, meri zindagi sab kuch....tum meri pari ho" he looked at me and his eyes silently thanked me like always...



"Geet pari se yaad aaya....us chitthi mein kya tha?? Jo tum mujhe bata nahi rahi thi??Aur haan meera se bahut dino se baatnahi hui"

"Maan Meera toh USA chali gayi thi mere outhouse shift hone ke kuch din baad, uska wa dusra project tha aur usse India acha nahi lag raha tha"

"Rahi baat pari ki, pari jaanti thi mere dil mein kya hai aur isliye woh us din chali gayi thi...us letter mein usne mujhe apni dil ki baat batane ko kaha tha par main darr ti thi"

"hmm....toh sabko pata tha sivaay mere...kitna pareshaan kiya hai tumne mujhe" he said teasingly' "maine tumhe kitna bhala bura kaha phir bhi tumne hamesha mera saath diya, who dargah wala din hi lelo"


"Aisa nahi hai maan, jitna aapne mera saath diya hai uske saamne mera saath toh koi maayne nahi rakhta...dargah toh main isliye aayi thi kyunki main darr gayi thi ki kahi bhagwan meri aapki shakal naa dekhne wali baat sach na karde...us din mujhe apni zindagi mein aapki ehmiyat samahjh aayi thi"..

"Acha chalo bahut baatein ho gayi..ab mujhe relax karne do....Sunday ke din itni emotional baatein....baapre"

I got up to leave when he held my hand and pinned me to the bed...



"Geet main relax tumhare bina kaise karunga'"

I blushed knowing where this was leading to..my playful husband started with his morning session of romance and I was only glad to comply to the man who always had answers to my questions....my savior..my soulmate...my husband....



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Edited by maaneet_pisces - 16 April 2011 at 3:56am

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Posted: 14 February 2011 at 12:14pm | IP Logged
Lovely os

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Posted: 14 February 2011 at 12:16pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by tinu.jindal

Lovely os

thanx for appreciating... Smile
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Posted: 14 February 2011 at 12:47pm | IP Logged
so sweet..
loved it...
owsome..

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Posted: 14 February 2011 at 12:53pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by princess_xaini

so sweet..
loved it...
owsome..

thankyou :) glad you liked it...
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Posted: 14 February 2011 at 1:26pm | IP Logged
Damn sweet....

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Originally posted by Dhara_s

Damn sweet....

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