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Posted: 21 October 2011 at 6:17pm | IP Logged
nice part
but please don't you put Naina into coma now...
we have enough of them in the story...
First Raj's coma was enough and then all other things...
It should be winning on Raj's team and loss on Lala's team...
update soon

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Posted: 21 October 2011 at 8:09pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by nisha1984

nice part
but please don't you put Naina into coma now...
we have enough of them in the story...
First Raj's coma was enough and then all other things...
It should be winning on Raj's team and loss on Lala's team...
update soon
Hi nisha...thanks for commenting...
well...i'v no such intention of putting her in coma ...

You said you had enough of them in story...BUT THEY weren't there to have any melodramatic effect...

And well...you said It's should be winning on Raj's team and losing on lala's team...

But i dont want my writing to be another ghisa peeta bollywood formula(Hero always wins without any obstacles)...

I myself am fed up of the 'formula', and so i wont dare writing such boring stuff...


Do you really think a powerful enemy like Lala...who has defence ministry in his hand...who had guts to steal country's nuclear weapon..etc etc... Will leave someone like Rajveer and Naina ,who are threat to his very existence,just like that???

Isn't it very obvious that he'll do every thing in his power to destroy them?

And then i cant write like bullets doesn't affect these two or they are extremely lucky to get out of the mess before it happens...
That power belongs to one and only Rajnikanth !Tongue


I personally get bored by reading what is illogical and so i'll avoid giving such crap to my readers, AS MUCH AS POSSIBLE ...( I wont say what i write is the best...coz most of the times it might be nothing more than crap...but i honestly try to avoid it.)


And plus...Hard times brings heart closer...


I hope you got my point...


You know something, i felt great that you put forth that ...
 That actually gave me a chance to explain my mind...

Thanks a ton dear...
luv,
manaBig smile


Edited by Revolutionbreez - 21 October 2011 at 8:11pm

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Posted: 21 October 2011 at 11:21pm | IP Logged

Hi Mana

U gave a big shock in this part but it was overall a good update..ClapClapClap
your reasons r gud enough coz Lala is such apowerful politician ..he wont loose without fighting.How can he let the mere cadets win so easily..?
Once again the moment passed and Raj was not able to express his feelings for Naina..they talked abt everything except their love for each other.
Both of them know abt their unspoken feelings but now Raj will realize that every moment is precious and he shud not hide his feelings from Naina any longer.
It was expected from Naina that she wud not let Raj face that bullet..Raj was very much devastated with this..his sorrow knew no bounds.CryCry
Every1 is so sad with this sudden turn of events.
Aakash was trying hard to fight his emotions.his duty as a doctor always came first.Big smile
I hope Raj is able to bring his love back ..Smile
 
Bye
 
 
 


Edited by suhana.dixit - 24 October 2011 at 10:41am

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Posted: 21 October 2011 at 11:31pm | IP Logged
lovely part Clap...sweet simple part ko eventually melodramatic & happening bana diya LOLLOL... kitna sweetly chal raha tha  Day Dreaming... The "thanku-sorry " convo was nice Day Dreaming LOL...now Rajveer didn't expected that he will be missed so much...then i guess he is underestimating himself Embarrassed .humse poochoEmbarrassed LOL & Naina nice explaination of Captain Rajveer EmbarrassedEmbarrassedClap...


felt so bad for Rajveer  .Hug.. CryCry poor him...cant have a moment of peace & relief Ouch he was so broken as naina got shot Cry...


good to see his cadets & friends giving him the strength & support Big smile... boy really needs itSmileSmile

Get well soon NainaThumbs Up Rajveer missing u Cry

continue soon Big smileBig smile...& yes Happy Diwali to u & ur loved ones Big smileBig smile
"Yeh roshni ka tyohaar ... aapke jeevan mein sukh samradhi aur shanti laye "
Have a bright & prosperous Diwali "





LOL

Edited by -purnima- - 21 October 2011 at 11:34pm

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Posted: 22 October 2011 at 12:12am | IP Logged
Superb part Mana dear...

pls Naina ko jaldi theek karo...

Cant see Rajveer so sad...

Wl be waiting for the diwali update...

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Posted: 22 October 2011 at 3:06am | IP Logged
awesome superb update...
who tried to kill rajveer?
 

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Posted: 22 October 2011 at 4:46am | IP Logged
hello manaSmile
superb and emotional part SmileClapSmile
in all the fun raj senses the rough attitude of naina towards abhi and asked her  to forget and forgive abhi and tried to made her understand the situation of abhi at that time after this raj is helding himself responsible for all the torture and other non deserving punishments to the cadetsCry Ouch Unhappy
but naina assured him that its not raj's fault instead he was there in there blessingsClap Clap but again wrong timing pyaar kehte kehte ruk gayi aur doctor shalini ne bhi awaz de di unheDead LOL Wink
lekin ye kya tha raj ko koi shoot karne aayaShocked Shocked but raj ki jagah naina ko goli lag gayiShocked Ouch Dead aalekh , huda aur baaki sab ko bhi bohot shock laga lekin neelu ki wajah se aalekh ne sabko himmat di Shocked Smile Clap
raj ki condition kaisi ho gayi naina ko dekh keCry Cry Shocked aur ab wo coma main hai hope ki wo jaldi se thik ho jaeCry Smile Cry
continue soonSmile
shreyaSmile


Edited by shreyamathur_18 - 22 October 2011 at 8:58am

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Posted: 22 October 2011 at 5:15am | IP Logged
awesome part
great twist dear
waiting for Raj's call for his naina
plz continue soon

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