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Mere Saathi#2(RN):link to 3 thread,pg.149(21/05) (Page 3)

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Congratulations for the completing the first thread of Mere Sathi...ClapClapClap

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Hi Mana

Update was just perfect Clap and it suited the Valentine Day tooBig smile
I thought its Raj who will come to Naina but it was Gunny who end up being with her..Naina's pain was tearing Raj and he wanted to reach her but Chaubey didn't wanted him in any danger..He took the risk himself and gave the coded letter to Naina..She was too shocked at first but then she cudn't believe it after reading it..She was so happy..never she has felt more alive..she cracked to code too and Raj was so proud to b her mentor..
their conversation was full of pain and longing for each other..How they wanted to comfort each other but they had to wait for the right moment..
That masked man who went to meet BC was indeed Raj..
Naina was so happy to meet him in person..She cud hardly stop her tears from flowing..even Raj cudn't control his emotions anymore..
Raj was so happy to see that Naina clearly remember abt his favourite food and she brought it for him too.Smile
Raj was so shattered when he came to know abt the real culprit who was none other than his Mentor whom he respected and trusted above every1..
He was thankfull for Naina's support and love..He cudn't gave up without a fight and he cudn't let down Naina now..
I hope everything will b fine now...Smile
 
Pls continue soon
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Hi Mana..............


on the second thread of Mere Saathi.....

Tussi to chha gaye....................hayeeeeeeeeeee

Lovely update darling.... u have depicted the emotions of both Raj and Naina so well..... absolutely lovely and amazing..... there couldn't be a better continuation to LRL....u have done it so nicely...... I always wanted something like this to happen in the court scene..... and after reading your fic....my wish has been granted....

The love which Raj and Naina have for each other was depicted in a subtle manner,..... yet there were elements of high romance in them............ well done Mana...........so nice........... The way Naina proved herself to be a true protegee  of raj and the way she unraveled the code.... then the way she took care of him...taking his favourite food, tending to his wounds, then supporting Raj..... oh.....so lovely......... 

You have to do with this short comment..... short because the update was very long.... I can never write this long an update............(How u do it amazes me..........) and m going to read this part once again.....

Byee...
Take care.......
See Ya....
Natasha....

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PS: Forgot to tell you.... read thru a few replies and got to know of your name.............. WinkIts a nice name....Smile

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Posted: 15 February 2011 at 3:27am | IP Logged
nice part
loved it
plz continue soon

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It was a rocking updt............ClapClapClapClap.

each and evry dialogue was brilliantClapClapClapClap

the emotions were shown very nicely.....ClapClapClap

gr8 updt.........truly amazing.
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Posted: 15 February 2011 at 11:25am | IP Logged

Hey Mana

 

First of all...CONGRATS on starting a new threadClapClapClap

 

 

Coming to the update...it was FANTASTIC..FABULOUS...Dil kush kar dita tusi...A BIG THANK YOU for a wonderful part.ClapClapClapClap

 

Seeing naina crying so hardCry, Raj wanted to go and hug her...to tell her that he was alive and right there with her, but Bunty stopped him. He knew that he had to be cautious for Rajveer.. especially when Raj was too emotional to think straight.

 
Naina is surprised to see gunny thereShocked. Usse Gunny ki daant sunni padi for being so careless. He was worried for Naina's safety and did not want her to be wonder around in the night. Hearing about the threat to naina's life Raj can no longer control himself and so he sends naina his hand written message.

 

Bunty, Raj a pakka chella haiWink...he and not only disguised his and Raj's appearance but had also brought the flock of sheep to provide the perfect cover. He very cleverly gives naina the letter while mentioning the code that Raj used. And naina was afraid that if her expectations did not come true this time...she would not be able to compose herself.

 

But to her immense happiness...the letter was indeed from Raj..she recognised his hand writing immediately. but could not believe that her faith had finally been proved right...her Rajveer Sir was alive.

At first she does not understand the coded message that Raj had hidden in his letter but when Gunny mocked Raj for giving them any clue..naina forgot all her emotions and become Raj's best cadet who could not let her mentor down.LOL

 

She even mocked Gunny that only she could understand her mentor's coded message. And when she finally deciphers it...Gunny is left amazed at Raj's intelligence. He was very impressed with Raj. To lighten the situation he even admitted that no one but Raj would dare to be naina's mentor. Naina warns him not to call her Naina Ah Singh because yeh sirf Raj ka haq haiWink

 

On hearing Raj's voice on the phone..naina once again breaks down due to the joy and relief that had filled her heart. Even Raj gets emotional. Naina kept insisting that she wanted to meet him right away but Raj told her that they had to be careful and that he would rake Abhi's help. Naina forbids Raj to speak to Abhi at all cost. She does not want to take any chances this time and is afraid that once again Abhi rules follow karne ke chakar mein Raj ko phasa dega. Raj agrees to take Gunny help only after he would take naina back to the academy safely.

 

BC is shocked to see Raj. He is concerned about Raj's health...he has realised that Raj was innocent and this time he wants to help his ex-cadet. BC gives Gunny strict instructions to ensure Raj's safety. Approve

 

Raj wanted to meet his naina, and his wish came true very soon. Gunny being the perfect friend had brought naina to meet Raj. Raj is touched to see that naina ko uski pasand yaad hai aur iss liye who aloo ke parathe aur dahi layi hai.Embarrassed

 

Naina is worried about raj's health...she wants to heal all his wounds. Where as Raj is fussing over her safety and health. Both of them are only thinking about the other.

 

Raj is shattered to know that Lalaji has been behind all of this. He cannot believe that his mentor was a traitor and a murderer. He breaks down completely. Naina reminds Raj to be strong as they have to put up a fight in the court. She wants him to refuse his feelings for naina when Capt Salve would question him in court. But before Raj could protest..gunny comes and take naina away.Disapprove

 

Waiting to see ki kaise Naina aur uski puri ganga court mein sabki chutti karte hai...so please continue soon. Hope tum bore nahi hogi mera lamba reply padh kar.



Edited by dazzling_glory - 15 February 2011 at 11:26am

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