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PART 47 : 

 
Raj and the council returned back to KMA and nobody was happier than Naina and Raj, ofcourse !

 

They had missed each other like hell !

 

There was awkwardness amongst them...but still being near each other...being able to see each other itself gave them immense pleasure.

 

Shalini's nose was too strong to miss recent change in the air...

 

She could very well sense that Love was in air !!!

 

The sprint in Naina's walk and glee on Raj's face were too obvious for someone like Shalini to miss.

 

But she still had nothing much to do as Raj and Naina never seemed to do something like that...they were pretty ' in control '...just like before...except they were extremely happy now...!

 

On the other front...everything was going peaceful in the academy...

 

Maj. Nair being overtly burdened by the responsibilities after their recent visit, was not in a position to create any more chaos or problems for Raj and the gang for the time being.

 

Shalini, going by her nature, wasnt comfortable with the ongoing stability...she felt the need to spice up the things !!

 

 

ONE DAY...

 

" Baat Kya hai Dr. Shalini, aap kuch sad lag rahi hai?" , Raj asked a morose looking Shalini.

 

" hmmm...ab kya kahu? Dost dost na raha..."

 

" What???"

 

" Aur nahi toh kya...ab pyaar milgaya toh dost hue paraye..."

 

" Aap please explain karengi?", Raj asked frustrated.

 

" Arey waah...ab bhi aap humse hi explanation mangenge...!", she narrowed her eyes.

 

" Ah...well..doc..."

 

" Captain, am waiting !!!"

 

" Ab koi bhi baat aapse chupti toh hai nahi...toh fir aapko batane mein bekaar energy kyun waste kare?"

 

" Smart boy !!"

 

Raj grinned in reply...

 

" Waise Captain, kahi date wate pe leke gaye yaa nahi aap apni wife ko?", shalini asked in a low voice.

 

" Kaha Shalini...do u think asking her out is that easy? I mean...okay...we've confessed...but still...there are lots of silences...though...comfortable ones..."

 

Shalini smiled when a voice came from behind...

 

" Dost kis din kaam aayenge?"

 

" Chauhan saab..??"

 

" Raj !!! aap woh sab hum par chodiye...Naina aapke saath bahar jaroor jayegi..."

 

Raj shrugged...

 

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" Well Naina, You are a born leader.. like Naveen...! I've seen the way you organised those campaingns and all the planning you did to save KMA...and then the way you worked for Raj's trial...", Abhi remarked.

 

" Aisa kuch nahin hai...", Naina shrugged awkwardly, " Bhaiya is bhaiya...aur main toh..."

 

" Ofcourse not Naina...who better than me know you? And doc, you remember those Independence day preparations? Uss waqt toh tumhare saath kitna kuch ho raha tha...still you led your team very well !", Raj stated.

 

" Yeah...bahot kuch horaha tha...!! ", Naina glared at Raj, " Ek ore woh Maj.Nair mera jeena mushkil kar raha tha aur doosri ore koi aur mujpar spying kar raha tha !!! "

Raj understood and shook his head...

 

" Oh God ! Kya iss baat ka taana ab zindagi bhar deti rahogi?"

 

" Koi shaq?"

 

He smiled.

 

" Parr Raj...aap aisa kaise kar sakte hai...I mean...humne toh inki aankhein dekhte hi pehchaan liya tha ki yeh Naveen ki behen hai...aur aap toh Naveen ke roomie the...aur Naveen Naina ke baare mein kitni baatein kiya karta tha...phir aap kaise dhoka kha gaye?"

 

Raj felt like slapping Abhimanyu for making that remark.

Abhi abhi toh setting huyi thi aur yeh...huh!

 

" Woh issliye Chauhaan saab, kyunki maine sapne mein bhi nahi socha tha ki meri KMA mein Naveen ki behen se mulakaat hogi aur waise bhi main yaha mission par tha...aur Naina ki harkatein hi itni suspicious thi. And on second thoughts, I think jo hua achcha hi hua...otherwise main kaise jaan paata ki yeh Naveen ki behen hai?"

 

Shalini felt a hint of sarcasm in his voice and hid her smile sensing the fury... she felt she should diffuse the situation...

 

" Waise Captain,aap toh woh Independence day kabhi nahin bhoolenge...kyun?" , Shalini asked dancing her eyebrows.

 

" Kyun bhai? Aisi kya baat thi uss Independence day mein?" , Abhi asked.

 

" Arey Captain, you should have seen...kya hero ki tarah jump maarke inhone Dr. Ritu ko bachaya...!! Agar Cadet Ghai ki language mein kahe toh just like 'Main hoon na' ka Shahrukh !! Aur phir uske baad Dr. Ritu ke saath date...haii !"

 

Abhimanyu looked amusedly at Raj,while he nervously looked at Naina...seeing her straight face...he cursed Shalini under breath, " Ghar abhi basa nahi aur yeh pehle hi ujaad rahi hai! Yeh dono mera divorce kara kar hi damm lenge...huh !! "

 

" Dr. Shalini, it wasn't a date...we just went for a movie..." , Raj said desperately.

 

" Oh yaah...just a movie !! and then aap Dr. Ritu ne banayi huyi coffee peena chahtein the...time spend karna chahtein the...aur.."

 

" Shalini tum..."

 

"Wow doc !! This is a news!!",Abhimanyu said acting surprised," Captain Rajveer Singh Shekhawat aur flirt !!"

 

" Chauhaan...just shut up ! Aisa kuch bhi nahi hai...", he said nervously.

 

" Well...Captain Chauhaan, you see captain Rajveer ki ismein koi galati nahi hai...Ab agar aap bhi Dr. Ritu ko dekhke toh..."

 

"Bade bhole bane ghoomte the...aur dekho kya chupe rustam nikle ! ",Abhi added.

 

Raj was now really scared. Ek toh Naina was sitting expressionless...with a straight face...so he wasnt being able to make out how angry she was...

 

Naina though sitting quietly,without giving any expression,but was inwardly enjoying Raj's reaction...

his desperation to prove contrary...as if he didnt want all this to be discussed...NOT in front of her...

 

She smiled to herself.

" Shalini yeh sab tumhe kaise pata? ki meri Dr.Mishra se kya baate huyi?", Raj asked crossly.

 

" Female tendency you see...ek doosre se baatein share karna...especially about a...about a...'Date' !", she said laughing.

 

" Oh yeah...!! Was it 'sharing' or your nose for 'Gossip'????", he said, now furious..!

 

He was mentally cursing himself for going with Dr.Mishra in the first place...and then flirting with her...Hold on...!!! FLIRTING ????

' Was I really...', he gulped imagining what Naina must be thinking and wanted to hide himself somewhere.

 

" Arey waah!" , Shalini said , " ulta chor kotwaal ko daate ! khud flirt kar rahe the Ritu se aur...huh ! Even your Cadet will agree with me...isn't it Naina?"

 

Well to be honest, Raj too wanted to know her reaction. He was damn curious...about what she was thinking...and if he was not lying,then he was scared...!!!really...!!

 

" Well maam...uhh..flirting and all...mere liye flirting ke standards kuch aur hain...I mean Naveen bhaiya. ", she said smiling ," Agar unse compare kare toh Rajveer Sir toh bhaiya ke pairon ki dhool bhi nahi...bhaiya hi kyun? Sir toh Huda aur Abhimanyu sir ke bhi aas paas nahi aate..!"

 

Rajveer couldn't help but smile at that...

'Oh..! what a relief ! She wasn't angry.'

 

" Wrong number doc ! " , Abhimanyu said, " Cadet Naina hamesha apne Rajveer Sir ki hi side pe rahegi."

 

" Koi shaq...chauhaan saab?" , Raj asked,smiling broadly now...!

 

" Naina...you mean your brother was even ahead of Huda?"

 

" Oh yes !! He was biggest flirt of all times ! " , she said laughing.

 

" And doc ! woh sab aapka kiya karaya tha ! In fact aapne mujhe jabardasti film dekhne bheja." , Raj complained.

 

" Ofcourse not Captain ! Aap shart haar gaye the."

 

" Shart? kaisi shart?" ,Naina asked.

 

" Dr. Shalini ne mujhse shart lagayi thi ki agar BC ko woh uss Antakshari match me le aayegi toh main Dr.Mishra ke saath movie dekhne jaaunga. Aur BC... !! pata nahi...unhe bhi ussi din waha aana tha. Aur to aur gaana bhi gana tha?" , he said annoyed.

 

" Gaana?" , Abhi asked excited like a cadet getting some spicy info about his Princi.

 

" Oh yes Chauhaan...tumhe waha hona chahiye tha. kya romantic song gaa raha tha BC...!"

 

" Seekho Captain! Kuch seekho BC se..! Ek woh hai, jo iss umar mein bhi...aur ek aap! 'I can't sing..'..huh!"

 

" Well...BC aur gaana...that really was AN experience...", Naina said smiling.

 

" Yeah...it was. Parr Shalini yeh mat sochna ki main woh sab bhool gaya hoon. Tumhari uss harkat ka badla main jaroor lekar rahunga."

 

A mischievous grin spread across Shalini's face,thinking something. And Raj frowned thinking,'Ab aur kya?'

 

" Captain you know,aapki haar ki bahot badi jimmedar aapki yeh Cadet hai."

 

" What? Maam aap yeh kya...", Naina asked shocked.

 

" Kyun? Tum hi toh aayi thi na mere saath BC ke paas ?"

 

" Par maam main toh bass uss match keliye aayi thi...mujhe toh iss shart ke baare mein kuch pata bhi nahi tha..."

 

" Indirectly hi sahi...you have helped me a lot. Thanks Cadet.", shalini said smiling.

 

" par maam...main..."

 

" NAINA YOU??? Of all the people tumne mere saath aisa??? Huh!" , Raj said acting dissappointed.

 

" No sir...believe me.Mujhe toh kuch bhi pata nahi tha."

 

" So Raj,ab aap kya kehte ho? Agar aap Shalini se badla lena chahte ho,toh aapko Naina se bhi...", Abhi asked slyly.

 

' Ab sirf Bhagwaan hi tumhe mere haatho se bacha sakta hai Chauhaan..!', Raj thought.

 

" Bilkul...! Otherwise I would claim you as being partial...mujhe itne taane aur Naina ko kuch bhi nahi?"

 

" Uh..uuh..."

 

" Waise Captain Abhimanyu,aapko kya lagta hai? Captain Rajveer ko Naina ko kya punishment deni chahiye?"

 

" How about going for a movie with him?", Abhi quipped.

 

Raj at once looked up to him.

Abhi gave him a disguised wink.

Well...Raj really really liked this idea...!

He can happily give this punishment.

 

" Captain ke saath movie... Aur punishment????"

 

" Kaash Dr. Mishra zinda hoti..." ,Raj sighs ," Toh woh aapko batati ki mere saath movie dekhna kisi punishment se kam nahi."

 

They all burst out laughing at that.

 

" Toh done ! Naina ko yahi punishment milegi !" , Abhi said.

 

" WHAT???" , Naina asked.

 

" Oh yes! Aur BC ki aap chinta mat karna...hum sambhal lenge...infact kal toh sunday hai...uski koi jaroorat hi nahi hogi!!", Abhi said.

 

" Okay then...aap kal Naina ke saath movie dekhne jaa rahe hai. I hope you have no problem with that Naina?", shalini asked.

 

" Why will she have?" , Raj cut in before she could answer , " I mean...what choice does she have? Punishment hain...toh jhelni hi hogi na?"

 

Abhi had this urge to pat Raj's back ! He was certainly making a good progress!!

 

" Well...do I have any option?", naina asked.

 

" No!" ,all of them said in unison.

 

" Okay then...", she said faking sadness and then smiled.

 

 

In the evening...

 

 

Raj was pacing his room vigourously...

 

Abhimanyu was watching him do so frustratedly, when Shalini entered.

 

" Captain, yeh sab kya hai?"

 

" Don't ask !" , Abhi said ," Hum toh pagal ho rahe hai !"

 

" Doc !" ,Raj said at once ," You can certainly help me in this ! Aapko kya lagta hai? Naina kaunsi film dekhna chahegi?I mean...you ceratinly can understand a girl's mentality...!"

 

Shalini started laughing at this.

 

" Ek baat batao Raj...Aap jab Dr.Mishra ke saath gaye the, tab aapne kaise movie choose ki thi?", Abhi asked.

 

" Arey maine kaha kuch kiya tha Abhi? Woh khud hi movie tickets le aayi thi..."

 

" Raj you are impossible ! Ek ladki ke saath movie dekhne gaye aur ussiko tickets kharidni padi ! "

 

" will you cut that crap ! Aur woh movie bhi kisi crap se kam nahi thi..."

 

" Really Captain? Maine toh suna tha ki aapko movie bahot pasand aayi ! Yaha tak ki aap ke aankhon mein bhi aansu aagaye !"

 

" Doc main apni phuti kismat par ro raha tha...! Kaha socha tha ki koi comedy film dekhunga...hassunga, thahake lagaunga...aur kaha yeh Karan Johar ki film..."

 

" Raj, girls like such kind of emotional movies only."

 

" Captain, why don't you ask Naina herself?" , Shalini suggested.

 

" Right !! Dekha ! maine kaha tha na? meri problem ki solution aapke paas hi hogi...this Chauhaan is good for nothing!"

 

" Achcha? Beta Raj, yeh movie ka idea bhi hamara hi tha...kuch toh ehsaan maniye."

 

" Waha woh sab kehne baad aur MERI Naina se kabhi flirt karne ka jurm karne ke baad bhi tum zinda ho, issika ehsaan maano.", he said removing imaginary dirt off Abhi's shoulder and rushed to Naina's room, while Shalini and Abhi were left laughing at his behaviour.

 

 

CUT TO NAINA :

 

 

Naina was dusting her teddy bear...

 

~ ~ Knock Knock ~ ~

 

"Arey, yeh pooji market se itni jaldi kaise aagayi?" , Naina asked the 'Teddy', that Naveen had gifted her.

Pooja had been to market with Ali and her other friends were busy with something or other and so she thought it was perfect time to tidy up her cute little friend...

 

" Come in..." , she called unmindfully.

 

Raj entered to see a Teddy in her hands and she hugging and kissing it after caressing it's fur.

 

" Pooji tu market se..." , she looked up saying this and then..." AAP????"

 

She was horrified to find him there and that too when she was...

 

she immediately hid her teddy behind her.

 

Raj stared at her for a while with wide eyes and then burst out laughing !!

 

" My goodness, Nia !" , he was in splits !

 

Naina looked down embarassed, which triggered fresh peals of laughter.

 

" Nia...you...Teddy bear?" , he asked laughing.

 

" Issmein itna hassne waali kya baat hai?" , she asked annoyed.

 

" No...I mean...The determined and fiesty Cadet Naina Ah' Singh, playing with teddy bear..."

 

" I wasn't playing...", she tried to oppose.

 

" Oh yes, you were ! No point in denying that..."

 

" RV aap...aap yeh kisise kahenge toh nahi na?" , she asked slowly.

 

" Sochunga!"

 

" RV !!"

 

" Nia...you are so cute..." , he said unknowingly while laughing, and then looked mortified at what had escaped his lips , " I mean...uh...woh..."

 

" RV, aap yahan...kahi kal ka program cancel hogaya yeh batane toh nahi?" , she asked to hide her blush.

 

" Oh No...not at all...infact main toh tumse yeh poochne aaya tha ki tum kaunsi movie dekhna pasand karogi?"

 

" Mujhe toh koi idea nahi hai new releases ke baaremein...ummm...wahi chal ke decide karenge...what say?"

 

" Ya...sure...", said in a low tone as nothing was left to say and he had to leave...but he didnt want to.

 

" But still... I would like to know, what kind of movies you like." , he asked.

 

" Shahrukh ki films...and then...", she started.

 

" Oh you too like Shahrukh? I mean Pooja does,she told me once..."

 

" LIKE???" , she said excitedly , " I Love Shahrukh !!...you know..."

 

She was talking unmindfully, but a mysteriously smile appeared on Raj's face...Never before he was so glad that Pooja called him Shahrukh!

 

" Okay then...let's hope, koi Shahrukh ki film lagi ho...", he said smiling.

 

" Ah...RV, I'm so sorry...! Aap kabse khade hai aur..."

 

" It's okay Nia...chill. Achcha ab main chal..." , he couldn't complete as...

 

" NAINA !!! " , Pooja called her excitedly as she barged in the room.

 

" Dekh main tere liye kya laayi hoon?!!! Tujhe yeh kabse chahiye tha...hai na ?" ,she asked taking out a 'Tweety Bird '...!

 

Naina slapped her forehead in frustration and Raj again was in splits !

 

Then only she noticed Raj standing there.

 

" Sir aap?" , and she gave Naina a sheepish look while she glared at her.

 

" Well Pooja, I hope aapka yeh cute little gift aapki friend ko pasand aaye..." , he asked laughing.

 

" Okay ...ab main chalta hoon. And Ni..i mean...Naina, carry on ! " , he said pointing to teddy and while she looked down embarassed and he left.

 

" Pooji ki bachchi ! Dekh nahi sakti thi ??" , Naina asked twisting pooja's ear.

 

" Naina !! Aahh Aahh !!! Maaf karde meri maa ! Mujhe kya pata tha ki shahrukh yaha hoga? "

 

~~ KNOCK KNOCK ~~

 

" Ab kaun hai?" , Naina turned angrily but immediately calmed down on seeing Raj again, " Ah...I'm Sorry..."

 

" It's okay...", he smirked , " Main bass yeh kehne aaya tha ki agar tum chaho toh hum koi Animation movie bhi dekh sakte hai...I don't mind."

 

" SIRRR !! " , Naina shouted and he left laughing.

 

And then she blushed thinking all that happened when a hand rested on her shoulder. She looked up to see Pooja smiling at her.

 

Pooja sat beside her , " Dekha Naina? Tune ek sahi sms bheja aur Shahrukh ki ring tone hi change hogayi! Kya tune aaj tak kabhi unhe itna khush dekha hai?"

 

" Thanks Pooja. Main bahot badi galati karne jaa rahi thi. Pata nahi kya kuch soch rahi thi...Agar tune woh sab nahi kaha hota toh...parr ab main koi galati nahi karungi. Ab main unhe kabhi door nahi jaane dungi."

 

" Yeh huyi naa baat !", pooja said hugging her.

 

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Next day Raj was very excited and little bit nervous too.

 

And well...

 

Abhimanyu had to pay a big time for his wonderful idea !!!

 

His sunday was spoilt as he had to be there in Raj's room while Raj was completely turning his wardrobe upside down to select something nice to wear.

 

well...whole of his wardrobe was on the bed...!

 

 

" Chauhaan, what about this?"

 

He said showing a shirt...

 

" For God's sake Raj ! Ab bass karo !! Aap aise behave kar rahe ho,jaise aap film dekhne nahi balke ek planned candle light dinner waali date par jaa rahe ho! Just chill ...you are just going out for a movie !! "

 

" Aur Captain aap kabse itna fussy hogaye? Pehle toh kabhi aapne itna nahi socha? Yaad hai , I had to get you a jacket that day...", Shalini said.

 

" Dr.Shalini, I'm going out with HER...!!! ", Raj said exasperatedly stressing on 'HER' , " oh forget it...! Main bhi kaha apna time waste kar raha hoon...i guess...not just chauhaan but sorry to say, both of you are equally useless!"

 

And he carried on with his work while Abhi and Shalini looked at him in shock!

 

" KYA KAHA AAPNE ?? " , both of them screamed, " theek hai...hum bhi dekhte hai ki..."

 

" Areey arey relax !! ", Raj quickly tried to make up, " Ab aap dono bhi na...MERI baat ka bura maan rahe ho? Dekh nahi rahe main kitna...kitna..."

 

" Nervous hoon...", Abhi completed.

 

" Not exactly that...", Raj started, but one look from Abhimanyu and , " Well...actually YES. neways...am bound to be nervous...afterall am going out with HER !!! "

 

And Abhimanyu regretted his decision of helping Raj to take Naina out on a date...

 

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Naina was equally nervous. She was having butterflies in her stomach...

She chose to dress up casually...


He knocked at her door...and was stunned when looked at her...

 

Though dressed up in a simple floral long skirt with sleeveless top and hairs left open...she was most the beautiful site for him.

 

He was staring at her.

 

Naina blushed under his gaze...and clicked her fingers in front of him...

 

"RV???"

 

" Huh ?..oh haan...chalein? We are getting late."

 

" Yes."

 

" Toh main gate par wait karta hoon...tum jaldi aana okay? Warna kahi uss Nair ne dekh liya toh problem hojayegi."

 

" Okay..."

 

He turned to leave but stopped and, " Ah...Nia..."

 

" yes RV...?"

 

" Kya maine tumhe bataya?"

 

" Kis baremein?"

 

" ohhh !! Dekha...fir bhul gaya na ! "

 

" Kya bhul gaye aap RV??"

 

" I forgot to tell you that.."

 

" That??"

 

" That You are looking...beautiful."

 

and hurriedly walked away while she smiled shyly.

 

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The drive was silent.

 

Naina ko khamoshi bardaasht nahi ho rahi thi.

 

" Umm...RV !! kya hua? Aap itne chup kyun ho?"

 

" Kuch nahin...main soch raha tha,kahin tumne meri kal waali baat ko seriously toh nahi liya?"

 

" Kaunsi baat?"

 

" Woh...woh...dekho Nia maine keh toh diya...but please main nahi kar paunga..."

 

" Kya nahi kar paoge RV?"

 

" Please Nia...tum Animation movie dekhne ki zidd mat karna..", he said quite seriously and began laughing as Naina looked at him,shocked.

 

She was very annoyed at his constant leg pulling about her soft toys.

 

" RV !!! gaadi roko !! Mujhe nahi aana aapke saath !"

 

" Arey?"

 

" Kabse mazak uda rahe hai mera...main nahi jaa rahi hoon aapke saath movie dekhne.Please gaadi rokiye!"

 

" Sorry baba...ab nahi chidhaunga ! "

 

But she looked out angrily.

 

" Nia...I said Sorry. Achcha batao main kya karu,ki tum mujhe maaf kardo."

 

Nia at once turned, " Promise me ki aap mere Teddys ki baat kisiko nahi batayenge !" , she asked a like a small child.

 

and Raj laughed.

 

" Okay...okay...Cadet Singh ! Your secret is safe with me." , he said placing a his hand on his heart, and then shook his head at her childishness as she grinned widely.

 

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They both went to the multiplex and Raj was surprised when she chose to watch a comedy movie instead of a Romantic Shahrukh khan-Karan Johar one.

 

They had a blast watching that movie and Raj enjoyed her innocent laughter more than the movie.

 

When they came out , their stomache aching with all the laughing, Raj asked,

 

" Toh batao Nia, dinner kaha karogi?"

 

" Dinner?"

 

" Haan...ab jabtak hum academy pohochenge mess toh bandh ho chuka hoga na?"

 

" Right...well anywhere you say." , she said casually.

 

But Raj looked at her adorably at that...'anywhere you say'...these words itself reflected her trust...

 

" Ummm...there's a nice restaurant nearby. Let's go there."

 

And as they were heading for a jeep,

 

" Ah...RV...how about a stroll? ...I mean...if you don't have any problem...you said, restaurant is nearby so..."

 

He smiled.

 

" Why would I have any problem? Lets go..."

 

While they were walking, Raj was stealing glances of her while she was looking anywhere other than him.

 

Atmosphere was cold and chilly and he noticed that she was feeling a bit cold as she wore a cotton sleeveless dress.

 

Raj took out his jacket and in the meantime, Naina took out her long scarf from her handbag.

 

Raj smiled and shook his head, feeling silly; and as Naina looked at him she too smiled as she saw him taking out his jacket.

Their eyes met for a while and Naina quietly kept her scarf inside.

Raj smiled back again and gave her the jacket.She took the jacket feeling shy.

 

As they were walking silently...

 

" Nia, ek baat puchu?"

 

" puchiye..."

 

" Tumne Shahrukh ki movie chodke comedy movie...why? To tell you the truth, I was very apprehensive, ki tum koi emotional Karan Johar types film dekhna chahogi...you know..."

 

Naina started laughing.

 

" Arey ! Yeh kya baat hui? Sachchai ka toh zamana nahi raha! Main tumhe honestly bata raha hoon, aur tum ho ke..."

 

" Sorry..", She said controlling her laughter , " par agar main koi waisi movie choose karti toh kya aap chup chap dekh lete?kuch nahi kehte?"

 

He shrugged and she looked at him in disbelief.

 

" What? Tum batao...main kya kehta?Kaun khud hokar kulhadi pe pair maarega? I mean...biwi ki narazgi bekar mein kaun mol le?"

 

" Ha..ha...ha...VERY FUNNY !! "

 

Raj laughed, " No seriously...i mean you said you like those shahrukh khan movies...and..."

 

Naina smiled.

 

" Woh maine socha yeh punishment mere liye hai...aapke liye nahi." , she said mischeivously and laughed.

 

Raj too joined her.

 

" No, but i'm really curious...How come you know ki I would hate watching those emotional dramas?"

 

" Ab itna toh jaanti hi hoon na aapko?" , she replied, and he smiled.

 

" I just hope, aaj ki shaam sach mein tumhare liye punishment nahi thi." , he said and looked at her nervously.

 

" Kaash Dr. Ritu zinda hoti..." , she sighed.

 

" Kyun?" ,he asked getting tensed.

 

" Toh main unhe batati ki aapke saath movie jaana...", she said seriously and paused to look at his tensed expression and then smiled , " is such a pleasure ! I thoroughly enjoyed it ... Thank you so much."

 

" The pleasure is mine." , he grinned , " Maine aaj se pehle kabhi itna enjoy nahi kiya. Thanks for the wonderful evening, Nia."

 

She smiled as they headed for dinner.

 

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They placed the order and they waited for food to be served.

 

Raj was telling Naina about about the whole tour and their experience at NDA...while Naina too shared how cadets completely enjoyed their freedom under Dr. Shalini with Nair and BC gone away.

 

Unknowingly, their discussion again shifted to the topic...closest to both of their hearts...NAVEEN...

 

Soon the food was served.

 

While eating, Naina was constantly pulling his leg, using the very information he gave her about his academy days..

 

" Nia, i'll definitely take you for a shahrukh's movie." , Raj said all of a sudden.

 

" Ab maine kya kardiya?", Naina asked pretending to be shocked but happy inside," Ab kis baat ki punishment?"

 

" Nia !!! enough of pulling my leg!", he warned in mock stern tone, " mujhe aise kyun lag raha hai, tum dinner se zyaada meri kheenchai karne mein interested ho?"

 

" RV, kya aap kabhi galat ho sakte ho?" , she asked innocently.

 

" Nahi main...", and then reaslising what she said, " What????"

 

" Sorry !", she said giggling.

 

" Ek aur sorry ! par what's the use? 5 mins aur tum phir shuru hojaogi !"

 

" No, now pakka promise. No more leg pulling for tonight."

 

" Thanks a ton for your mercy !" , he said dramatically.

 

Now as the jacket was back on him, he was back again at his job, which he was doing since they left academy...

 

That is deciding whether to give her or not the pink rose, he has gotten for her which was lying in his jacket's inner pocket then...

 

" Kya hua ?"

 

" Huh? nothing...woh I was just..."

 

but he was cut by announcement made at the dance floor.

 

It was the occasion of 50th anniversary of an old couple...

 

There was a loud cheering and clapping for them, and amidst all that the couple cut the anniversary cake.

Then the wife narrated their story and told it was a love cum arranged marraige, and that they were warned by their parents and relatives that their marraige has very less chances to succeed...

 

" But 50 yrs and we are going strong ...", she gushed as the husband held her hand tightly, " And will be, till next life time..."

 

There was a broad smile on Naina's face as she clapped for them.

" Kya soch rahi ho?"

 

She still was looking at them and answered unmindfully, " When I see people like them, I feel like believing in love."

 

He smiled.

 

Soft music was playing and couples had ascended dance floor...

 

The anniversary couple's table was fortunately besides them only.

As they arrived on their table, she stopped staring at them.

 

Raj wanted to ask her for a dance and was about to ask when they heard the couple arguing.

 

The wife wanted to dance and husband was reluctant and was reminding her of their age.

 

The wife then got annoyed and started eating dinner without speaking another word.

 

Raj and Naina smiled at each other. Raj ordered for some dessert and while that looked at Naina who was looking at the old lady.

 

" Aunty ke liye bura lag raha hai?"

 

Naina was startled by the sudden question. She just shrugged and smiled.

 

Raj got up and Naina thought, he would ask her for a dance, but he turned suddenly and walked upto the old lady.

 

" May I have the pleasure?", he asked bowing in front of her.

 

" Me??", the lady was surprised, " but..."

 

" Please."

 

" sure..." and she placed her hand in his and walked to the dance floor.

 

Naina smiled.

 

" Aap itne achche kyun ho RV? koi itna achcha kaise hosakta hai? Shayad...shayad issiliye main aapse itna pyaar karti hoon...! koi apne aapko aapse pyaar karne se roke bhi toh kaise ?" , she blushed.

 

 

Here at the dance floor,

 

" So Young man, what's the reason?" , the lady asked.

 

" Reason??"

 

" Hmmm...kya main jaan sakti hoon, tum apni beautiful girlfriend ko chodkar mere saath kyun dance kar rahe ho?"

Raj didnt correct her...Girlfriend or wife, Naina was his..! And that's what mattered...and besides it was not safe to let this secret out...NOT to anybody.

 

" Ah...I think I wanted to dance with the most beautiful lady. Ab dekhiye na, aap iss umar mein bhi itni beautiful hai, jab aap young hogi, tab toh..."

The lady laughed.

She observed him as he looked towards the table very often while they danced.

" Hmmm. Bahot pyaar karte ho usse."

" Jee?"

" Beta, iss age mein bhale hi hamari aankho ki roshni kam hojaye, par andar ki nazar tez hojati hai..."

He smiled.

" Don't worry...you'd definitely get your happiness. It's a bride's blessing, you see, since today is my wedding anniversary."

 

" Thank you.", he replied smiling.

 

She was about to say something, when her husband arrived and asked sternly,

" You mind , if I dance with my wife?"

 

Raj stopped at once and was flustered.

 

" Ohho ! Yeh kya tareeka hua baat karneka?Khud toh dance karna nahi chahte the...ab koi charming young man mere saath dance kar raha hai to jealous feel kar rahe ho?" , The lady scolded her husband.

 

" Main toh..."

 

" Pehle usse sorry bolo, warna mujhe aapke saath dance nahi karna.", turning to Raj , " come beta, let's dance."

 

Raj not knowing what to do was just standing there, when,

 

" Okay I'm sorry...", said her husband, " Now, can I ?"

 

Raj smiled and handed him her hand and left the dance floor.

 

As he sat on the chair,

 

" RV,are you alright?", as he looked at her in surprise, " No...I mean jiss tarah woh Uncle yaha se gaye the aur jaise aapko ghoor rahe the..."

 

Raj laughed, " Yeah...unke andar ka husband jaag gaya tha."

 

She joined him laughing.

 

He stared at her for a while...and smiled indulgently.

Naina raised her eyebrows...

He stretched out his hand in front of her...

" Care to dance, Cadet Singh??"

She smiled widely and put her hand in his.

They reached the dance floor.

 

Pyaar ki yeh kahani suno

Raj and Naina stood facing each other… their gazes locked… She was lost in those intense eyes, and couldn't tear her gaze...

 

Ek ladka tha

Ek Ladki thi

He put out his right palm…silently asking her permission. Shyly she placed her soft hand in his palm.

 

Hoti Kya hai jawaani kya hai suno

 

He wrapped his arm around her waist and pulled her closer…closer to him… Never intending to let her go…

 

Ek ladka tha

Ek Ladki thi

Her hand was in his firm grip… she smiled shyly.

 

Woh bhi ek daur tha

Waqt hi aur tha

Jab woh the Ajnaabi

 

" Aise nahi, Cadet singh ! ", Raj said as she once again put the wrong foot forward...

 

It sounded just like their dance lesson in the desserted mess...when they danced together for the first time...

Dono Tanah Se the

Per woh kehte kise

Baat jo dil mein thi

 

And then there was no turning back !

 

They matched their steps with ease and perfected as they continued to float along with the music.

 

Pyaar ki yeh kahani suno

Ek ladka tha

Ek Ladki thi

Hoti Kya hai jawaani kya hai suno

Ek ladka tha

Ek Ladki thi

 

He twirled her around once and again brought her back to the cage of his arms.

 

Woh bhi ek daur tha

Waqt hi aur tha

Jab woh the Ajnaabi

Dono Tanah Se the

Per woh kehte kisi

Baat jo dil mein thi

 

He pushed her back once and then twirled her around him.

Her robe swirled with the movement.

He held her close to him once again and led her to match steps with him.

 

Pyaar ki yeh kahani suno

Ek ladka tha

Ek Ladki thi

Hoti Kya hai jawaani kya hai suno

Ek ladka tha

Ek Ladki thi

 

" RV...", she said , " You're very nice..!"

 

He was pleasantly surprised at the compliment.

 

Gumsum gumsum rehte the dono

Phir bhi dil mein kehte dono

Koi sapna hum bhi to paaye

 

She took a step backward… he followed her in her wake.

 

Ek din tute gum ke woh ghere

Jhilmil jhilmil aaye savere

Masum Badla Jaagi fizaaye

Woh mil gaye

He had turned her so that her back was colliding with his chest.

Gently he wrapped his left hand around her thin waist which rested atop her left hand.

 

" Why??"

" You saw that Aunty was sad and that's why you..."

A mysterious smile hovered on his lips...

" I saw her sadness in your eyes, Nia.", he whispered closer to her ear.

and Naina was the happiest girl on this earth !

 

 

Woh Khil gaye

Aur pyaar ho hi gaya

Jo chaha tha woh paya to

Hosh kho hi gaya

They swayed along with the beats with perfect rhythm and matchless moves.

 

Pyaar ki yeh kahani suno

Ek ladka tha

Ek Ladki thi

Hoti Kya hai jawaani kya hai suno

Ek ladka tha

Ek Ladki thi

 

She was facing him now… his closeness was having a strange effect on her… her breathing hitched as he pulled her closer to him holding her by her waist…

 

 

Holle holle ab woh deewane

Gungun gaaye dil ke tarane

sunsun jhoome saari hawaaien

 

Today she wanted to just dance away with him...forgetting everything...forgetting the world...

 

Dhadkan dhadkan hai bhehki bheki

Tanmaan- 2 chahat hai mehki

Sapne apne jaddoo jagaye

And for him...She wasnt Naina anymore...

She was Nia...HIS Nia...

 

Inhe dekhoge jo jaanoge

Kya hai nasha pyaar ka

Yehi sochoge yehi chahoge

Sang rahe yeh sada

His eyes caught the locket and the pendent tied around her neck...

He couldnt explain the feeling...

He felt, as if...as if he possessed her !

 

Pyaar ki yeh kahani suno

Ek ladka tha

Ek Ladki thi

Hoti Kya hai jawaani kya hai suno

Ek ladka tha

Ek Ladki thi

 

With a smile and a wink he pushed her back and made her dip right behind her.

 

Woh bhi ek daur tha

Waqt hi aur tha

Jab woh the Ajnaabi

 

Then he pulled her back into his arms

 

Dono Tanah Se the

Per woh kehte kise

Baat jo dil mein thi

 

With a last twirl he had dipped her on his left arm and they remained in that position for some time still looking at each other.

They came back to reality with the sound of applause.

Naina hugged him tight and whispered in his ear, " I love you sooo sooo much !!! "

Raj couldnt reply...

Looking into her eyes filled with pure and unconditional love and with so much of love brimming in his heart..he was too overwhelmed to react anything...

 

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DONE !!!


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A VERY HAPPY BIRTHDAY DHARA !!! May you get all the happiness in this world ! Have a rockking life ahead...muaaahhh !!!
 
 
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Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Great that Raj came back safe and sound and his and Naina's love story is progressing slowly!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile

Shalini is just too much and always one to stir up things!!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink

Naina still hasn't forgotten that Raj was spying on her!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

Poor Raj!!!!!Ouch Ouch Ouch OuchShalini and Abhimanyu are hell bent on teasing him and Raj felt ke yeh dono uska divorce karwa kar hi chhodenge!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue

With Shalini talking about his date with Ritu in front of his wife, obviously Raj was scared!!!!!Ouch Ouch Ouch Ouch Ouch Ouch

Naina, as always, is on Raj's side even in this!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile Smile

Navin may have been a flirt but he was far better than Huda and Abhimanyu!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile

He was a gentleman and a great person and friend!!!!Clap Clap Clap Clap

So as a punishment Naina has to go on a movie date with Raj and I am sure it's a punishment she loves!!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink Smile Smile Smile Smile

Waise I agree that the movie Raj went to see with Ritu Kabhi Alvida Na Kehna was indeed crap!!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove

I loved Raj saying ke Abhi should be grateful that he is alive even after flirting with his Naina!!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Clap Clap Clap Clap

Raj is surprised to see that Naina still liked soft toys but then I am sure most women never grow out of their love for them!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile Smile

She feels embarassed for acting so immature in front of her husband but little did she know that he was overjoyed to see the old and innocent Naina!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed

Seeing Naina also loves Shahrukh Raj is sure glad that Pooja calls him Shahrukh!!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink Smile Smile Smile Smile

Pooja ko bhi Tweety bird leke abhi aana tha and that gave Raj a chance to tease Naina even more!!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

Raj isn't going on a date for the first time then why is he so nervous??Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue

She is his wife and she will love him in whatever he wears but still he is driving Abhimanyu mad!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Wacko Wacko Wacko Wacko

Raj is lost on seeing Naina and it was very cute when he complimented her and then hurried away!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Day Dreaming Day Dreaming Day Dreaming Day Dreaming

Both of them have a wonderful evening and much to Raj's delight Naina had chosen a comedy movie which he enjoyed a lot!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile Smile

It was funny when Naina takes out her scarf just as Raj takes off his jacket!!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

It is great to see Naina being prepared unlike typical heroines but even then she allows Raj to be the gentleman he is by accepting his jacket!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Clap Clap Clap Clap

Good that Naina is pulling Raj's leg now as turnabout's fair play!!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

Yeh Raj ek pink rose dene ke liye bhi itna soch raha hai!!!!!D'oh D'oh D'oh D'oh

Naina is touched to see how thoughtful and caring Raj is when he goes to dance with that Aunty!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile

Aunty was really interesting and it was funny when her husband got jealous and came to dance with her!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

The song is very nice and just perfect for them and their dance!!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile

Raj and Naina's dance at the restaurant was too good and very romantic!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap

Captain and his wife surely had a blast on their first date!!!!!Clap Clap Clap Clap


 



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Thanks alot darling for your wishes and the wonderful update !!!

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Lovely ClapClapClap

shalini never gonna leave pulling Captain's leg LOLLOLLOL... Doc se kuch chupana mushkil nahi namumkin hai LOLLOLLOL

Naina still didn't 4got TongueTongue captain was spying on her TongueLOLLOL

poor captain LOLLOLLOL ...doc & chauhan saab divorce kara ke hi manege LOLLOLLOL ...all the best rajveer LOLLOLLOL ...waise Captain thank ur stars that Doc doesn't know what happened when Dr.Ritu came to tell u about movie outing in morning  BlushingWinkWink

waise i wud love to have such a punishment captain LOLLOLLOLLOL

again SRK film TongueLOLLOL ...

hope both of them njoyed there outing EmbarrassedEmbarrassedBig smile... for once i thot Rajveer gonna break into song Aunty ji LOLLOLLOLLOL...





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