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||Abhi Nikki Writing Challenge 2|| (Page 66)

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Posted: 13 April 2012 at 8:29pm | IP Logged
amazing part pri cont soon

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Posted: 13 April 2012 at 11:06pm | IP Logged
waiting waiting waiting to see how their relationshp progresses ...
can we go a bit faster dear Embarrassed
 
I like how she has started to like Abhi and also her work , and its sweet how they are again out for dinner and she is pouting .. jo bhe hua so hua , abhi ko use phir saath lejaana pada ... thers no escape for abhi ...
so i hope he will be pacifying her ...Smile
par again i hope ke nikki falls for him first and u know ... ehhehehhe tries to sin him in some way ...


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Posted: 13 April 2012 at 11:44pm | IP Logged
Hey
 
This was  a great part and loved Nikki's internal conflict and then thinking if she has become selfish , trying to protect herself  (and him too , realizing he would never be able to understand her state of mind , because whe herself wasn't able to do the same ) by indirectly taking a dig or so it would seen , at his competency , only so that he does not come to know that she is aware of his past.
 
Briiliant psychological attention to the workings of the human mind , that was . Loved it and yes me too can't wait to see how this story progresses from now on .
 
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Posted: 14 April 2012 at 1:13am | IP Logged
waise they are caught in such a cute situation .. he has a fiance and cant like her and wanta to protect himself , she knows he has someone and cant really go close to him ...
hope this ff continues for a long time heheheh ..thers so much to explore in this ... infact it seems like it has just started ... at this point ...

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Posted: 14 April 2012 at 2:58am | IP Logged
Very nice update Pri, I loved it. Loved the way how Niki is finally falling for Abhi, loved the way how Abhi is himself confused, loved everything. So are we going to witness that cheapo Patil's entry here in next update? Can't wait, update soon!

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RES RES RES!!!
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Posted: 14 April 2012 at 8:44pm | IP Logged
@jyoti_cool: thanks
@mitzi: thanks. i am sure this feels so slow.. but when i had thought about this FF i had created outline for each part and intended to keep it short but fast upate but after few updates i just ran into too many issues with my laptop that i lost the pace.. i really wish to write more frequently but i may not be able to :( I dont want to say who is it first going to fall.. may be they both are in somewhere same boat but they have things holing them back
@pra: thank you. glad you could see where i was going with this one.. and may be you are right in how its going to impact esp N :)
@nehu: well if you see my past record i am just referencing the original scenes in some way so you wont see update for patil's entry but how it influences AN would be next one :)
@Khush: i hear your exams are over, so it isnt fair of you to just reserve :) come out now.

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Posted: 15 April 2012 at 7:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by anotheranfan


@Khush: i hear your exams are over, so it isnt fair of you to just reserve :) come out now.

Yes, they are over...been busy these days with going out a lot and friends coming over...

I'll find time and read, yeah. Let's see how soon I can un-res those posts!

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