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Farzu- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 14 February 2011 at 10:18am | IP Logged
I like Sakuu, Saki and Saks! Tongue

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Khushboo_AN IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 14 February 2011 at 11:58am | IP Logged
He calls me "K"? *raises an eyebrow* Confused 
And that's how we ask each other on a date...Confused Oh well that's how I am so I better get used to this...maybe I'll have to experience the same one day Shocked LOL LOL LOL
You got my character bang on, girl...I love the way you write me! Big smile
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE you made me watch my bengali showwwww!!! I love youuuuu I love my bengali showwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!! Embarrassed But the Grandfather betrayed me Cry He made the hero nearly cry, the poor thing Hug
Eena Meena Deeka as a love song? Shocked I love Preet!!! ROFL Hahaha he's awesome!!!
Uh...no, actually. Armaan is better than Sid. Why? Coz he's part of AbhiMaan Embarrassed And Sid is better than Armaan. Why? Coz he's got the Modi genes. Embarrassed Purr-fect! Wink
Uh huh...so Fuzzie almost got kissed. But she's not after Prem, right? I forgot Ermm
ROFL Kinshuk is hilarious ROFL
Sheila Ki Jawaani!!!! OMGGG ROFL I love this!
I had no idea Merry could flirt so well. *jaw drops to the floor*
Hmmm...so I got a lil confused, but maybe that's coz I haven't slept properly in a few days Ouch Yeah, so forgive my sleep deprived bakwas, I know I've eaten your head up.
But...I'm looking forward to the next parts. You post them soon! When I manage to read them, however, is another issue Wink
Lub ya Hug

Edited by Khushboo_AN - 14 February 2011 at 12:41pm

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Posted: 14 February 2011 at 12:43pm | IP Logged
haila already 13 PagesROFL

omg yesterday was only 1 pageROFL

i need to read it .......

Sabi- this is soooo sweeeet of you yaar...
love u.....

will read it sooon....

-editied- My 1st Comment-LOL

Edited by -Pooji- - 14 February 2011 at 1:01pm

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Khushboo_AN IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 14 February 2011 at 12:45pm | IP Logged
Oh yeah, and I edited my frist comment as well!
P.Kamaljit.Sean IF-Stunnerz

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Blushingi just scan the 2nd updt
omg me & jayROFL

and Preet saying PB Awww
u bringing memories back Sabi
i love PB Pb Pb

u know wht PB meansROFLPoonam BhaktaROFL
omg me & onu were datingShocked this was so unexpectedLOL
WhoaBig smile
oh boy i m loving reading it.....
Sanju dialogue was sooo goood Sheila sheila ki jaawaniROFL
Big smile
Bhangra & KenEmbarrassedwht a cute coupleEmbarrassed

mayank is frm MJHT right??? or mayank frm KyunkiLOL
oh pleez i hope it's Mayank ( Frm MJHT )Big smile
love the convoBig smile

aaaah love the friendship !
Nitya is soooo sweeetBig smile

ok back to me & jayuROFL
i love love u sabi love u sabiEmbarrassed
Jay & Me sceneEmbarrassed 
love u love u sabi.....

aaaah love it....Blushing
i don't have words to say it
but i took it all out on JayuLOL
I m speechless now sabi....

now me blushing so hard thank u sabi-
love ya.....

Edited by -Pooji- - 14 February 2011 at 8:21pm

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Farzu- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 14 February 2011 at 1:38pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Khushboo_AN

Okay so I'm done whining LOL But seriously. I hate our characters...and that's damned hilarious ROFL I dunno why. Basically I hate Valentine's Day...so I guess it all works well enough! LOL
Why on earth do you hate yours and Abhi's characters?!?!??
Sabi did a great job. I love your guys' LS!

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Farzu- IF-Sizzlerz

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Merry, you have got to be kidding me! Sid is better than Armaan? NEVER! Don't even compare the two missy," Farzana threatened. As always, Farzana wasn't in the best of moods. And this bad mood had lasted for awhile - over a month now.

AHAHAHAHA. I loved this.... Me and Maryam fighting over AM and SM! But Im right, AM is better than Sid! He's so dreamy *sigh*
Someone who looked ready to eat him alive, spit him out and then feed him to the dogs.
OH this made LOL so hard. I can just imagine my facial expression.... LOL

But Prem wasn't even paying attention to Farzana speaking. He was just staring at her, mesmerised by her beauty... by that fiery temper that made her look so much more alive. She looked nothing like the "dolls" they had at Kings' College, and he loved that about her.
Mesmerized by my beauty?? oo la la *dreams* Serioualy Sabi Im totally imagining all this in my fcking head right now and it looks so fcking dreamy! Day Dreaming

Prem! I love his name Embarrassed

He turned, and saw her smiling. What a smile...

"Yes Farzana?"
Farzana walked up closer to him. The smell of her perfume tantalized Prem's senses... the wind softly blowing her hair... without thinking, Prem pushed some strands out of her face. That face that he could continue staring at for all eternity.
I better have worn my Chanel Chance Perfume!!! It atracts all the men *wink* omg the hair part is sooooooooo cute Embarrassed Embarrassed

Farzana stiffened in surprise. What exactly was Prem playing at? He bumped into her... and then helped her... and now this? But something stopped her from brushing his hand away... there it was - that spark of electricity.

Her eyes closed, anticipating something... what though? Her mind was playing games with her... what would Prem want with her? But it didn't seem fake - what was he doing to her?
Anticipating a kiss? Oh yes! Tongue

Prem watched her eyes close, her mouth slightly open... those lips just looked so amazing. He inched his face closer to hers... he could feel her sweet, minty breath on his face... his lips almost touching hers...

And then he stopped. Jolting out of his reverie, Prem quickly walked away, leaving Farzana standing there wondering what had just gone on.
NOOOOOOOO ! Why did he leave me?! UGH -_________-  that was sucha beautiful moment! Oh Prem Prem... I love his character though Embarrassed 

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"Whoa PB. Why did you stop? What if she had wanted you to kiss her? For one of the resident Casanovas, you sure have forgotten your own teachings," said Preet.

Prem could still not believe that he had left Farzana standing there. What if she thinks I did this as a joke? Ah shit!
Ah Shit! Ahahaha that was funny. LOL

Preet watched his brother, and silently led him to the cafeteria where they met Ranbir.

"Whoa Prem. What's up with you? Did Farzana glare at you again?" he snickered. Preet hit his shoulder.

OMFG I love how all these guys think Im the meanest girl alive!ROFL 

Loved this update ! Everyones LS's are so good!
I love mine and Prem's especially. Ofcourse LOL LOL

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