A POISONOUS LOVE - Dark side of love |OS| - Page 2

Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow.......what a wonderful one shot😆😆😆 so romantic and yet so sad😭😭😭😭cant believe maan shote geet😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 so unexpected😭😭😭
 
No matter what sami........ happiness or sadness...... you always produce wonderful and outstanding piece of writing.......👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
 
truly commendable👏👏👏😃😃
 
Aaaah u dont have a valentines date........hmmm heres a gift from me sweety
 
 
 
 
 
Edited by aleena1 - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
Jeez! That was awesome! The concept was so different and beautifully penned. What a tragic end.....amazing nevertheless! Keep them coming.
Posted: 13 years ago
The was amazing but it extremely sad.....He did love her but his hate was stronger and how she watched him look at her over his shoulder i was speechless at that part....i cried so much...and how he punished himself because of what he did made me cry even more...And the song was beautiful but a tidbit creepy after reading this


But yaar this was too good
Posted: 13 years ago
omg the last thing anyone could have expected but great writing!
Posted: 13 years ago
As always, your writing just takes my breath away 👏 ....your one of a selected few authors who, i feel, have the skill and talent to do this so kudos to you 🤗  love you and may u never stop writing hehe xxxx
Posted: 13 years ago
awsome yaar loved it soo much
loved da way u wrote it 
lovelyxx!
Posted: 13 years ago
Awww
This was nice
Well written
She died lol
Posted: 13 years ago
OMGGGG wat a story....very well written..i am kinda speechless due to the shock tht maan killed her...so ya...but u are a talented writer
Posted: 13 years ago
OMG Sammy that was an amazing OS, I didn't know what was happening until the end and was totally shocked, don't know what else to say, totally speechless 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Posted: 13 years ago
Absolutely riveting!!
 
A very classy, dark , powerful and really good piece of reading!!
 
Who cares if its nearly Valentine's day .. and the OS is a tad dark .. i really, really enjoyed it!!

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