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Posted: 08 April 2011 at 3:38pm | IP Logged
Manita your Shantanu Khandelwal is simply awesome!!
 
Reading this update again, sigh am a goner today...
 
He is wicked, yet a big hug deserving, adorable, heart breakingly handsome, and sigh a very very lovable Budthal!!!
 
The chain was with him all times.. and she knew it too... And now that i see that he has tied her down to him, no matter what the world or family would say. So Khanak knows that she stands no chance here... as heart knows the language of the heart...
 
A song comes to my mind when I read this update..
 
Hum tum chori se..
bandhe ek dori se...
Jaiyo kahaan ai huzoor...
 
hai ayy.... this is what Shaan would be singing to Khanak... as she looks up into his eyes.. smiling her love, her life.. her heart to him...
 
Sigh Mani... I am enslaved completely by this update....
 
 
 

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Posted: 08 April 2011 at 3:57pm | IP Logged
ohk I need to tell you this....again....

you are an awesome writer di...i read it once more, a bit slowly taking in each little detail....and it left me in tears...

This one wasn't a sad update at all but still..I am all in tears

Love you!

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Posted: 08 April 2011 at 4:02pm | IP Logged
loved the update! it was beautiful Manita!

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Posted: 08 April 2011 at 7:10pm | IP Logged
oh ho..mani..luvved it..and thanks 4 this long long update....

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Posted: 08 April 2011 at 8:50pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Manita-

Originally posted by togepe30

No NO !! I prefer the 2nd option...

Longggggggg One.......

Did I piss you off?? I meant it all in good fun.......M not cribbing !! *muahz*



@ Bold -- yes you didCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCry........................


hahahahhaa........................lolLOLLOLLOLLOL.........................Maha - Nautanki..........nautanki mat kar !!
tu naa ho toh......... mere FF ki TRP half ho jayegi
LOL
LOL
 
woh toh mujhe pata haiLOLLOLLOL
luvvvvvvvv uuLOLLOL
will wait 4 kal ka updateLOLWinkWink

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Posted: 08 April 2011 at 9:49pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Manita-

Originally posted by Roshni_M

Hey mani Di...... 1St of all take loads of hugs from me....... Atlast sad parts are over...... And such a long update...... Wow!!!! This update deserves a big comment...... I'll Write a big comment on Sunday..... right now m little busy wit my books..... Exam is on Sunday and im damn scared..... Loved the update...... very nice.... Are you gonna update tomorrow also???? M asking coz tomorrow is Saturday and you usually update on weekends.... So just asked.... I knw im being greedy but Wat to do......WinkWink


All the best for your exam Roshni............*hugs*

No sweetie, I won't update tomorrow......this was a long one nah.........readers too need a breakWinkLOL



mani nooooooooooo..we dont need any breaks..but to give us another lovely lengthy update u need some break..so take it..but not too long break haan...
after posting this i saw that u r updating on sunday..waiting for the next update..vandu's suggestion was nice..but v dont want this FF to end so soon..so waiting for urupdate..


Edited by RB81 - 08 April 2011 at 10:00pm

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Posted: 09 April 2011 at 5:06am | IP Logged
Hi Mani

I had missed reading last 3 parts as I was too tied up

But looks like it was a blessing in disguise as I could not have dealt with the pain that Shanak go through

Read all parts today and the way you have described
from Shaan's letter to Khanak's reply
I am tongue - tied
take a BOW

I had tears in my eyes too

last part - thanks a lot dear for ending the misery
I know it is going to be all fun now
Shaan used to keep her away always
let's see how Khanak this time, tries to keep him away

you made it so interesting
I can't believe that it is an FF

this forum has awesome writers
how am I going to read all
I missed so much

Mani, thanks a lot for making them feel, behave, appear human and natural
no OTT behaviour
no pushing and pulling
no OTT sequences
pure human emotions

I am addicted to this FF
and I am so much in love woth this FF, in love with your Shanak
in love with your Shantanu

love you
Nishi

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Posted: 09 April 2011 at 5:26am | IP Logged
heyy manii.....awsmm........wonderful update..


Sry..last time cmnt nhi kar paayi..will edit my post soon..but dis time..i couldnt stop myself frm commenting..hehe...beautiful re....


U've expressed everything beautifully..
n i ws more excited than shaan..to knw tht..wts written in d letter..lol...luvdd every-bit of...........just wonderfull....


And d confusion part..hehe..
'confusion hi confusion hai..solution kuch pata nahi'..special dedication..coz their situation is smwat like this..lol!.....
Nw cnt wait moree....do cont sooooooooonn..!

Edited by shamasallfav - 09 April 2011 at 5:29am

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