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Yasharanrocks IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 2:17pm | IP Logged
nice1.its so short.plz cont soon..............

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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 2:32pm | IP Logged
hey ...

lovely Disapprove but made me sad!!!

And happy to see them so emotionally close after the incident ... ShaNak scenes at the end, hug in her house, kiss at the airport, everything was just perfect dear!!!!!

you are a terrific writer ... pls continue soon with a longer update :-)

~Cheers,
Dish

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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 3:12pm | IP Logged
I just read part 14 &15.....Loved them both ManitaClapStar.....
 
Part 14 was the first test I guess....After so many years Khanak would feel insecure about his sudden departure and Shaan let out some of his frustration....
 
Lesson from part 15....We don't have to think to much.....Love guides us and our actions....I think both of them are slowly letting down their guard....
 
Can't wait for the next part!Big smile.....

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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 7:02pm | IP Logged
Manita loved the update, hope Khanak's Dad is ok.

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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 9:06pm | IP Logged
hei manita,
that was simply superb update..i was asking whether they'll kiss in this update but both r really budthals n keep talking other things..always there is something r someone to stop them from kissing..the later part was really touching..shaan handled the situation very well..he gave khanak the comfort level she needed..so lovely shaan..finally khanak running into shaan's arms n kissing him..it was sweet..if not passionate it was needed at that time..hope nothing is serious with khanak's father..continue soon mani..cant wait long to read the next update..

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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 10:33pm | IP Logged
wow manita di .it is really awesome

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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 10:39pm | IP Logged
  one word...S U P E R B !

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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 11:18pm | IP Logged
Hey mani!!
 
Super nice update as always!! And seems like the story is taking a turn??
 
Why no pm???..could have missed it!
 
love, Simi

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