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The_May_Rose IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 12 April 2011 at 2:24am | IP Logged
Great update ManitaClapStar.....Liked the whole party scenario and the pendant added something special, to this already charming storyBig smile.....Plane romance was so ShaNak too!Approve....
Looking forward to the next partSmile......

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destinylove IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 12 April 2011 at 2:59am | IP Logged
manita u made my afternoon today  Smilefabulous.... fantastic..excellent ...superb....
  khanak runs for the seat near shaan ..so shanak like  convos ..I loved the full update..
I dont know how to express ..just wanted to say it was an extraordinary .episodeSmile.

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Hawa-Hawaii IF-Dazzler

Joined: 01 February 2008
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Posted: 12 April 2011 at 9:29am | IP Logged
wow....wht an update..!!
luved the plane scenes....so well written as always..!!!

dyin to read ur nxt update..!!

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shiksha_03 Goldie

Joined: 01 January 2011
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Posted: 12 April 2011 at 9:37am | IP Logged
wow what an update manita i luvd it..............................n after ages i feel shaan & khanak seem 2 b a little back 2 normal pls continue soon

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jparker IF-Dazzler

Joined: 11 March 2008
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Posted: 12 April 2011 at 9:42am | IP Logged
The most lovable, cute, sweet, sexy, adorable, beautiful, naughty, smart, hot, sweetheart is your Khanak and Shantanu is mwaa....
Kahaan se shuru karoon...
Yes first a nice slap to Rishabh... sweet tha, but too much tha.. gosh but he sure is a blaaber mouth, but loved him for bringing out the nice little prickly thorns in Shantanu.. tehehehehe... Rishabh go find a life and another Delhi ki ladki.. ShaNak are made for each other....
Sigh loved the little dolphin scene and their sweeet conversation together.. amidst the party... shows that they have this realtionship which can withstand all furies ... weather any storm...  and still float above everything and cross over each hurdle still remaining smiling and loving for the other...
Shantanu has this major job of trying to insinuate himself into her life.. all over once again.. and into ehr very soul. And he knows that he is in her very heart but has to convince her and hold her hand through this. Sigh promise that they are and will remain there for each other... no matter what.. through thick or thin, through sickness or in health.. forever... and henceforth it will be
No Tresspassers allowed.. in their life.. in between them...
Family might feel pain, but the sweet salve of their happiness shall be enough and then on will be love forever....
Beautiful Mani.. so so beautiful.. the strength of their love, their strength of belief and trust.. so strong are all these emotions these bonds that are strengthened... And you  have portrayed each emotion with equal strength and positivity.....
Loved her reaction to the beautiful chick who came.. hahahahahah.... mwaaaa... for their sweet interlude on the plane... WinkEmbarrassed
Shall now wait for this sweet n sour turn of events... am sure it will be chataakedaar as ever...
Yummyyyyy....EmbarrassedTongueWinkBig smile

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adventure_gurl IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 12 April 2011 at 9:51am | IP Logged
Manita  what an update, just loved Shantanu's  outburst and then Shanak nok-jok in the airport and plane, amazing!Big smile

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OlicityFan IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 12 April 2011 at 9:57am | IP Logged
Akshay and Rishabh!....
lovd the plane scene as well!.....
awesome update Didi...cant wait their collegeaus to see them ... ;)

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-shamima- IF-Dazzler

Joined: 20 August 2010
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Posted: 12 April 2011 at 10:04am | IP Logged
Awe that dolphin pendant was a really sweet gesture considering that it was his grandma and granddads lucky charm and hearing their story he wanted to give it khanak as he said there's no harm in trying and he sure does want to be with her forever but also has the trust that khanak would be with him one day and the dolphin pendant is something ti give him that confidense and awe when he told rishabh as he couldn't stop himself as rishabh was hurting his male ego and akshay already guessed considering shaan couldn't hide his expression from his older brother so he figured it just by adding two and two another thing that awed me was when he found out khanaks flight time and awe she couldn't resist especially when she saw the model she had to go and sit next to them and jus love their jodi they share something special and just cant stay away from each other knowing how much the other loves them and Khanaks theory will go astray and shaan knows it as he has that belief that they're just made to be for each other not share a a just friends relationship as no matter what they will always cross the boundaries of bein just friends anyways great update and csnt wait to read more Smile

Ps sorry di I know I realised I missed 3 updates as I fell behind in checking and when I did I already missed a few but don't worry I'm on track now and will be commenting and awe glad to know my comments where missed but really your ff is amazing thats why I love giving lengthy comments Big smile

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