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ohk I need to tell you this....again....

loved the update! it was beautiful Manita!

oh ho..mani..luvved it..and thanks 4 this long long update....

Originally posted by: -Manita-

@ Bold -- yes you did😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭........................


hahahahhaa........................lol😆😆😆😆.........................Maha - Nautanki..........nautanki mat kar !!
tu naa ho toh......... mere FF ki TRP half ho jayegi 😆
😆

Originally posted by: -Manita-

All the best for your exam Roshni............*hugs*

No sweetie, I won't update tomorrow......this was a long one nah.........readers too need a break😉😆

mani nooooooooooo..we dont need any breaks..but to give us another lovely lengthy update u need some break..so take it..but not too long break haan...
after posting this i saw that u r updating on sunday..waiting for the next update..vandu's suggestion was nice..but v dont want this FF to end so soon..so waiting for urupdate..
Edited by RB81 - 13 years ago

Hi Mani

I had missed reading last 3 parts as I was too tied up

But looks like it was a blessing in disguise as I could not have dealt with the pain that Shanak go through

Read all parts today and the way you have described
from Shaan's letter to Khanak's reply
I am tongue - tied
take a BOW

I had tears in my eyes too

last part - thanks a lot dear for ending the misery
I know it is going to be all fun now
Shaan used to keep her away always
let's see how Khanak this time, tries to keep him away

you made it so interesting
I can't believe that it is an FF

this forum has awesome writers
how am I going to read all
I missed so much

Mani, thanks a lot for making them feel, behave, appear human and natural
no OTT behaviour
no pushing and pulling
no OTT sequences
pure human emotions

I am addicted to this FF
and I am so much in love woth this FF, in love with your Shanak
in love with your Shantanu

love you
Nishi

heyy manii.....awsmm........wonderful update..


Sry..last time cmnt nhi kar paayi..will edit my post soon..but dis time..i couldnt stop myself frm commenting..hehe...beautiful re....


U've expressed everything beautifully..
n i ws more excited than shaan..to knw tht..wts written in d letter..lol...luvdd every-bit of...........just wonderfull....


And d confusion part..hehe..
'confusion hi confusion hai..solution kuch pata nahi'..special dedication..coz their situation is smwat like this..lol!.....
Nw cnt wait moree....do cont sooooooooonn..!Edited by shamasallfav - 13 years ago

OMG! Mani!! I was holding my breath all through..it was soooo beautiful!!

very nicely done...the whole aftermath....you know how to keep your readers happy..thats an art in itself and your writing is like cherry on top...

Hi Manita
Sorry for posting late was little busy wanted to read completely and then post
Finally completed reading the last 3 parts
Awesome updates 👏
Just Loved it 😊
Superb👏
Beautifully written 😊
Keep writing 😊
Thanks
Take care 😊
❤️
Krithika