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Daebak @Daebak IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 13 years ago

How adorable...

How very real...

I love how you are associating the ff with things that happen in real life...

Him forgetting to tell her about the trip......Her dad falling ill...

Its sooo cute how they are standing by each other....

Continue soon !

Luv,

Vandu

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deepali @-Deepali- IF-Stunnerz Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

Omg manita..aweosme and excilient update..loved it
just read last 2 part and its soo amazing and wonderful
you discribe all the feeling of shaan and khanak very well
very emotional and heart tauching part..loved it
looking very realistic and beautiful
glad to see shaan and khanak standing each other very well with cuteness
both are Burthal..jhagda bi karte hai aur pyar bhi.
waiting for next update..pl . update soon
ps:plezzzzz give me PM next time surely varna😉😉

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Manita @-Manita- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by Deepali88

thanks manita for update part15
why you not give me pm after update
i missed part 14 badly
will be comes shortly😆

Awww...............I'll start sending pm's again Deepali.......sorry was being lazy ! actually, I was sending to each and didn't know how to send bulk pm's😳..........I will definitely send them now onwards !!

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Yasharanrocks @Yasharanrocks IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 13 years ago

nice1.its so short.plz cont soon..............

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dishbhan @dishbhan Goldie Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

hey ...

lovely 😒 but made me sad!!!

And happy to see them so emotionally close after the incident ... ShaNak scenes at the end, hug in her house, kiss at the airport, everything was just perfect dear!!!!!

you are a terrific writer ... pls continue soon with a longer update :-)

~Cheers,
Dish

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The_May_Rose @The_May_Rose IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 13 years ago

I just read part 14 &15.....Loved them both Manita👏⭐️.....

Part 14 was the first test I guess....After so many years Khanak would feel insecure about his sudden departure and Shaan let out some of his frustration....

Lesson from part 15....We don't have to think to much.....Love guides us and our actions....I think both of them are slowly letting down their guard....

Can't wait for the next part!😃.....

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Sonali @adventure_gurl IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 13 years ago

Manita loved the update, hope Khanak's Dad is ok.

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Ramani @RB81 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 13 years ago

hei manita,
that was simply superb update..i was asking whether they'll kiss in this update but both r really budthals n keep talking other things..always there is something r someone to stop them from kissing..the later part was really touching..shaan handled the situation very well..he gave khanak the comfort level she needed..so lovely shaan..finally khanak running into shaan's arms n kissing him..it was sweet..if not passionate it was needed at that time..hope nothing is serious with khanak's father..continue soon mani..cant wait long to read the next update..

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