FF~Trespassers Prohibited #1~ Note : Pg 152 - Page 27

Thank you guys and everyone for loving part 9...reading and responding too...!!
I will thank all of you in detail after this part... I really loved all the responses and likes...

Thanks a lot !!!

once again I am nervous while posting this part...I really don't know if I justified their feelings correctly and explained their relationship...I am seriously nervous...!!

Story so far -- Plzz read page 28 and 32 for gist of story.
Part 9 -- is about Khanak's past where she remembers Shaan being her teenage crush and how on a Holi, they had come close and the news of Jai's accident came when they were about to kiss...

I am taking down the part --
Will soon write a gist that helps to understand the story 😊

Edited by -Manita- - 12 years ago

Did i ! Yes i m first to comment. Yay. But i am at a total loss of words. How do you write stuff like this man that leaves the reader dumbfolded . Lol technically my g c s was 11/15. Wit the eye and motor intact. Verbal 1. A week more for the next part to come. Gosh. Ps. My folks couldn let me live in peace for sometime so they got me to shift places. Seated crushed between aunts. Yet reading the update was something else . And why r you nervous. You ve woven such a wonderful story wit so much intricasy and intrigue. Love you mani. I ll comment in detail later:) Edited by priya_cool_123 - 13 years ago

oh manita,
tat was really a wonderful update (both the parts)..now i feel really sorry for khanak n am able to understand y she said no to shaan for his lunch invite..really i wish to know the story from shaan's perspective..i dont think the reason he gav is right..something might hav happened..if they r really in love n if they say it to their parents they wud b really happy i think..wish they both really express their feelings n be together..i felt emotional..awesome mani..its really bad that v need to wait for a week for the next update..
luv,
ramani
Edited by RB81 - 13 years ago

beautiful part manita luvd it bt felt realy sad for both shaan & khanak n pls update soon cnt wait for d next part

your shaan went from being my favorite to confusing me and himself in a single update....

Mannu di! ( can i call u that? 😊 ) 

hey Manita.............

Lovely Lovely part !!!!!!!!!!

hey everyone.....
thanks for responding.........won't say liking this time.....
as I get it that my nervousness was correct ..........
and my update did confuse you all..............or maybe put my FFs Shaan in not so pretty light.........
Awww..............please don't think bad of him......I hope next update will cheer you up.....

Priya, Ramani, shiksha, angel_9, saaaz, neha, Vandu..........thanks for commenting....
will respond in detail later........
love you all

Manita
Edited by -Manita- - 13 years ago

wowww manii....too gud update...