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@-Ray-

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

That was SUPERB mani. I was glued with my entire attention till the end, which I do for very few ff/os.....Its mindblowing👏

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shiksha_03

@shiksha_03

Goldie

Posted: 13 years ago

dis part ws brilliant n i m eagerly waitn for tom n pls reveal d whole past tom

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Ramani

@RB81

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Posted: 13 years ago

hai manita,
tat was a wonderful update..loved the convo b/w shaan-khanak..they r super cute as always..both of them admiring the other but at least i feel tat at times khanak shows wat she feels..but y shaan is keeping all to himself..really i'm thinking when will shaan let khanak know wat he really thinks abt her..and i really expected something to happen when they were close..Hate Zarina for coming at the wrong time..and i'm also happy that it was she who came n saw shaan with khanak..Oh how happy khanak was n shaan is clueless y was she happy..khanak said no to shaan for lunch..she could hav said yes..ok now as vandu suggested n 4m ur reply i think the flashback abt their past answers all these..

final thing,really u got locked in a washroom?but pity u,u were alone there..expecting ur next update n for the past of shanak..
luv,
ramani
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manjiri

@m4manju

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 13 years ago

i love the kind of bond these two share here...like we can't get along and we can't stay away either😆

the window jumping was really khanak types....she cld have done it definitely 😆 and poor Zarine....got a zor ka jhatka 😉 i so wanna see her reaction now 😆 wonder what's this holi mysteri? give us a promo na?(this isn't my idea...saw this in one ff on the other forum 😛) anyways loved this part..😊

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Amritha

@OlicityFan

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Posted: 13 years ago

cant wait to now abt the past!..

awesome epi and awesome update!....yay!

nyc one mani di....

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angel_9

@angel_9

Goldie

Posted: 13 years ago

hey Manita......

awesome update...............

loved the convo b/w khanak n shan.............

she stands on slab to jump through openinng.................😆............n shan calls her urgently...........n she is afraid that she will be scolded but he is concerned about her...........😃 very well described.............

loved the timing of zarine.................she opened the door😆 ..........n khanak is excited as she is free n shan wants to spend time with khanak n can stay in washroom ..........lovely😆

can't wait now ..........want to know their past................

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priya

@priya_cool_123

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Posted: 13 years ago

Ha ha mani wonderful is all i can say now . Stuck in a stupid place. Reading it from the mobile in the dark like a bed time story . Will give my detailed comment when i get back home

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