Rang Badalti Odhani

FF~Trespassers Prohibited #1~ Note : Pg 152 - Page 15

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Posted: 13 years ago
manita dis ws so so so so so so so so so so so so cute d way shaan was talking to himself & the way khanak said dat shaan had always been her crush & she was always attracted to him & wantd 2 b W*H him bt nw i m really eager 2 c wt hpns in the pub so pls pls pls pls update soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks to all of you for responding to part 5....

@ priya cool........thanks sweetie for so generous and amazing words😳........glad that you liked it πŸ˜ƒ !!

@ adventure_gurl ................thanks a lot sonali !!πŸ˜ƒ

@ shamima............thanks a lot dear and loved the detailed analysis !!😊

@ sayni .........thanks a lot !!😊

This content was originally posted by: RB81

hei mani,
1st of all thanks for updating..n thanks 2 ur day off..tat was a nice update..both shaan n khanak letting out wat they feel abt each other to themselves n khanak to jassi..i feel like y dont they both just sit n open up their feelings..ok..now i think something may happen in roxie's...hope u'll update this weekend..waiting for ur update..
luv,
ramani.


@ ramani........thank you so much dear.......!!
@bold .............since last 5 parts......she is trying to talk and open up her feelings.....but he is not allowing...and neither does he interact much............so they practically can't talk muchπŸ˜†

@ Vandu............thanks dear !!

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This content was originally posted by: krock

fantastic update love the way u defind the first crush .......................loved it shaan feels for khanak and khanak also for shaan but both r burthals yaar...................but loving it ha andplz some romance begging u


@ ankita .........thanks a lot darling !!
@ bold..........πŸ˜³πŸ˜³πŸ˜†πŸ˜†......

@ Krishna darling.........Loved loved your analysis and I have always loved the detailed comments .......it shows that the reader didn't sleep through halfwayπŸ˜†......thanks for noticing the tiny parts that I had included......you do this with 2 darling daughters and loads of commitments.....hats off to u !!

@ shiksha.........thanks a ton dear.......!!πŸ˜ƒ

thanks a lot everyone who read and pressed 'like' as it re-enforced the pleasure of writing.....
there is no fun in writing if people don't read or read but don't like.....
thanks for encouraging !!




Edited by -Manita- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful update.. like an everyday scene.. natural.. realistic!!
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But yeh dil maange more... Why do updates have to be so short?!πŸ˜­πŸ˜› This one left me craving for more.. more n more...😊
 
Lovely shall wait for the next update.. where they will of course meet again at the pub!! Ahaa...😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice one di..... love khanak-jas talks...such sweet buddy s they are :) gosh what will happen in that club? hope khanak doesn't get hurt by shan again .....😲 
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey manita...........
love the update
beautiful part...................
shaan likes her but want her to be distant n she is still obsessed with her crush............
awesome update will wait till saturday...............
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Manita
Lovely update
written so well Good job πŸ‘
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Posted: 13 years ago
Manii!!
 
Love yr style yaar..it flows and love this story too!! The crazzzy Khanak in love!! And the disturbed Shaan nice!!πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 13 years ago
Haila....slowly how you are revealing things....Khanak tho chuppi rustom nikli...

Update jaldi jaldi....

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Posted: 13 years ago
manita.... when r u updating...
-Manita- thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks a lot friends for the response......
the ones who posted after me......for them.....

@ Jessica - Thanks dear......glad u liked it !!

@ manju -- so glad that u liked the part. I knew that Khanak - Jas part will be ur fav...πŸ˜›.....and no I won't let him hurt her again and again.............piramise !!

@ angel_9 -- thanks a lot sweets !!

@ Krithika - thanks a ton !!

@ Simi - thanks a lot for reading and commenting !!

@ saaaz -- thanks dear !!

@ Priya cool - in a while !!πŸ˜‰