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Posted: 13 February 2011 at 8:29pm | IP Logged

Hey my lovely readers,

First of all, a big thank you again for the help and support.

This is the part 20 of my FF,

 Dil Ne Mila Di Jodi..

 

Hope you love this Part…

Sorry for the late update.

But had to change some facts.

Mostly on the confession.

Just finished writing so,

Plz excuse the typing mistakes.

 

Plz dear readers don't forget to

leave a comment.

My dear silent readers, Plz

hit the like button..

I love you all for helping me until this 2nd thread and

Hope u'll be with me for the next one too!

Love,

Pini..

 

Thread 1

 

Part 20:

 

Maan:

Maan and Geet had a good night. They slept on each other's arms.

Maan, who usually wakeup early in the morning tried his best to get off from the bed this morning but he failed.

He felt something heavy on his chest. He opened his eyes and yes, he the most magnificent scene he has ever seen in his life.

Geet, looking like and angle from the heaven was sleeping against his chest. Holding him by both hands and slit smile on her face.

She was dreaming something. Maan couldn't take his eyes off.

She was beautiful, innocent and gorgeous. He knew this was the feeling he felt on that day neat that river.

Her frighten eyes, her trembling body and shaking lips. 

He still could feel that moment. He has fallen in love with this girl long before yesterday.

Maan: Yes Geet. Until now, I didn't believe on love @ first site, but now I do. I have fallen in love with you from the first day.

That's why I always tried to stay away from you.

I needed some excuses and fighting was the only solution. I couldn't focus on anything since you joined.

Every time you come in front of my eyes, I forget everything. Even Myself and that's why I always pointed you fault to hide my feelings. 

He suddenly felt her movement and understood she was about to wake up. He quickly closed his eyes.

 

Geet:

Geet slowly opened her eyes. This room wasn't familiar to her. A dull white coloured room with white curtains, white bed cover, white,,, white,,, everywhere white… it's a colourless room.

Geet: Babiji, where am I, oh look @ this room… it's soo dull.

Then she remembered, oh this is not my room, either outhouse room. This is,,, god,, Maan's. Then she looked @ the bed.

There he was. Holding her tight, (arre, don't forget Geet, you are also holding him ah) and she was sleeping on his chest.

Wow, I am feeling lucky. Anyhow I was able to marry the person I really love and sleep on his chest.

Thank you babiji for not awakening him. Otherwise how am I gonna face him.. I always had fights with him now, here.. I am sleeping on his chest.

She looked @ him. He is sleeping peacefully. Like a little kid.

Oh! I love him… I loved him from the day he saved me. That was the huge feeling I had in my heart. Oh, finally I was able to recognise it.

Babiji, plz make him understand what I feels for him very soon.

I was able to tolerate him, ignoring me, fighting with me until yesterday. Now that I know I love him, so can't take it anymore..

Then she slowly get off from the bed before he notice her.

She didn't see that teasing smile on his lips when she stood.

 

Geet dressed up quickly and went to the kitchen.

Daadi: God Morning beti.

Geet: oh Daadi maa, I didn't see you. Good Morning. How are you?

Daadi: As usual, fine and waiting for my arrogant grandson to come down.

Geet: haha! Nice name Daadi. Btw, Daadi would u like to have some tea or coffee?

Daadi: I had my morning tea beti. Tum piyo aur ha, uss prince ko bhi dena.

Geet: Han Daadi.

Geet prepared a tea and a coffee. She had her tea and took the coffee with her to THEIR ROOM.

Geet: Maan, here's your coffee.

Maan: (……)

Geet: Maan, tumara coffee…

Maan: (…………..)

Geet: Hello, Hitler, Dhusht Dhanav, Bhoot….. have your coffee…

Maan: Kya kaha???? Hitler? Dhusht Dhanav? Bhoot?

Geet: Han, I tired " Maan" many times. But no answer… so thought to give this names a try.

Maan: Achhca, I have forgiven you. I will not ruin the first day of our friendship.

Geet: Haaa,,, side bathao.. u have no point to argue with me.. that's why u are forgiving me..

Maan: So, u want a fight..???? I am here, trying my best to control my anger to stop this fighting, but tum………

Geet: Achcha, chalo chalo.. jota kahike…

Geet left the Room. Maan looked @ her and smiled.

He went to the washroom to have a good bath. As usual he didn't lock his door as he has forgotten about his new life.

Maan Had a good shower and he rolled a towel around his waist. He was about to come out when they clashed.

Maan: Geet?

Geet: (…………….) She was completely taken back with his shirtless, wet body..

Geet: OMG! Look @ him… his body gives me goose pumps. OH babiji, yeh kya hai.. plz help me to restore my mind.. I am like blank…

Maan: Geet??????????????

Geet: Oh, he is sooo hot. Sneha ne tikh kaha, I will have to be more alarmed with Girls. If someone saw him like this, she surely will gonna faint.

Maan: Knew what she was thinking and where she was looking.

Maan: Madam? Mrs. Khurana? Geet? Chipkali?

Geet: oh …. Maan, actually I was.. mai.. who., yaha… tum.. yeh.. towel…

Gosh Geet, what the hell are you talking….

Maan: Mrs. Geet. Tum? Tum mere bathroom mai kya karte hon?

Geet: Actually Maan,,, baat ye hai ke… mai…. Actually..

Maan: Kyun Mrs. Bhak bhak,,, aaj tumari London express ko kya hua? Ruk ruk kal kyun chalthi hai? Han? Kuch ajeebh thing deka hai kya?

Maan was completely in his teasing mood.

Geet: Actually I came here to get the tissue box.

Maan: So, you could have get it by now, why are you still standing in front of me, staring @ my …… mh?

Geet: Maan, tume sharam nahi aathe? Eak ladki ke samne aise, sirf towel se….?

Maan: That's me… agar tum cha hei toh, mei yeh towel…

Geet: NO.. NO. NO… you don't have to worry … I will get the box and leave… Then tume jo chahai who karo…

Maan: Haaahaaa! Couldn't help himself laughing by seeing her frightened face…..

Geet: Pagal……

She left the Room and Maan was completely out of control and he kept laughing and laughing..

Daadi who was passing his room heard him laughing….

Daadi: Geet betim, tume lakh lakh sukar hai…

This is the first time I heard Maan laughing after his parents death.

Dev and NT also heard his laugh and prayed,

NT: God, plz help Maan Bhayya to live his life full of happiness.

Dev: Han bagwan, I heard his laugh after a long time. I know he was attached to mom so well. But thanks to Geet, he is smiling again…

 

Precap: Maan and Geet – First step towards love is Jealousy!

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Posted: 13 February 2011 at 8:36pm | IP Logged
awesome update dear........me first yipeee...........
the towel scene was very cuteEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

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Posted: 13 February 2011 at 8:37pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by puth

awesome update dear........me first yipeee...........
the towel scene was very cuteEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed


thank you dear!

Congrdz! u are the 1st! Clap

haha! towel scene, reference from the movie: Chalte chalte! lol LOL

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awsome update.
love it.
thx.

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Originally posted by shah10

awsome update.
love it.
thx.


thanks! Smile

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