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SS:NiVren...Scene 34 updated

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Posted: 12 February 2011 at 10:21pm | IP Logged
hai all...i just want to share some nivren scenes with all...we know currently viren is not ready to accept his love and treats nivi really bad...so i just thought to write some scenes where viren started to realise abt his feelings...these scenes may not be connected with each other...and i'm not good in writing such brilliant scenes...so forgive me if u find something wrong with my scenes...and hope u'll like my single shots...and i request all of u to share the scenes u want to see in viren's realisation abt nivi...
 
Part 1-page 1
Part 2-page 1
Part 3-page 1
Part 4-page 2
Part 5-page 5
Part 6-page 6
Part 7-page 8
Part 8-page 10
Part 9-page 12
Part 10-page 13
Part 11-page 14
Special Scene 1-page 17
Special Scene 2-page 17
Part 12-page 18
Part 13-page 20
Part 14-page 22
Part 15-page 24
Part 16-page 25
Part 17-page 27
Part 18-page 29
Part 19-page 31
Part 20-page 34
Part 21-page 36
Part 22-page 38
Part 23-page 40
Part 24-page 42
Part 25-page 44
Part 26-page 47
Part 27-page 48
Part 28-page 51
Part 29-page 51
Part 30-page 52
Part 31-page 57
Part 32-page 59
Part 33-page 62
Part 34-page 65

 


Edited by sana4kinha - 08 May 2011 at 4:36am

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                                                           Part 1

 
 
BS arranges a party in sood house to cheer up the atmosphere in the house....everyone gets ready to welcome the guests except viren.....viren is as usual not interested in all these and just sit in a corner of the hall....then BS's friend and family comes...and he has a hot and smart Grand son.....his name is gourav...BS introduces gourav to all..and asked YD...did u remember him...he used to come to our house when he was a child...now he is a successful business man in mumbai...Then Gourav wishes sid and just go to wish viren....he put his hand on viren's shoulder and said hello to him...viren wishes him back in an annoyed tone...gourav just stares at him...
 
 

 where is nivi.... BS asked VD..nivi is getting ready and I'll go and check her...said VD.....

Then she sees nivi coming downstairs..nivi wore a blue and silver combination net saree and looks exceptionally beautiful?..and then gourav and viren saw nivi....both can't take their eyes from nivi....gourav just whispered..gorgeous..viren felt uneasy....he don't know why..?

 
Gourav's mother veena asks VD..is this nivedita..?viren's wife?.no doubt why viren chose her as his life partner....she is so cute...if i have scene her before then now she will be my daughter-in-law...and laughs...VD joined with her..and said that our nivi is so special....CC try to smile at her words...and DD is jealous and makes her face...
 

Nivi just looks at viren..then viren turned his face from her...she feel sad...bt says to herself...i know viren....u cares abt me....bt u afraid abt losing ur mask in front of me....

And then BS asked everyone to join in the dancefloor.....divya,sid and others started dancing..nivi looks viren with a hope....bt he just walk away from there and stand with some of his friends.....         

 

Gourav notices that nivi is sad and standing alone in the party..so he want to cheer up her mood and he wish to dance with her..she says no...bt BS and others insist her to dance..BS said to nivi...beta.gourav and u r childhood friends too...then why don't u dance with him?.he is so nice?..and finally she agrees....
 

they start dancing...gourav try to speak to nivi while dancing....nivi I know there is some problems going between u and viren....thats why I wish to dance with her...nivi stared him with a questioning look....then he continued with a smile....u know nivi a husband can't see his wife be so close with any other man....u just look at viren...

Then nivi looks at viren...she is happy to see viren is noticing them from distance....and she try to smile at gourav and pretend to be enjoying his company....

 
viren becomes so posessive seeing nivi with another one and he is just irritated... for a moment he forget abt his aim to make nivi hate him... he unknowingly start to move towards nivi and catch her from behind..... and a hot attitude dance from nivren...nivi just stared at viren...bt viren continous his dancing with an angry look in his face...Then they hear the sound of clapping and viren just makes nivi free from his hands....he came back to his senses and felt uneasy when finds himself in such a state with nivi....he just looks at everyone and everyone is surprised specially sid....he has a confused face.....bt suddenly viren managed to make his angry young man's face again....then he looks at nivi and confused abt what to do next....bt nivi just smiled at him and said that ...Tum chahe kuch bhi bolo...farak padta hai....and she go from there left viren in a confused state..................


Edited by sana4kinha - 12 February 2011 at 10:42pm

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WOW, im speechless, plzzzz do continue...cant wait,pplllz continue..Tongue

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Posted: 12 February 2011 at 10:59pm | IP Logged
Wow sana.. U made d scene more beautiful than b4.. Pls continue soon..

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                                                            Part-2

 
YD,BS,VD and CC sitting in the living room....All r looking sad....then mere chaand  nandu comes there with an envelope.....he tells to YD....dadima ye aapke liye.....YD opens the envelope and a small smile appeared on her face.....my friend sudha arranges a pooja in her house....it is a mahapooja for 2 days...she lives in manali....she invited me along with the new brides in this house....this pooja is very imporatant for new brides....Then BS tells YD she shld surely go there and asks VD to tell nivi and DD to pack their bag.....Then nivi comes there and VD tell her abt the pooja...nivi is reluctant to go with YD bcz she dont want to leave viren alone...bt BS and VD insists her so much and finally nivi has to agree with their decision....And she said to them....ok dadaji..i'll get ready and leaves from there....Then BS said....bechari....it'll be a nice change for her....she needs some peace.......VD has tears in her eyes....

 

Nivi enters her room....viren is sitting in his thinking chair reading a magazine and gives lots of attitude to nivi...nivi try to speak him bt he is nt interested....so nivi goes to take her sarees from the cupboard and put them in a suitcase...viren just looks at nivi..his heart stops beating for a second when he thought that nivi actually going to leave this house...then nivi comes to viren and said that i have to attend a pooja and will come back after two days...then viren's attitude comes back...mujhe koi farak nahi padta....nivi looks at him for a moment and leave the room....

 

Its night....viren lying in his bed...he can't sleep....then he saw nivi lying next to him..he try to touch her...then she disappeared....then he saw nivi standing near the window and singing a song ....he ran towards her and try to hug her ....bt she is not there.....and he can see only nivi wherever he looks....and then he try to dial her number  bt immediately cuts the phone??.he is restless?.. and finally he asks to himself...what happened to me...why i miss nivi so much..?i can't live without seeing ur face nivi....what happened to me when u finally left me forever.....shaayad nivi teek kehta hai..mujhe farak padta hai....bt i'm helpless...i cant leave u....bt i can't live with u..bcz i'm bad.....he started crying like a child?.



Edited by sana4kinha - 12 February 2011 at 11:04pm

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Loving it more n more.. Big smile

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                                                       Part-3

 

Viren is sleeping...his face looks like a child.....viren is now going through  his usual dreadful dream......chota viren sat lonely in a corner of a room and crying..and all the other kids laughing and teasing him....he cried loudly and calls maa... aap bhi mujhe pyar nahi karthi.....and he pray to god pls send an angel in my life to change my life.......bt now there is a change in his dream....he saw the cute face of nivi....nivi sats besides chota viren and hugs him and said to him..i'm ur angel....dont worry..u r not alone.....Then suddenly viren wake up and sits in the bed looking surprised....he thinks..is this a dream....? nivi is my angel.....he cant believe what he saw...a smile appeared on his face.....
 
then mera chaand nandu comes there with a cup of coffee in his hand....viren said to  nandu i prefer strong cofee with less sugar...so pls bring another one...then nandu said to viren...nivi didi ne pataya ta...and this coffee is in ur style....viren sips the coffee...and thinks nivi u take care of all my needs..bt i always hurt u....and i'm not worthy in ur life...u deserves much better.....he has tears in his eyes......

 

he goes to bathroom...he stands under the shower for a long time to calm his mind....then he came to his room in a towel....then he searches for his favourite white jackets....bt he can't find it..he remember his date with nivi when they are in goa...he feels the hug he and nivi shares there.....then nandu came there with the jacket and said to him that it was taken by him for iorning....and he said to viren...bhaiyyaji aap bahut hot laag raha hai.....viren smiles and nandu shies and run away...LOL....

 
viren change his clothes and moves towards the door...suddenly he looks at nivi's photo...he feels something dragging himself towards her photo....he takes her photo and smoothly move his fingers on her eyes......nivi kab vaapas aavogi...i dont know what happened to me...i want to go away from ur life....bt i dont know why i felt like this.....viren standing there just holding her picture close to his face.....

 

Nivi felt the same in YD's friend's house......nivi can't concentrate in any rituals there.....DD surprised what happened to nivi..bcz nivi is specialised in all these pooja activities....DD calls nivi....nivi just startled by hearing DD's voice......Nivi looks at her and just leave from there...she is sitting in her room.....she just lost in her thoughts..viren.....i dont know when i started to love u.....now u means everything in my life....i never leave u alone.....i dont know what happened to me...i'm always thinking abt u.....viren kya tum mujhe miss karungi...pata nahi...kab aayega vo pal.....when u accept my love.....i know viren u love me...and i know u'll surely tell  me those 3 words from ur heart..and i'll wait for u..........and i'll prove u r not bad viren....u r not bad...she just whispered......

 

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Sana jaan.. U gave a gud detail of d dream.. Oh ho, nivi nahi hai toh nandu d bandu chance maar rahe hai..!!

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