for all , who have been complaining about short update......this one is a long update.......
Shan stands in a
garden, someone comes from behind and wraps her hands around him, Shan
instantly turns back, the girl moves
away from there'Shan smiles, he tries to stop her, holds her hand, says-today I
wont let u go away from me'.The girl slowly turns her face, gives him a cute
smile'Shan gets mesmerized with her
smile, her eyes, his hold loosens'the girl notices this, winks and runs
away from there...Shan searches for her, calls out her name-"khanak, khanak"..
Shan gets up, calling
Khanak's name. He is sweating'..he keeps his right hand on his forehead,
thinks- " aaj itne dino ke baad why am I seeing this dream". He gets down the
bed, does his morning chores and after some thinking, calls his sister, his
best friend, Ashka
Shan doesn't says
anything from the other side, except-"ashi'"
Ashka jumps in joy- "
Shan!! Dude, mere bhai''I don't believe this is you'I mean..where..how r u..no
calls nothing..did u ever remember u have a sister'."'she was going on and on..
Shan, was not listening
to nething from the other side, he just says- "ashi, I saw khanak"
There is silence of 1
sec from the other side'Ashka then asks- " how is she?..."
Shan- " waise to she is
fine, has achieved much success in her field, but I know she is not happy"
Ashka- " did she said
Shan-" no, we didn't
spoke to each other'par haan uski ankhon ne mujhse baat ki, kaha ki shantanu ,
I m not happy'.i still love u..i want to be with u"
Ashka- "Shan'did u said
Shan--. u know ashi'I was
so helpless that I couldn't even reply to her unsaid plea'.i wanted to asure
her ki khanak I m there,'''. par I don't know why, mere dil ki baat mere dil me
hi reh gayi, mere hoton tak pahunch hi nahi payi'.haan it did reached my eyes,
but she never looked into my eyes'.even
today she can't look straight into my eyes, kitna sharmati hai meri
khanak'.meri khanak'''"'tears rolled down from his eyes as he said those
Ashka- "Shan , control
urself..everything will be alright..trust urself'..and take care of
Shan wipes his tears-"
yeah'always trusted my fate'see kitna khush hoon main aaj(sarcastically)''...btw
Ashka- " offcourse, I m
happy'but sad for my little bro- now listen to me'.5 yrs ago, ur fate had made
u meet khanak, fall in love with her'now the same fate has brought her in front
of u'trust ur fate..but don't leave everything to it'fight for urself..ur
love'I hope u get it'''okk neways ..gotta go now..byee honey..apna khayal
Shan- " byee..ashi'"
Shan recollects the
last words Ashka had said'thinks to himself- " she is right'mere life mein aaj
tak jo kuch bhi hua'enough'.i will fight back my fate..for the sake of love'.
Now he was feeling
better after talking with Ashka' Though she was elder to him, she was more like
a frnd to him..he shared most of his problems with her'and she never failed to
give him the right advice'
Even the first time he
dreamt abt khanak, it was Ashka, who was the first to know abt that'
Shan was in his room
trying hard to convince Ashka about the dream he had been seeing since last two
days'but instead of taking it seriously, she was taking it as a joke
" damn it..ashi'I m
sharing such a serious issue..and u r taking it as joke!....just stop
Ashka trying hard to
control her laughter'" okk..okk.. but yeh to bata kaisi thi who teri sapno wali
bhatakti hui atma"
Shan- " what
atma.....dont joke ok'.yaar main do din se pareshan hoon' this girl is
frequently visiting me in my dreams, and I don't even have the slightest idea
of who she is'."
give u some options'tu bata yeh shai ho sakta hai ya nahi'"
Shan-" what options
yaar'.dont play kbc wid me okk''Ashi gave him a stare---acha chal bol"
Ashka sits on the bed and says- " option 1. She must be
a character from ne novel...which must have been mugged up by u'"
Shan- "ashi'I hate
novels'u know that'''.next option"
Ashka-" option 2. U must have seen her in any
movie--------kahin koi movie heroine to nahi.."
Shan-" no'I love
watching movies, but itna bhi nahi ki I start dreaming abt the heroines'..now
tell me ur next option'..and mind u it
should be the last one..ok"
Ashka now, comes close
to him, whispers to him'" option 3..kahin yeh tere pichle janam ki baat to
nahi'.bhootni'u know..bhatak''reincarnation'..before she could complete her
sentence..shan gave a angry glare and got up- "
look, agar tu meri madad nahi kar sakti to leave it'don't give ur silly
Ashka- " cool,my
sweet little bro..cool'''''.acha gimme
her description'may be I will try finding that mysterious girl'
Shan writes the
description on a piece of paper and gives it to Ashka
Later in the afternoon,
Ashka goes to a art exhibition, where though all of the creations were
praiseworthy, but there was one creation- a portrait which caught her
attention..She wanted to buy the portrait..she went to the reception to ask the
price, but was told that the owner of the portrait has refused to sell the
portrait and it was just a sample piece'But since she was adamant, finally she
succeeded in getting the details of the owner so that she could directly ask
for the portrait'She dials the person's number and managed a meeting at the
The owner of the
painting was none other than Khanak.. Though , on Meghna's insistence, she gave
her creations to the exhibition, but she didn't wanted to sell the portrait
becoz it was the portrait of her mother and she wanted to keep it to
herself..but now, because of constant pestering, she had to wait for an unknown
person..Finally Ashka comes'without much trouble, she easily locates khanak.
Ashka extends her
hands- " hi , I am Ashka Khandelwal'..u r the talented gem, I suppose'"
Khanak smiles, she
shakes hands-" yeah'that's me'I m Khanak Shah'.please have ur seat"
Ashka- " ooh
thanks'actually I should say sorry for bothering you so much'but I can't help
being carried away by beautiful things'.i feel all beautiful things should be
Khanak- " well..thanks
for considering my painting as one of the beautiful things'.but I would suggest
u 1 thing'.let beauty remain as it is-at its own place'don't try to own
it''..just admire them..don't try to enslave it"
Ashka- " u r right'but
what if I agree to pay as much amount as possible"
Khanak- " I m sorry'.i
can't fix any value for the portrait---its
precious for me'its my mother's portrait..i can't give it to u."
Ashka- " ooh, I m so
sorry'.i didn't knew that.."
Khanak- " its okk'so u
will have something.."
Ashka thinks for a
while, then says- " yeah'can u draw a portrait for me, now"
Ashka- " yup!...don't
worry for the paper and pencil, I can give u that'I just want something like a
lightly-" its okk..so u want me to draw your portrait."
Ashka- "no..no ..its
not mine..someone else'i can give u her description"
She takes out a paper
which containes the description of the person whose portrait she wanted'.In just
15 minutes, Khanak draws the portrait, but was herself shocked when it was
completed'before she could react, Askha grabs the portrait in excitement'now it
was her turn to get shocked'.at an instant, her eyes started fluctuating
between the person sitting in front of her and the portrait in her hand
asks- " but..this'this is ur portrait..ur face"
Khanak-" yeah..but dis
was the description u gave.".she gives back the paper..
Ashka looks at the paper..indeed
the description written there were same as the portrait..She scolds herself in
her mind for not at once reading the paper..she looks with blank face at
khanak, then thinks to herself- " ashi, get up from here..isse pehle ki she
asks something else..move..move ashi"..
She quickly gets up,
says- " khanak, glad to meet u..but I m sorry..i m getting late..so see u
Before Khanak could
even respond, she had already left, leaving Khanak confused- " strange'khud
mujhe yahaan bulayi'then kaha ki portrait banao , woh bhi meri khud ki'aur
phir just rushes away'has she come to waste my time"
Ashka sits in her car,
watches khanak coming out of the restaurant'she calls Shan..narrates him the whole incident..
Shan jumps in joy
listening to everything..
Later in the traffic,
Shan is with his friend, waiting for the green signal when suddenly his eyes
fall on a girl on a red scooty-it's the same girl of his dream'Shan calls for
her- "hello..hello mam"..
listens..instead, she drives ahead, Shan gets out of the car, leaving his
friend who was driving the car, confused..The green signal glows, leaving
Shan making his way inbetween the busy
traffic as the girl turns her scooty towards left'
Fortunately, even on that
road, the traffic was on standstill..forcing the girl to stop again'in the
meantime Shan crosses the road and spots a known person on a bike, he goes near
the bike'but to his dismay, its Bobby- who was actually a girl in disguise of a
Bobby, in excitement- "
OMG! I can't believe it..the most handsome hunk coming for me..ohh"
Shan, controlling his
irritation, and faking a smile- " yeah..actually I thought we should go for a
Bobby-" oh , my
pleasure'do sit on my bike..actualy I should ride a scooty..but I prefer
Shan-" yeah, yeah'but u
don't know 1 thing, since I m the guy..and u'..so I should be the one riding
Bobby-" oh yes! 'he
gets down..takes the keys- here it is ..hunk..
Shan grabs the keys and
before Bobby could even think of sitting on the bike, Shan starts the bike and
drives away, leaving poor Bobby shouting
for him and his bike..
Now Shan is on his bike
, following the girl'The girl is Khanak- initially she doesn't notices the guy
following her..but after sometime she starts feeling as if someone is following
her..Shan understands the situation, he cleverly deviates his way to avoid any
doubts'..Again after sometime , he catches up with the girl and starts
following her'This continues until she reaches Nerul station..She parks her
scooty in the stand'followed by Shan '
Now Shan starts
following her on foot..However this time Khanak looks back and is scared to see
the person'she says to herself- " hey thakurji, yeh to wahi hai----the psycho
drunkard..why is he following me'.nahi I should not look behind.."'.very slowly
she turns her face back to see if she is being followed'
However Shan being more
clever, understands that and starts behaving as if he is not following her at
boards the train to Vasai..Shan gets in
the same compartment-same coup..Khanak sits on by the window seat, suddenly
sees Shan sitting opposite to her---He looks at her, gives a smile and
winks..Khanak gets scared, she quickly lowers her gaze, recalling God's name in
her mind---She tries avoiding even looking at any direction, except out of the
however Shan's eyes are fixed on her-he thinks- " dikhne mein cute
hain'.yeh aishwarya rai ki level ki to nahi hai'but kuch to baat hai jo mujhe
itni door se bhaga ke leke ayi hai''aur aab jab itni door aahi gaya hoon to I
should not waste my time"'
he sees a fat lady,
who is trying hard to adjust herself in a small space besides Khanak, leaving
Khanak uncomfortable as the lady slowly starts pushing her'Shan notices this
and says- " arey aunty ji..aap kyun wahan taklif kar rahi hain---sit here'mere
seat pe'araam se baithiye..he gets up offering the lady his seat
"Par beta, aap kahan
Shan- " main to kahin
bhi baith jaonga"
The lady gets impressed
, gets up and sits on the other seat, while shan grabs the opportunity and
seats besides Khanak'who is now busy reading a book
Shan tries peeping in
the book, thereby coming more close to khanak'who notices this and moves aside,
she gets pissed off- " excuse me..whats ur problem..hun!"
Shan- " me'no
nothing..just I was seeing ur book'interesting..i must say'.why should I have a
Khanak-" yeah..but I do
have a problem'and dats with you"
Shan, now leans back
and says- " me'but u don't know me at all..infact even I don't know u"
Khanak- " listen..do
not try to act smart ok'u have been constantly following me, I saw that"
Shan moves his face to
other side, thinks- " beta shan, ab to teri band bajne wali hai."'but composes
himself, says- " kyun, kyun follow karunga main apko'even I am going to the
place where u r going..infact where everyone is going..infact where the train
Khanak- " really'.now
can u tell me where is this train going"
Shan- " hmm'.andheri"
Khanak nods'He again
says ' bandra'.he keeps on saying wrong station names and finally says- " arey
yaar..train kahan jayegi..loco shed mein
aur kahan..simple'unknowingly trying to hold khanak's hands
Khanak ' " u r
impossible'listen I m telling u the last time, don't u try to play games with
Shan withdraws his
hands, looks to the other side, sees a drunkard standing on the way, stumbling
and trying hard to stand still- a mischievous grin appears on his face, he
calls for the man- " o brother, bhaisaab'"
The man- " mujhe'mujhe
Shan- "yeah, aapko bula
raha hoon main----aap ki tabiyat thik nahi lag rahi hai---apko baithna
chahiye'have my seat"
The man comes forward-
"sure, sure"'khanak sees this , gets scared, she pleads to Shan through her
eyes, who is now enjoying everything'he slowly pretends to get up'but Khanak
pulls his shirt, he looks back- " u want me to sit here"'he whispers'
Khanak- " please, I
don't want to sit beside that fellow"
Shan- " but u were
having problem with me
Khanak irritatingly- "
now I don't have any problems"
Shan looks at her- " u
Khanak gives a forced
smile and nods her head. Shan leans back, and refuse to give his seat to the
He says to Khanak-" so
we are friends now"
Khanak- " excuse
Shan- " ooh I see'..oh
Khanak stops him- "
Shan- " good..whats ur
Khanak is about to say
her name when fortunately she notices the train is approaching the
destination'She gets up, walks towards the door..followed by Shan-
Shan- " hello, I asked
Khanak pretends to not
hear him'avoid him---An idea strikes
him-He comes in front of Khanak, just in between the door and Khanak and says-
" tell me ur name, warna.."
Khanak- " warna kya.."
Shan moves back'"
sochlo apna naam batao, nahi to '"
looking at him,-nahi to'.
Suddenly she turns her
gaze towards Shan and gets shocked to see him ' he is facing her 'his one feet
on the first stair and the other on the floor of the train-hands holding the
support on both sides- a slight movement can result in his falling down the
train'Without wasting a time, khanak
grabs him by his shirt, shouts at him- " pagal ho gaye ho kya..get
up---aghhh'she tries pulling him'tries calling for others'Unfortunately no one
Shan- " shhh..don't
shout---just tell me ur name..else..1 dive and'."
He rolls his eyes and
stickes out half his tongue, indicating death..slowly brings his left hand
close to khanak 's hands and starts lifting her fingers one by one and
Khanak gets scared to
death and closes her eyes'
Shan sees this , smiles
and says- abhi bhi waqt hai'4.."
Before he says anything
further, Khanak gives up and a name escapes her mouth- " Khanak"
overjoyed..gets up ..the train finally slows ' looks at her, lifts her
chin'says- " open ur eyes'ur station is coming.."
Khanak opens her eyes, sees him 'he winks at her
again and says- " nice name..khanak"
Khanak , now gets angry
and confused both at the same time'before she could say nething..the train
stops and she gets down---Shan shouts from behind-" khanak'byee..phir milenge"
Khanak looks back- he
gives her a flying kiss'She quickly turns away her gaze'scolds herself- "
idiot'darpok..itna darne ki kya jarorat thi'..waise usne apna naam to bataya hi
nahi'no problem ..next''no no I don't want any next time..please..dis was the
Khanak didn't knew that
day that was not indeed their last meeting''..
Khanak had by now
established herself in the fashion world, her next goal was to achieve success
in the field of art since her childhood, she had aspired to become someone special
and famous. She didn't had to wait for long, because opportunity came knocking
at her door, one day, in form of an offer of a daily soap'though she wanted her
luck in films, yet on Meghna's insistence, she agreed..
the producer of the show, Meghna and the male lead were waiting for
Khanak to show up..
Meghna gets up after
getting a missed call from Khanak, she goes to the entrance door.Khanak
arrives, parks her scooty..
"oops..i m sorry..am I
Meghna- "off course..u
r..now come quickly"
However as soon as
Khanak pushes the door, she is shocked to see the other person sitting with the
producer..she steps back..the person was none other than Shantanu Khandelwal
Meghna gets confused
with her behavior-" Khanak , kya ho gaya..chal".
Khanak- aa..woh ..megs..actually, I just forgot my
purse in the scooty..u go, I m coming"
Meghna- hein! dear , ur
purse is with u"
Khanak thinks, den
again says-" actually, i'I have hurt my feet and its too painful..see I can't
Meghna now gets
frustrated, she grabs Khanak's hands and says-" Khanak, stop giving stupid
excuses, now come'Khanak ' "nahi..mujhe nahi jaana.."
Now Meghna starts
dragging khanak, who resists like a kid..Finally meghna gives up..Khanak goes
away from there.
After two days, in
Khanak's flat'Meghna throws a magazine at Khanak , who was busy drawing
Khanak-" what is dis
yaar'u spoiled my creation"
Hun'do u have any idea, what u actually spoiled of urself..see in the magazine"
Khanak looks at the
magazine, there is an article- ' Khandelwal heir to debut with small screen '
Khanak-" so what should
I do with this article"
Meghna- " pad, pad
poore article ko'.it says the name of the lucky girl who is gonna debute along
with him'do u have the slightest idea that had u have kicked away a golden
opportunity that came ur way'do u know dis guy is famous for just being the son
of a rich scion and u could have got fame instantly---but nahi.."
Khanak- "and do u know that dis shantanu khandelwal is actually a psychic who loves irritating people,
just for the sake of knowing their names and on the top of that , he speaks
rubbish on being drunk'did u knew that..haan bolo"
Meghna tries saying
something, but khanak interrupts her saying- bas..i m not gonna discuss nething
The year passes , with
khanak getting herself engaged in doing ad-films and Shan in his daily
soap'next year again, the same opportunity knocks at khanak's door- this time
the reason was same-another daily soap and same male lead- Shantanu
Khandelwal..but she could not refuse, because firstly even she was tired of
doing ads and wanted to move further and secondly dis time the producer was
none other than Monisha Narang,- the lady to whom she actually owes her
success, and could do nething to repay her debts.
Khanak started her
journey as a co-star to Shantanu, with a promise to herself that she will only
concentrate on her work, and will never get indulged in any kind of news or
personal attachments with neone on the sets'everything to her should be
professional..she was indeed successful in keeping up her promise-though she
mingled with everyone on the sets, yet she would always keep an arm's distance
with everybody, unlike Shan, who was like a family member to everyone on the
sets'She was glad Shan was just behaving as a co-star with her and was friendly , only in a formal way
Khanak , though could
not figure out the reason for Shan's formal behavior, but she was ok about
it..she didn't wanted ne complications in her life'she feared being close to
The year passed by, and
they reached the end of their serial..It was not intended to end so quickly,
but due to Monisha's other projects and even Shan's uneagerness to continue in
small screen , the show had to end
It was the farewell
Everyone was busy
enjoying the party, remembering the days spend on the sets..Shan was also busy
with other co-actors when suddenly he hears a person from the press asking
Khanak abt whether she will miss the sets, ne one special'Shan smirks, he
thinks, she will take his name specially..but he is shocked to hear her
answer-she replies, everything was just professional for her and she may miss
them for a day or two n nothing more than that.
Shan gets further hurt
wen she says that she never considered Shantanu khandelwal, more than a
co-star..not even a friend..
Unknowingly a tear
falls from Shan's eyes, he never expected dis answer from her, though he knew
she was an introvert, a reserved person..but yet when ever he used to inact any
romantic scenes, he always felt
something in her eyes for him..
His hurt turned into
anger and frustration when he saw Khanak in a happy mood with others, enjoying
herself'he could n't take it more'he had been behaving like a gentleman since 2
yrs, waiting for this girl- who had
captured his mind, his heart, his soul since the day she started visiting him
in his dreams'he wanted to create a good impression in her mind about himself,
because he knew she didn' t liked him initially and had even refused to wotk
with him'''.but this was enough , enough of his patience'
Without thinking for a
second, he went towards Khanak, said ' Khanak, I need to talk to u
Khanak, due to the noise ,could not hear
what he is saying- " kya, jor se bolo"
Shan, signal with his fingers-
" come out, I need to talk"
Khanak signals with her thumb finger- " what?"
Shan grabs her hands
and drags her out of the party..
They are now in a
isolated place-a corridor attached to the garden of the hotel
Khanak-" aise kaun si
baat hai, jo tumhe mujhe yahan tak keench ke lana pada"
Shan- " baat hai..and
its very important'.i want to know what do u think about me"
Khanak gives a confused
look, she looks at him from top to bottom and says- " u look handsome, just
like a prince'''''..yehi sunna chahte ho na'"..she tries to go away from there,
but Shan pulls her back
He says in a angry
tone- " I m not joking'''..i want to listen what u think about me, about us"
Khanak- "us?...we r
yeah..co-stars'nothing else..not even friends, hein na'because u don't even
think me worthy of friendship"
Khanak-" whats wrong
with u'''.till yesterday, u were okay with everything, aaj achanak se why are u
so bothered about friendship"
Shan- " no..nothing was
okay'I tried to make everything okay..just for ur sake..u know what khanak'I
respect u, dats y I never showed my true feelings , despite being close to u
for almost 12 hrs each day'
Khanak looks at him'he
continues, dis time in a low tone- " khanak, I don't know tumhare sath mera kya
connection hai, but I felt a sense of attraction towards u since the day u captured my dreams, u won't believe
my legs automatically followed u dat that day---I really meant to risk my life
just for the sake of knowing ur name'I was unhappy wen u refused to work with
me earlier, but I consoled myself'then again I was happy wen u accepted the
second offer'u can never guess how happy I was dat day---but ur extra professional
behavior irked me'phir bhi khanak, I didn't said nething'neither tried to force
u for nething'I remained paitent, waiting for u'waiting for the day u will
consider me worthy of being close to u'but sorry I was wrong'because till date
u don't consider me worthy of even friendship"
He holds her hands tightly,
says- " bolo na khanak, kya sach much tum mere liye kuch bhi feel nahi karti
ho..hum to itne time se ek doosre ke sath kaam kar rahe hain na..is it only professional"'
Khanak, tries to free
herself- " haan'I don't feel nething for u"
Shan-"agar yehi sach hai,
then look into my eyes and repeat what u have said right now, to that
reporter..come on khanak'''.kis baat ka dar hain tumhe"'''he tries moving
khanak's face towards himself, but she resists, finally pushes him away.
Shan moves closer,
says-" u know what..u r a liar..i have and I can still see something else in ur
eyes'but u are a coward..u don't want to face the reality..u don't have the
courage to face truth'u r afraid.."
Khanak is unable to
take it nemore'she retorts back- " haan, hoon main darpok'I m afraid'afraid of
u, afraid of myself..afraid of this unknown feeling, this unknown attraction, I
feel toward u"'.she breaks down'speaks
between sobs'"I m afraid of being close to ne1'..i don't want to be close to
anyone..main khush hoon apni tanhayeen mein'nahi chahiye mujhe kisika sath'''.yeh
rishtein, yeh apnapan sab jooth hai'jab
waqt ata hai, sab chod ke chale jate hain'''aur yeh sab woh upar wala karta
hain---woh apko joothe khab dikhata hai'phir ek din bina kuch kahe aapse apka
sab kuch cheen leta hai'....wen He can't pity on a 3yr old and left her alone in
dis world'.to the mercy of unknown strangers, how can I accept Him to bless me
dis time'..i don't even remember how much I loved my parents, but I am sure of
1 thing-till today God has been
punishing me for unknowingly getting
attached to anyone'.i don't want to repeat my mistake..kyunki is baar to woh galti
jaan buch ke hogi na''''Shantanu, mujhe us upar wale ki punishment se bahut dar lagta hai'mujhe pyar se dar lagta hai''..main
She starts crying'bends
down on the ground'.Shantanu who has been listening to everything, holds her by
the shoulders, makes her stand, gently takes her hand and takes her out to the
Shan points towards a
rose plant- " khanak, us flower ko dekh rahi ho'''.do u know why we love flowers
''..because they make us happy'.they spread love in the atmoshphere'''but u
know the irony'.They don't even get a chance to enjoy the love we have for
them, the love they spread''.why, just because He doesn't permits them and they
wither away in few days'''but have u ever seen them complaining...nahi
naa..then y r u complaining'''Khanak..love is not a thing to be afraid of'it
should be enjoyed, no matter how long''
He holds her hands-"
get out of ur fears, kholo apni ankhon ko..dekho khanak Kudrat ke har creation
mein pyar hai'poori duniya mein pyar hai'tumhare proffesion mein pyar hain'un logon
ke dil mein pyar hai jo har roj apna har kaam chod ke time pe tv pe tumhe
dekhna nahi bhulte hai''"
Khanak, softly-" agar
har jagah pyar hai..to mujhe kyun nahi mehsoos hota hai Shantanu''I want to
feel it'jin logon ki tum baat kar rahe ho, woh to sirf mujhe meri proffesion ki
wajeh se pyar karte hain na''but I want something else'mujhe woh pyar chaiye
jiske upar main ankh band karke vishwas karke saku, jispe main bina kuch soche
depend ho saku''..i want to feel that love''bolo Shan, can u help me..bolo"'she
clutches his shirt..
Shan looks down into
her eyes- he can clearly see pain, flowing in form of tears from her eyes, he
lowers his face, kisses her on the lips, but instantly moves back, looks at
her, asks-" u want to feel love"
Khanak 's eyes are
still closed, her lips drift apart, allowing a soft 'yes' escape from her lips,
which only he could hear'He nibbled on her lower lip- she responded equally'slowly
he captured her lips into his own, his tongue explored her mouth, The
kiss turned into a smooch , a passionate and tender one'..
khanak was feeling a
sense of satisfaction within herself, she was happy''..same was the case with
Shantanu'they both were happy..they were not bothered about the world, they
wanted to be close to each other'...dey didn't even realized that they have
been kissing since the last 5 minutes and would have even continued , had it
not been for Shan's mobile which rang , interrupting their moment'
This was the beginning
of their beautiful journey
i hope u all liked it...
next update will take time..depending on the availibilty of the writer, who is nowadays too busy......