The truth of love- my first FF part 17 Page87 - Page 58

Edited by The_May_Rose - 11 years ago

lovely update
the trio planning is super fun to read
i loved the shanak moments... was waiting for it
though in her drunk state but she tolds him all abt past
i loved the way he says sorry and em lukin fwd to many shanak moments
penned amazingly
update soon

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Edited by The_May_Rose - 11 years ago

🤗hugs...next part jaldi plz::::..::::::-saroj

update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!😭😭😡

Awesome update Shilpa!!😃
Loving their plots in making Khanak to come back to Shaan!!
Waiting for next one eagerly!!

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Originally posted by: The_May_Rose

Sorry for not commenting earliar, but I am seriously busy with work and home at the moment😳😆...

 

Anyway...Another fantastic part and I loved the nork-jork between Ansh and Anya...Another burthal couple, as if one was not enough...Poor Shaan is going to pay for Ansh and Anya plans, Khanak sees through all this😆...

 

First of all I liked how you showed Shaan's reflection and him looking at Khanak's world, or her point of view...I wonder if he has ever considered the contrast before...He knows their love crossed all that, but I am glad he is thinking more about it 😊...Khanak knew his world, but did he ever look into her's before?..Loved seeing him appreciate it now...

 

I also loved how Shaan just looses all sense around Khanak...I can just picture his face😳😊...Tohri betabi dikh rahin hai😆...

 

Ofcourse Khanak would know about Anya's plan...She is ismart girl after all😉...But she still let him ride on the scooty, just to see how far he would go😆...She cannot ignore him and glad to see her be happy for a short while...Loved the scooty scene, Shaan taking full advantage of this golden chance and even Khanak was affected...But then Shaan ne phirse koi galti kardi ...I think he will surprise her by getting the stole back...Hense building her trust in him 😊...

 

Navrati scenes were blissful Shilli!👏.❤️..I am worried that Khanak will blame Shaan though...Anya and Ansh are getting closer, but still obssesed by Shantanu and Khanak😆...

 

I am so glad that Khanak actually told Shaan exactly what was in her heart 😊❤️😭...Shaan reaction to ShaNak in the rain, these scenes played vividly in my mind...As all your writing does...Shaan's worry for Khanak, the lift scene and the rain scene were perfectly them and so romantic...Khanak's declaration and Shaan's apology had me glued...Bitter sweet and once again your heart goes out to the two love birds...It hard see them hurting like this, want them to to be free of the past...

 

I don't know how Khanak will react next, but atlaest they are starting to ment...ShaNak are moveing back towards eachother...I think now Khanak also needs to understand Shaan's POV too 😊😳...

 

Originally posted by: snigdhanagar

think abt us...🥺

Originally posted by: sweetsute

thought na, tabhi toh continued it. 

Hugs and thanks a lot for always motivating me and boosting my confidence

its k yaar...😛😃 thnks to u too...n jldi update dna😳