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Posted: 20 April 2011 at 5:24pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by kashfull

that was very sweet.
plz write more
Thanks!  I'm glad you liked it and I'll write more.

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Posted: 10 May 2011 at 6:28pm | IP Logged

So I've manage to read all of your OS's and have love every single one of them! There's something really cute about the way you write Medzi. I can read on and on and smile all the way. Though all the shots were written very well my favourite were OS number 3, 5 and 7.     

 

Keep up the great work!

 

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Posted: 10 May 2011 at 7:34pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by khahani

So I've manage to read all of your OS's and have love every single one of them! There's something really cute about the way you write Medzi. I can read on and on and smile all the way. Though all the shots were written very well my favourite were OS number 3, 5 and 7.     

 

Keep up the great work!

 

Nadz :)

Thanks Nadz!  Aww... you're so sweet and I'm glad you've liked them!


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OS # 8: Young Love

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I stood there looking out the window, feeling the air conditioner's cold air making me shiver. The weather depicted my mood perfectly- gloomy and sad. It was cloudy outside, not even a sign of light, just like the way it was in my heart. I saw the black and yellow school bus coming and standing in front of me. I read the number on it, caressing it with my eyes- Christian County Public Schools No. 0554. Yes, I was in school in Officer Catlett's office. No, I wasn't in trouble, not at all. Today was May 26, 2011, the last day of school, the last day at North Drive Middle School, the last day of eighth grade, the last day of me being with my friends.

Since today was the last day of school, everyone was wild. No, we weren't having any fights, strangely, we weren't having people arguing or anything. It was just that my friend group wanted to have a time together. After all, we were splitting up. After the summer break we would be going to different high schools. Some of my friends were going to Hopkinsville High (Hoptown) and some were coming to Christian County High (County) with me. It was a really strange feeling. Being with the same group for about three years, sharing your happy and sad times with them, and then suddenly splitting up for pretty much forever isn't a good feeling and we were feeling the same.

We were having fun. We had been playing Truth and Dare for about an hour, I think? We gave each other really crazy dares like go sit in this person's lap until it's your turn and the truths were really embarrassing like what kind of thoughts do you have about this person. It was crazy. When we looked at the clock, we realized we only had like an hour left and everyone started to cry. I had tried so hard not to cry, but how couldn't I? It was the last day I would be seeing all of my friends... and him.

I closed my eyes and the old memories flooded back in my mind. Armaan Mallik. I had known him since fourth grade. I used to hate him, no. 'Loathe' would be the perfect word to describe what I used to feel for him and it was the same with him. We both hated each other because of our personalities. I was the quiet, actually the loud mouth, smart and simple girl whereas he was the cool dude. I would always get in trouble because of him.

In fifth grade, I had to sit right beside him. We both always got irritated with each other. In anger, I would do the stupidest things on Earth. Yes, my anger's always on the tip of my nose. But hey! You can't blame me for that. I've always been like that! If anyone says anything to me, I ain't gonna leave them like that! I'll beat the crap outta them! Trust me!

It was in the middle of the fifth grade year when I realized I had started to like him. I was astounded at first, but then I didn't complain. I found him very cute, handsome, and even sexy at times. I know. Weird right? But you can't blame me! I'm a girl! I'm ought to check boys out. Back to what I was saying. I always thought it's gonna be a small crush and it'll fade away as time goes by, but I was so freakin wrong!

I had to leave fifth grade early because I had to go to India for two months. Come on guys, I was going there after like six years! In those two months, I didn't miss him much. I guess it was a crush at that point, but this was when the crush started to change into love.

I still remember the first day of sixth grade. Everyone was gathered up in the commons area, waiting for the teachers to escort them to their classrooms. Even my mom had come because we weren't here for the open house, which was slightly embarrassing. I was talking to my friends when the door had opened and I saw him coming in. He was wearing an orange t-shirt along with khaki 3/4 and had his black backpack hanging from one of his shoulders. I had been completely surprised. In fifth grade, I had heard him say that he might be going to County Middle so this was a really pleasant surprise for me.

Later I had found out I had 6 out of 8 classes with him. I had been over the moon hearing this! Slowly my little crush changed into something bigger, something stronger. Throughout the year I had been looking for signs- signs that would tell me that he feels the same way about me. I had seen him staring at me many times, but then I would dismiss the thought saying he's staring at the wall behind me as it's prettier than me. With this thought, the rest of the year passed by and I never found the answer to my question.

Seventh grade... I still hadn't been able to forget him. Every single day I thought about him. If he was the person I'd think about before going to sleep, then he'd be first one I'd want to see when I wake up. Crazy, right? I know. But that's true. I thought I'll finally get the answers to my questions in seventh grade, but luck wasn't on my side in that matter.

In seventh grade, our administrators had divided us by quads. I, obviously, was on 7.2 which was the smartest one and he was on 7.1 which was also smart, but I would call it the bad quad. Most of the annoying students were placed in that quad. Yeah, I'm basically calling him annoying. LOL! Honestly, I had first thought that he had failed 6th grade. I know it's a crazy thought, but I did think of that. But during lunch time I was proven wrong because I had finally figured out that he was in the other quad. I know. I'm slow. No need to tell me.

By the end of the first week, I had managed to think of ways of seeing him throughout the day. Go with the second line for breakfast as his bus driver was a douche, leave class a little late so that I can catch slight glimpse of him when we're switching classes, lunch time was the best because I could see him for at least 30 minutes in a day, and leave the school a minute late so that I can see him on the bus. I know it's a very stalker-ish behavior, but what can you expect from someone that doesn't even get to see the most important person of their life for a proper amount of time?

Even that year I found him staring at me. Oh, and I forgot to tell you something. In 6th grade, one of my fellow classmates had seen me staring at Armaan and they had told him I liked him. Shocking right? I know it is. But I, being the smart one, had denied it. Dude, you really don't expect me to beat the drums to world that I liked him now, did you? Not only that, but Mr. Mallik had told EVERYONE I liked him. I swear I could kill him for doing that to me! Now you see why I didn't tell him anything and kept denying the truth? He was EVIL! But fortunately or unfortunately I liked that EVIL guy. LOL! So back to what I was saying, even in 7th grade he kept telling people I liked him. So now, I had one question in my mind. If I was nothing to him, then why was he bringing that topic up? Strange right?

So anyways, that was 7th grade. I still hadn't gotten to know the answer to my question. I didn't know whether he felt anything for me. Was I important for him or just another person in the school? Who could tell me anything? I couldn't ask his friends because we didn't really get along so asking Armaan was so out of question! On the last day of school, I was kinda sad because I couldn't see him for like 2 months. I had thought he would come, but he didn't. But on that day, I had found out something. Armaan was going out with this girl named Hannah. I was heartbroken that day. Didn't it mean that all this while he never liked me and I had a misconception? That day I had realized that I didn't like him, I loved him. That realization had struck me hard like a thunderbolt. I wanted to cry and release the pain that was in my heart, but it seemed as if my heart didn't want that and it wanted me to suffer.

The summer went by, but I still couldn't remove him or his thoughts from my heart. In August we had to come for an orientation because we had some new principals. That was the day I saw him. He had worn his favorite gray t-shirt and dark jeans. Mom, my brother, and I were going to gym when I had realized he was right behind me. For a second my heart had stopped. I felt it. I forgot how to breathe. At that time I thought he was still dating Hannah so I tried to keep his thoughts away from me. We were on the bleachers, listening to the principals, but my attention was only on Armaan. I kept glancing at him. A girl was sitting right beside him. Her named was Taylor. Although she was my friend, I had felt like killing her that moment.

After the orientation, we had picked up our schedules and had gone to our classes. I don't know why, but it felt like he was looking at me, but whenever I looked at him, I found him talking to his friend, Martin. I still remember when we were going out of school, I had seen him staring at me. I knew it! But again, I had thought he was looking at someone else. That day I promised myself that I won't think about him. I won't let him affect me. Not even a bit.

The first day of eighth grade had been full of shocks and surprises for me. Our classes weren't divided into quads, but it was very similar to what we used to have in sixth grade, except we only had seven classes. My first period of the day was Algebra I. When I had entered Mr. Harris's classroom, the first person I had seen was him. There went the first part of my promise. I remember I used to look at the TV in front of me and see him there. That was so crazy of me! It was the same with other classes. My second period was science, third was social studies, fourth was reading, fifth was my other math class, and sixth and seventh were specials. Sadly I didn't have Armaan in my specials, but he was in my other classes so I was happy.

Everything was going fine, until one day we found out that our teachers were completely changing our schedules. When we got our schedules, I was really disappointed. I didn't have ANY classes with Armaan. Was this just it? Was I not supposed to have even a tad of happiness?

After a few weeks, my second period was switched to Algebra, which was Armaan's class. I was so happy! Even a slight glance was enough for me. In those 30 minutes, I felt like I had the world. Filmy right? But that was true. That's how I felt when he was around me. Safe... secure.

One day I had stumbled across his Facebook and found out he had a girlfriend named Sonia. Once again, I was left heartbroken. I just wanted to forget him. Take him out of my heart. But that was so difficult.

The year passed by ever so quickly. I would stare at him, catch him looking at me, some jealousy, some anger, some sadness, some daydreaming, some happiness. I had all of it at this point.

This is the last day of school and he isn't even here. After all, why would anyone even want to come to school on the last day of school? I thought I'll see him one last time before separating from him for forever, but I guess even God doesn't want this. I want cry. Scream, shout, yell till my lungs would burst open, but I can't. I don't know what to do. Should I cry at the loss or laugh at my fate?

"Hey! No one's gonna leave Riddhima alone!" I heard Cheeky Bear from behind me and opened my eyes. I realized I was crying.

Although I was really unhappy because I didn't get to see Armaan so often, seventh grade was actually one of the best things that ever happened to me. I had made so many friends! And you know what? Our group is actually one of the strangest groups of all! We call ourselves The APOSN group- The Awesome Peoples or Sexy Nerds. Haha! That's just us! They told me they have MPD- Multiple Personality Disorder and they hve many personalities! I know, this was strange, but it's true!

One of my best friends is Atul. Actually, he is one of my 'bubbas' and I call him Cheeky Bear because he has very cheeky cheeks and he's very comfy like a teddy bear. Funny right? I have been friends with him ever since elementary. He has many ethnicities in him. He was born in Canada, but has a little bit of French, German, African American, and Bangladeshi in him. He's goofy, but one of the sweetest people I've ever met. Me and him always fought over things. You know? I'm a Bollywood freak so one day, I had shown him one of the Bolly songs, Gale Lag Jaa from De Dana Dan and guess what? He always sings it to tease me about Caramel! Which reminds me. Caramel is Armaan, my nickname for him. My group and I call him that so that no one knows who we're talking about. Once again, crazy, I know, but just forget it. Anyways, back to I was saying. No, he's not perfect at it, but he's a damn good singer, though he doesn't accept it.

The next second I felt myself being pulled into a bear hug by Bubba. I couldn't stop my tears and started to cry. He's also a big part of my friend group. I had met him first in sixth grade and instantly clicked with him. His name is Rahul and he's just like my brother and I call him Bubba. He is actually really over protective, especially of me. Actually, my friends always say that I am really innocent when it comes to some things. Yes guys, even at the age of 13, 14 and 15, we have sex talks, but most of the times, I don't understand them and I guess that's the reason they care so much about me because I'm supposedly a 'pure soul'.

"Shh... sis it's ok." I felt him rubbing my back to calm me down, and it kinda helped. I parted away from him.

"You okay?"

"Yeah."

"Come let's go over there!" I smiled at Cheeky Bear and we went to the other side of the room.

"What's wrong Ridzi?" Mira asked me worriedly. Her name is Anjali, but I just call her 'Mira'. Actually, her middle name is Mira and when she was younger, she even looked like a 'Mira' so I call her that. You know what? There's only 20 days difference between me and her. I was born on September 3rd, and she was born on September 23rd, which means I'm older than her. I know you must be thinking, 'Why is she so happy about it?' Well the thing is that mostly everyone is older than me, but knowing that I'm older than someone gives me a pretty nice feeling. Hehe!

"Nothing. Just feeling bad because we're gonna separate."

"Aww... you want a hug?" I heard Alice aka Niki and gave her a hug with a smile.

Niki is also one of my best friends. You must be thinking, 'Why do I call her Alice?' Well the thing is, that Niki likes Alice in Wonderland a lot so I call her that. Hehe! She's a very sweet girl. But you know what? I don't like one thing about her. She doesn't talk that loud! Actually, she can be loud when she wants, but normally she's very quiet which bugs me. But hey! Don't think she's that Oh-So-Innocent girl because she can be a hell of a biatch!

I parted from her and then looked at Muskaan. Muskaan is also one of my best friends. We really do get along with each other. I call her Lexi because apparently she likes Lexus cars a lot and we can't call her 'Lexus' so we just call her Lexi. She's a very sweet girl, but she has a very low self-esteem and thinks she's not that smart, but hey. What are we for? Oh, before I forget, let me tell you all some things. You know Cheeky Bear? He has a crush on Mira! Seriously! And Bubba and Lexi actually like each other, though can't go out because for one, Lexi's parents are wayyy too strict and Bubba, well, um, he has a girlfriend named Alyssa. I can see you're kinda confused about that? Let me explain that briefly.

Bubba actually has this little problem that even if he's dating one girl, somehow he's gonna have a crush on someone else and won't tell his girlfriend until the time they're about to break up. Wanna see an example? Take me for instance. In seventh grade, no, actually, since sixth grade Bubba had a crush on me, but used to go out with this girl named Kori and he even told me this, but I, obviously, didn't feel that way about him. Come on guys! I like Armaan! Remember? And by the way, I found out a few minutes ago that one of his personalities, Shun, still likes me. AHHH! Anyways. Back to what I was saying.

So yeah, that's why Bubba and Lexi can't go out.

"Come on guys. We need a group hug." I managed to get everyone's attention and we all hugged each other.

"We need Ben here! He's the only one missing!" I heard Kat aka Sapna. Sapna was also an integral part of our group. She was an awesome singer and one of the best girls I've met. She's a fun-to-be-around type girl and I like her. You dirty-disgusting-gross minds out there, not like that!

Talking about Ben... his name is Abhi, but he somehow reminds me of Benjamin Franklin, but obviously I can't call him that, so I just call him Ben. Ben's actually a nice guy, but he can be a douche sometimes. And you know what? I'm his gum supplier. LOL! Yes, I give him gum everyday, FOR FREE! Haha! I actually find him really cute and even hot sometimes, but he's nowhere close to Armaan, let me tell you that. He has a girlfriend named Athena, who I hate because she has cheated on Ben so many times, but he apparently loves her a lot, so I can't say anything. Oh, and lemme tell ya this. Alice secretly loves Ben, but she ain't gonna accept it. They even used to go out, but they broke up later on, though I still think Ben likes her.

Cheeky Bear called Ben and put it on speaker for everyone to listen, but we reached his voicemail.

"Ben! You're missing out on all the fun here! Just called you to tell you that we're missing you here and we LOVE you!" Kat said in her chirpy voice and we all just smiled through our tears. Everyone said whatever they wanted to and I finally took the phone.

"Hey Abhi! You're missin out on all the fun here dude! Actually, all of us are getting pretty emotional right now. You know what? Even though you're a douche sometimes-"

"That's true!" Bubba came up and yelled into the phone.

"Shut up Bubba!"

"So as I was saying. Even though you're a douche sometimes, I love you and I'll miss you a lot! Have a great summer!" I gave the phone to someone else and then went back to looking out the window. Oh, I so wish Armaan was standing there with that same adorable dimpled smile on his face.

I heard the bell ring and we went out. That was the first bell, which meant for the bus riders, so the car riders had to wait for 5 more minutes. To keep my mind off of him, I tried to console Lexi, who was disappointed because she thinks she didn't get good grades. It was hard, but eventually she smiled and everything was alright. The second bell rang and my heart stopped.

This was it. My last day here. After this day, nothing would be the same. Nothing could be the same. I wouldn't be getting up at 6 in the morning and go take a shower for an hour. I wouldn't wait for mama to come and drop me off at school, even if it was just 2 minutes away from my house. I wouldn't enter the building and sit in the common's area for 10 minutes and talk to my other guy friends and then go to class when Mrs. Swearingen called. I wouldn't look for Armaan everywhere throughout the day and miss him during my class. I wouldn't talk to my friends in the hallways and have a blast when we're together. Nothing was gonna be the same. Everything's gonna fall apart... I'm gonna fall apart. This was not even a good feeling.

I looked at every lane, every corner of the hallway, seeing one memory or another flash before my eyes. One thing was for sure. I'm going to leave a part of me right here... with Armaan...

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Hey guys! So I'm writing an OS after a long time. Feels a little good to be back in the gallery. LOL Anyways. I'm not gonna say much about this one. It's really close to my heart. I was gonna post this one a few weeks back, but was kinda caught up with FFs and all that, so didn't have that time. Anyways. This is gonna be a 2/3 part OS, written in Riddhima's POV. So please do comment. Big smile

-Medzi-



Edited by -KaJenAbhiya- - 12 November 2011 at 5:54pm

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Adorable :)

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Originally posted by Aanya_taanu4evr

Adorable :)

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hey dear

its totally adorable and cute...

love the names u have given to our gang... sounds too cute...

cont. soon

love

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