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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 2:53am | IP Logged
It's beautiful Neethi!!!
 
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Well, you have depicted all the confusion in Pia's mind very clearly, and that is what makes this diary page so real. All the conflicts, the despair in one sentence, the hope and determination in another, that's what really goes on in the mind of any human being. And I may be wrong, but I detected (or maybe I myself think Pia must be feeling that way) a hint of guilt in a few places...especially in the way she is questioning herself.
 
Really very well written!
 
 


Edited by amail1601 - 10 February 2011 at 3:08am

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Aww Neethz love you dear.Heart So finally topic khol hee liya..........Hug

I can understand reading your topic how deep you have gone of Piya's heart.Smile Her thought was really scary like this when he saw Abhay as a vampire..!!

Piya knows that her future is not with Abhay, but she can see her present with him. Without him her life is incomplete. How again and again she wants to share her life with Abhay you have described it all through this diary. This diary is not looking like imaginary to me, I feeling you have "choried" Piya's diary.......naughty girl........Evil Smile

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very nice...Clapu've described pia's feelings for abhay so well..loved d end where u've shown pia's love for him to be strong enough to overcome all her doubts n fears...pia will not rest without breaking all d barriers btwn her n abhay n bringing him to d light n giving him d love tht he so rightly deservesBig smile lovely post dear...Thumbs Up

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Chillz..perfect timing to have posted this dear, the new promo is an extension of your post,,Wonderful ..What beautifully you have explained all her fears & passion for Abhay and his dual identity..Lovely & what a greta effort..Its a privelage to have you with us..as a ABHIYA & PKYEK lover..Thank you.God Bless..!! Hug

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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 3:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by amail1601

It's beautiful Neethi!!!
 
_edit_
 
 
Well, you have depicted all the confusion in Pia's mind very clearly, and that is what makes this diary page so real. All the conflicts, the despair in one sentence, the hope and determination in another, that's what really goes on in the mind of any human being. And I may be wrong, but I detected (or maybe I myself think Pia must be feeling that way) a hint of guilt in a few places...especially in the way she is questioning herself.
 
Really very well written!
 
 

Aww!! Adi, thank you!! That's such a lovely comment. Yes, Pia is feeling guilty. She knows she is at fault, nonetheless, she is not exactly blaming herself, rather, she's trying to figure out why she reacted in a way that she has to regret now. She's guilty but she's not wasting time feeling guilty. And the best part is, she's not blaming Abhay either! She knows that the circumstances aren't with her but she has to make up for what she's done. Right or wrong, doesn't matter. She was unfair to Abhay. Period!


Originally posted by saphira7988

very nice...Clapu've described pia's feelings for abhay so well..loved d end where u've shown pia's love for him to be strong enough to overcome all her doubts n fears...pia will not rest without breaking all d barriers btwn her n abhay n bringing him to d light n giving him d love tht he so rightly deservesBig smilelovely post dear...Thumbs Up 

Thanks a lot. Yes, this was a basically an introspection I wanted Pia to have, a monologue with herself which was necessary for her to understand the situation and where exactly Abhay stands in her life. 

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Chillz..perfect timing to have posted this dear, the new promo is an extension of your post,,Wonderful ..What beautifully you have explained all her fears & passion for Abhay and his dual identity..Lovely & what a greta effort..Its a privelage to have you with us..as a ABHIYA & PKYEK lover..Thank you.God Bless..!! Hug

Thanks, TR! Lol! Rather I thought I was too late in posting it now that the time is gone. Aww!! I love being with most of you guys! Thanks a lot for always being such a sweetheart!Hug



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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 3:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ffkhan

Aww Neethz love you dear.Heart So finally topic khol hee liya..........Hug

I can understand reading your topic how deep you have gone of Piya's heart.Smile Her thought was really scary like this when he saw Abhay as a vampire..!!

Piya knows that her future is not with Abhay, but she can see her present with him. Without him her life is incomplete. How again and again she wants to share her life with Abhay you have described it all through this diary. This diary is not looking like imaginary to me, I feeling you have "choried" Piya's diary.......naughty girl........Evil Smile

Zana!!Hug
Ya, tere dill ki tamanna poori ho gayiROFL ROFL
Yes, she's not really concerned about the future. She wants to share her life with Abhay and she knows that that may not happen but as of now, she wants Abhay in her life!!
Aww! Lol!! Ya, Pia's ghost got inside me for a while!LOL 
Thanks, Zana!! You're such a darling!! I love you!Embarrassed

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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 3:22am | IP Logged
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Beautiful post Neetz.Smile
..you have depicted the battleground of Piya's heart very well. The conflict of emotions is truly an interesting read. We humans swing between to opposing thoughts all the time...sometimes we give in to our intellect but most of the times our heart rules...just like  piya's heart. Love is the most powerful energy existing in the universe...we are all under its spell...even Abhay cannot ignore it so what can Piya do but let Love rule her thoughts....Smile


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