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shining_moon IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 10:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by dia_ditz

Prologue was beautiful!!!
Both the parts were amazing nd their first meeting was beautiful.
Loved it..........
PLZ add me to ur pm list.
thanks a lot
m glad that u like itSmile

smj1977.shruti IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 10:39am | IP Logged

welcome to the jungleLOL

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shining_moon IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 10:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by smj1977

welcome to the jungleLOL

well jungle ki sherni is here to welcome me.........I m honoured.....LOLLOL

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shining_moon IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 12:04pm | IP Logged
She was sitting at the window sil looking out...lost in the thoughts of the stranger who saved her life an hour ago n then jerked her away as if he was committing a crime...
His eyes...OMG!!!!...wat eyes yaar...intently staring at her as if trying to see through the soul...his touch felt so soothing like I was longing to b in his arms...n his lips...gosh...GEET...STOP...wat the hell I m thinking...
n that too about that jerk!!!...Idiot...moron...he blamed me for attempting suicide!!!! was bcoz of him that I slipped n instead of apolozising he yelled at me...Dusht danav!!!!!
geet's cursing ceremony could not last long as pinky came out of the bathroom n interrupted her...
PINKY-hey geet...tu tabse kya sonch rahi hai...kahin us mystery man ke khayalon me to nahi kho gayee...hayyee!!!!...kash teri jagah mai hoti to apne knight in shining armour ko kabhi jane nahi deti...
GEET-Shut up pinky!!!!...woh aur knight in shining armour...huh...daravna rakshas hai(in her mind she is thinking...yes a knight with enchanting eyes n so amazing lips..Wink)jise agar koi kam roshni me dekh le to heart attack ajaye darr se...n she goes on blabbering his so called very bhayanak appearence(hot looks in her mindEmbarrassed)
NEHA-watever geet...but u should have atleast thanked him for saving ur life
GEET-thanked him my foot...ek to mai uske wajah se giri upar se mujhe attitude de raha tha...or thanks to tab karti na jab wo mujhe bolne deta...aise jatak ke chala gaya jaise mujhe choone se use current lag gaya ho...
PINKY-oh toh gussa tujhe is baat ka hai ki usne tujhe jatak diya...itna comfy feel kar rahi thi uski bahon me...LOL
NEHA-aur haan is baat ki bhi daat deni paregi ki usne teri bolti band kardi...usme jaroor kuch baat haiWink
while neha n pinky continued teasing n laughing at geet they were disturbed by a knock...they were informed by sheena that everyone should get ready n come down to the reception area as they were going to visit various places all the girls assembled at the reception to explore the queen of all hill stations
Maan came back after his memorable encounter with a pari...yes for him she was a pari...he still could not forget her beautiful brown eyes which was so deep that Maan Singh Khurana can actually sink into it...her full pink lips...he wondered how it will feel against his skin...oh man...hold on!!!!...Maan u r loosing can u even go there...she is just like all other girls who only look for a chance to lure him for his money... but her eyes...there was something in it...something different... she was different!!!!!
suddenly it struck him that from past two hours he is thinking about a stranger n that too a girl whom he met just a few hours ago for merely five minutes(those 5 min seems eternity)...n he dont even know her name or anything about her...HAS HE GONE MAD!!!!!...he said it loud...
SK(dadi)-It seems like...
SK-what what seems like u have really gone mad... I have been observing that from the time u returned...u r in oblivion...wats wrong with u...R U alright...should I call the doctor...yahan ke mausam ki wajah se apki tabyet to kharab nahi ho gayye...
MAAN-Dadi I m perfectly fine...aur aisa kuch nahi hai...aap yahan dadi masi(dadi's sis) se milne aayi hai na to unka dhyan rakhiye...mujhe kuch nahi hua...mujhe kuch calls attend karne hai...excuse me...
so maan tried to get rid of dadi's numerous ques...vaise dadi always troubles him with non-ending ques but this time he feared that he might spill the beans of wats going in his mind infront of dadi...
however he called aadi to check with latest updates...
ADI-yes sir...go..good morning sir
MAAN- morning aadi...wat happened with the meeting with Mr. Chopra...did sasha n u convinced himwith the designs n budget or he proposed any amendment...
ADI-sir...everything went well...he was really impressed with the design n presentation...though he wanted to talk to u personally to confirm everything
MAAN-thats good adi...n thats not a prob I have told ronak to meet Mr.chopra n sort out everything...
ADI-ok sir...BTW sir R u enjoying the ur stay at has very beautiful sites to see...
MAAN-yes really beautiful(in a trance remembering geet)
ADI-he..he..he...I knew it sir u'll like the place...its a very romantic place...
MAAN-(coming to his senses)ROMANTIC!!!!!!...what bullshit!!!!
its a terrible place I m just bearing it for dadi or I would not have been here at the first place...
ADI-so...sor...sorry sir...
MAAN-hmmm...n cuts the call...
Adi just thinking what happened to maan sir all of sudden...yesterday only he said that the place is quite serene n he is actually liking it...well adi its not new...Maan sir is always wierd...!!!!!!!!!!!!
so frnds here goes part 3...hope u like it
plzz comment n let me knowSmileSmileSmileSmileSmile
n do not forget to hit the like buttonEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Will pm later all the partsSmile

Edited by shining_moon - 22 April 2011 at 1:15am

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sanu3108 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 12:15pm | IP Logged
nice niceClap

ye donon kab tak bach payen gay cupid se   LOL

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Shalve IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 12:48pm | IP Logged
Superb update......

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simi91 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 12:51pm | IP Logged
awesome pls cont soonnnnnnn

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amzu32 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 12:55pm | IP Logged
nice update...

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