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shining_moon IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 09 February 2011 at 9:03am | IP Logged
hey friends!!!my name is anupam...some of u may know me...
well after reading so many amazing ffs I could not hold myself back from writing one myself...though I m terrible when it comes to pen down emotions but just hope u will bear with me...Embarrassed...
anyways enough of my bak bak otherwise u will run away without even here it goes...
other characters will b introduced later as the story moves forward...
The cold breeze of simla were indicating the harshness of the weather...even the only barrier b/w her n those gust,her shawl,was abandoned on the ground as she let those erratic winds touch her soft delicate skin providing the same sensation which she felt on that day...
she spread her arms as if inviting those memories to enter her soul which she cherised the most...the one single moment which changed her life completely...
standing on the edge of the same hill on the anniversary of their first meeting,was like reliving that magical moment...the difference being...that time the atmosphere was serene...soothing...n today its barbaric...that day her heart was full of hope n joy desite her problems...but today...her heart is sinking every second.crying for the lone treasure of her life...HER Maan...which was snatched away brutally...
she closed her eyes to feel gather strength to live to fulfill what she promised him...though breaking from inside...trying to maintain herself...hold back...when she heard HIM call her...GEET...!!!!!!!
He was wandering through the city...the beautiful simla they say...the same place where his life took a U turn...the city which holds a unique place in his heart...the place which once was his paradise...the place whose air reminds him of now the place which he despise the most only bcoz of HER...
not in his wierdest dream he ever thought he would repent his visit to simla an year back where he met her for the first time but now he curse every sec of that period he spent here...
willingly or unwillingly...his legs brought him back here to the very hill where met her...seeing the place his heart ached with pain...pain which was much much more than those physical pain he suffered last few months...hatred engulfed him...or was it the anger for not being able to hate her...
suddenly his eyes caught a sight which stopped his heart beat...his mind gave up rationality...he was dreading this very moment ever since he came to know of her betrayal...n there she was standing at the same place where he met her first...n only one word escaped his mouth...GEET...!!!!!!
her blood froze in her veins as she heard his voice...can it be him!!!!!!...she turned with a jerk with raised hopes of seeing him again  after so long...getting him back in her life...
as geet turned the moss beneath her footwear made her loose balance n she slipped...but before she could go any further down the hill two strong hand stablised her n pulled her back to engulf her in the safest place...his arms...
time stood still as the two souls meet after the long n unbearable separation...maan lost his senses as she touched him again after so long n he his her in his arms as always...
she could not believe it...god was being so generous to her...returning her soulmate...her maan...she sobbed she poured her heart out without speaking a word showing her pain in every single tear she shed...but her happiness didnot last long as she was pushed away by a jerk...!!!!!!
maan was holding her as if clinging to his life...all his anger all his pain...everything just vanished the moment he took her in his arms to save if her single touch was giving him a soothing effect...every moment he spent with her flashed like lightening before his eyes...her smile...her laughter...her love...her betrayal...n that did soon as the last memory came to him he jerked her away...!!!!!
geet could not fathom wat exactly her eyes met maan's she was shocked with wat she saw...the love though still there was alongwith other emotions of pain,anger n hatred...maan lost his cool as he realised he hugged her...gave in to her false charm again...n then he took out the gun from his jacket n targetted it towards her...!!!!!!!!!!!
hey guys plzz tell me how was it...I m really nervous so plzz let me know should I continue or not...this is the middle point of the story not the beginning...just wanted to write it in the prologue...the story will start from the beginning in chapter 1...
n if u want to b pmed plz add me to the buddy list...Smile
n the credit for the title goes to reet...the line from her ILWE...EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
silent readers plzzz atleast hit the LIKE button 
do press the like button if u like it...Smile
PART-1 pg-2
PART-2 pg-3
PART-3 pg-7
PART-4 pg-8
PART-5 pg-17
PROMO-1 pg-22 
PROMO-2 pg-24
PART-6 pg-25
PART-7 pg-30
PART-8 pg-36
PART-9 pg-41
PART-10 pg-46
PART-11 pg-53
PART-12 pg-58
PART-13 pg-65
PART-14 pg-72
PART-15 pg-77
PART-16 pg-84
PART-17 pg-93
PART-18 pg-99
PART-19 pg-105
PART-20 pg-111
PART-21 pg-120
PART-22 pg-129
PART-23 pg-141
here is the link of my second ff EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
You & me...One on One

Edited by shining_moon - 17 June 2011 at 8:33pm

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Posted: 09 February 2011 at 9:33am | IP Logged
oh great congratulations .......................add me to your pm list please.........................Smile

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shining_moon IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 09 February 2011 at 10:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by manashi

oh great congratulations .......................add me to your pm list please.........................Smile
thanks a lot for giving it a try
I will surely do pm u
trishap Goldie

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Posted: 09 February 2011 at 10:25am | IP Logged
nice start... plz add me in ur pm list

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sanu3108 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 09 February 2011 at 10:34am | IP Logged
awesome awesome awesome .....Clap

 cant wait for the next update now... 

plzz continue soon and plzz add me to the PM list 


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naddiya26 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 09 February 2011 at 10:48am | IP Logged
awesome dear...
add me 

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amzu32 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 09 February 2011 at 10:58am | IP Logged
 just fabulous.............
count me to in pm...

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swetha10 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 09 February 2011 at 11:09am | IP Logged
nice intro.. continue soon n add me onto ur pm list..

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