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New FF(MG) Relentless part 5 pg23 poem pg 26 (Page 7)

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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 4:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by smj1977

Originally posted by _maan_

Originally posted by smj1977

is he Maan?

or
 
are you confused with Abhay?
 
He is Maan...thts for sureWink
 
Who is Abhay?Confused
 
of course Pia's Abhay
he is the Vampire in Star one's show PKYEK
and Pia is normal human
 
Vampires are those who live on blood
I also read somewhere that the one whose blood they drink becomes a vampire
and the other breed are werewolves
Vampires and Werewolves both survive on blood but they are enemies
 
I have read a lot stuff about them
Nora Roberts writes a lot on this stuff
 
will wait for you to update
vampires are said to never betray the one they love
they always protect the one they fall in love with
Yes! Vamipers  are very loyal & protective about their love...

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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 6:10am | IP Logged
Loved ur ff.... pls add me to ur pm list

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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 10:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Preethi-Premi

Originally posted by smj1977

Originally posted by _maan_

Originally posted by smj1977

is he Maan?

or
 
are you confused with Abhay?
 
He is Maan...thts for sureWink
 
Who is Abhay?Confused
 
of course Pia's Abhay
he is the Vampire in Star one's show PKYEK
and Pia is normal human
 
Vampires are those who live on blood
I also read somewhere that the one whose blood they drink becomes a vampire
and the other breed are werewolves
Vampires and Werewolves both survive on blood but they are enemies
 
I have read a lot stuff about them
Nora Roberts writes a lot on this stuff
 
will wait for you to update
vampires are said to never betray the one they love
they always protect the one they fall in love with
Yes! Vamipers  are very loyal & protective about their love...
 
well...i dont know about any other show on starone except Geet....
well...as far i know, human needs to have vimpire blood on their system to turn like them... & i'm using this...there will be more creature....Wink
 
& spoiler alert...Geet will be not like pia....Wink

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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 10:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by _maan_

 
well...i dont know about any other show on starone except Geet....
well...as far i know, human needs to have vimpire blood on their system to turn like them... & i'm using this...there will be more creature....Wink
 
& spoiler alert...Geet will be not like pia....Wink
 
thanks
Geet should not be like Pia because Pia at times is very stupid

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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 11:49am | IP Logged
wow maan as a sexy vamp im liking this Wink very interesting... update soon

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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 12:28pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by smj1977

Originally posted by _maan_

 
well...i dont know about any other show on starone except Geet....
well...as far i know, human needs to have vimpire blood on their system to turn like them... & i'm using this...there will be more creature....Wink
 
& spoiler alert...Geet will be not like pia....Wink
 
thanks
Geet should not be like Pia because Pia at times is very stupid
 
well....not at all....
but in geet's side....sometimes stupidity is so mush funWink

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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 1:45pm | IP Logged
Hey tahi! Lovd ths new n unique concept, plz add me n cont asap.
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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 1:56pm | IP Logged
Part 1
 
 
I'm standing on a bridge
I'm waiting in the dark
I thought that you'd be here by now
There's nothing but the rain
No footsteps on the ground
I'm listening but there's no sound

She stands in the bridge near the restaurant. All the people had gathered around to hear her. It was definitely a cold night. It was a small suburban town. She was famous in this town. All loved her. She was happy yet….

 

 Isn't anyone tryin to find me?
Won't somebody come take me home
It's a damn cold night
Trying to figure out this life
Won't you take me by the hand
Take me somewhere new
I don't know who you are
But I... I'm with you
I'm with you

 

She sang with her heart. People compliment her saying she was the goddess of voice. She was not only good at singing but also in raising her voice against violation. Though she was one of them who created destruction..

I'm looking for a place
I'm searching for a face
Is anybody here I know
'Cause nothing's going right
And everything's a mess
And no one likes to be alone

She was playing her guitar, her trustworthy companion. She could lie to everyone, hide her grief but not with her guiter. She had everything yet she was alone. Like she was waiting for someone to come. Like she was waiting for someone for eternity.


Isn't anyone trying to find me?
Won't somebody come take me home
It's a damn cold night
Trying to figure out this life
Won't you take me by the hand
Take me somewhere new
I don't know who you are
But I... I'm with you
I'm with you

She faced the people only to find them like hypnotized. All were drowning in her words, her voice,… people getting nostalgia.


Oh why is everything so confusing
Maybe I'm just out of my mind
Yea yea yea

She sat on a bench. Closed her eyes in pain. Just to reduce some pain…to resolve something…to forget that happened to her…but she couldn't..like always


It's a damn cold night
Trying to figure out this life
Won't you take me by the hand
Take me somewhere new
I don't know who you are
But I... I'm with you
I'm with you

 

But today she felt something….something that she hadn't felt for how many years… like her waiting was coming to a end. Like someone was really coming to take her home…

Take me by the hand
Take me somewhere new
I don't know who you are
But I... I'm with you
I'm with you

She stood up….went near the big tree . the whole town was visible from there. Lights sparkling like stars…


Take me by the hand
Take me somewhere new
I don't know who you are
But I... I'm with you
I'm with you
I'm with you...

She knew he had come…may be to rectify his deed….or to for his own selfish motives…or to take her away….

 

She finished her song….still in a trance. All applauded. This made her come out of her trance. Her friends came and hugged her. She returned a small smile. That was unusual.

 

Her sister came & told everyone to move as she was gonna give her sister a bone crushing hug.

 

Sameera hugged her sister. "You were tremendous," she said.

 

Geet returned the embrace. She then realized what was really coming. She knew what was gonna happen was totally not good. & she needs to protect her sister, her family & this town. Well, actually she needs to stop the history from repeating itself again.

 

Geet sensed the wind changing. Geet looked up to the sky & wondered May be this was the beginning of a new end…

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