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Posted: 08 February 2011 at 11:18pm | IP Logged
Hey Guys!
I am Maitree..here in this forum,some ppl know me,some don't..Well,I write too,and have been inspired by many writers to post my work here...I hope you all like my work!I have named this thread,"LoveNotes" because all my Oneshots are basically on this Beautiful feeling and Bond between two hearts,Called L.O.V.E. (Earlier name : Pink Princess' OS Gall ) Hoping to get your comments/critisism/support in this!
Love,
Maitree.
::INDEX::
#1 *I Came back for you * -AR OS (Page1 )
#2 *Because You're Mine * - MaYur OS ( Page1 )
#3 *My Best Valentine's Day Ever!*-AR OS (Page 3)
#4 *Forever with Me*-AR OS(Page 5)
#5 *Our Perfect Anniversary*-AR OS(Page 9)
#6 *You Belong With Me*-AR OS(Page 14)
#7 *You Own My Heart*-AR OS(Page 19)
#8 *The Stranger* : Pt1(Page 25) [AR Mini FF]
Pt2 (Page 31)
Pt3 (Page 36)
Pt4(a)(Page 41)
Pt4(b)(Page 45)
#9 *Miracles Happen*-AR OS
Part A (Page 50)
Part B(Page 54)
Part C(Page 61)
#10 *A Hatred Named 'Love'..* -AR OS(Page 68)
#11 *For Love*-AR OS(Page 76)
#12 *The Gift Of Love*-AR OS(Page 80)
#13 *The Missed Call*-AR OS(Page 86)
#14 *The Battle of their Hearts*-AR OS(Page 92)
#15 *It turns out like everyday*-AR OS(Page 97)

My FF On AR : "Meant To Be"

AR FF With -ZooZoo- : Lost and Found

AR Mini FF : Je t'aime

IMP- If You Want PMs for my FFs/OSs...Please add me in your buddy lists on this account. Maitree_FF_PM I shall be sending PMs from this account :)


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Posted: 08 February 2011 at 11:22pm | IP Logged
 
OS #1 : I came back for you..(AR)
 
"Riddhima?",his voice startled her , but she still smiled wide at him.
It was the obvious Armaan Mallik-style entry and there was nothing but him she wanted in her life.She needed him.Right then.And Forever.
Slowly,but hesitantly,he put his arms around her,and sighed.

"I can't believe we're here,Basket...I mean-I've never...Felt so..Nervous before..."
She laughed a shaky laugh to hide her own nervousness," Armaan Mallik..And Nervous?"
" Oh,Come on...You're talking as if its my 10th wedding suhagraat..!!"

She now withdrew his arms from her waist and  looked at him," Is it?"
He rolled his eyes," Ya,ya..Go on,tease me..let me get off this nervousness..then you'll see I'll take my revenge..Heehaa..",he gave a evil laugh.

"Okay,get to the point Mr.Supercool..What are you exactly nervous about?"
He stayed silent. She continued again,"About the night?"

He shook his head,"Its Just that I am not the exactly the man you deserve to be with,Riddhima.I am mad,crazzy,irresponsible,hugely possesive,yes,of course..A doctor,but look at you..Perfect,Studious,One of the best doctors in Sanjeevani,Sabki aankhon ka tara,Innocent,beautiful...I Love you a Lot and I've never,ever,ever loved anyone,not even myself the way I love you..I want you to be happy,I want to keep you like the most loved girl in this whole world..I want our children to be like you..I want to cry with you when you're sad,kiss you when you're happy..and shout to the world that you're mine..but I doubt myself..Can I ever be the perfect man of your life?"

Riddhima blinked at him,"You're crazzy Armaan!",she said laughing,"If you weren't the perfect man of my life..Why would I marry you,stupid? and yes..You're not irresponsible..You're one of the best doctors I have ever seen..and that makes you responsible enough for me.I don't care if we don't deserve each other,Armaan..Because we belong to each other..We are meant to be together..and.."
"And what?"
"And I love you,you idiot."

He blushed at this and gently pulled her to him,"I Love you too."
"Then what more do we need?"
"Okay..Now that all our doubts are cleared..",he paused momentarily,"You really want to know?"
"Of course!"

He grinned and pressed his lips to her.She was initially taken aback,but then she responded to him,kissing him back,gripping his hair to pull him closer.She was out of breath already when his lips left her,and his kisses proceeded to her neck,wet and damp.She moaned slowly,surrendering herself to him fully.It was their moment,their wedding night...and it was just them..
They became ArmaanRiddhima..One in body and soul..


Riddhima's tears didn't stop.A few more spilled down her cheek,as she realised she had been thinking about their memories again.She glanced at Armaan lying motionless on the bed,as he was from 3 weeks. He was in coma,he was shot by some kidnappers when he tried to call the parents of a girl who had been kidnapped.Riddhima had seen the girl herself,her name was Minnie,and at the moment..she was back with her family..but Armaan..
Her thought was left unfinished as she wiped out the tears from her cheeks and held his hand..whispering for what seemed the zillionth time,"Come back Armaan..I need you.."

She could hear the rustle of footsteps and sensed it was the doctor.
"Hi Dr.Keerti..",she said,passing a weak smile to her.
"Riddhima,how are you?Have you eaten?"
"I am fine Mam..Yes,I ate breakfast.",she lied again.

She had to lie to everyone to hide her pain..How could she be "fine" when the sole reason of her living,her husband...her Armaan..wasn't with her?
It seemed like ages when she had last seen his dimpled smile..his eyes dancing as he saw her..his husky voice as he called out "Basket"..his arms that held her,his fussy annoyance at her stupidities,his peaceful smile when he kissed her..Everything seemed light years away..

"How is he doing,Dr.Keerti?",she asked,already knowing the answer.
"We're trying,Riddhima..He is responding a little..But we're trying.."
She nodded and watched as she left the room.

She wanted to shout at everybody..Why?Why isn't Armaan waking up if you're trying?Are you even trying?Can't you see that I need him?He needs to come back! He has to come back!
But deep inside..she kept a ray of hope alive,that her Armaan would come back..to her,For her.They had promised each other that they live together..die together.Armaan wouldn't break his promise.He loved her.

She tried hard to suppress her tears and smiled,whispering,"Remember,Armaan?"


Riddhima jerked her head back and told Rahul firmly,"I don't want to talk to him.That's final."
"But Riddhima.."
"Please Rahul ! You heard what I said,right...Armaan forgot to pick me up from the mall! I mean,that..That's..Just..Urgh!",I threw up my hands in exasperation.
"Riddhima,don't you think this small thing has gone too far..He's told you he's sorry,and.."
"Rahul,can you SHUT up?"

Riddhima could see that he was taken aback.And somehow,she felt gulity.She bit her lip.
"Sorry Rahul.I didn't mean to shout at you."
"Right now,Riddhima..That doesn't matter...What matters is him,Armaan."

He said it so seriously that she was worried.
"Is everything okay Rahul?Why are you..I mean,why are you saying this so seriously?"
"Riddhima,Armaan had a accident.He is in the hospital."
"WHAT?"

A flurry of events followed.She rushed to the hospital in her car,only to find a traffic. After a lot of panicking and shouting at Rahul as to why he didn't tell her before,she finally reached there.Practically running with her heart beating like hell,she reached the room in which Armaan lay,with one hand in a plaster.
"ARMAAN!"
He looked calmer than ever,"Hey there Basket."
"Whats this?Does it hurt?Can't you drive little carefully,you idiot?"
"It doesn't hurt."
"Ya,ya..Superman,of course.Now let me see,please?"
"Riddhima,it doesn't hurt,seriously."
"No time for jokes now,Armaan."
"Riddhima..",he withdrew her hand from the plaster on his hand,and then,began to untie the plaster,leaving Riddhima horrified.
"What DO YOU THINK YOU ARE DOING?"
"Wait.."

She watched as he took out the whole plaster.She was shocked.There wasn't even one scratch on his arm,and no where else.He was perfectly alright.
"I was joking..Sorry..Basket."
"YOU...didn't have.."
"Nope...no accident..I wanted to come to me and talk..this was the only way.."
"ARMAAN MALLIK! I HATE YOU!",I turned to leave,he held my wrist.
"Please...don't go..I'm sorry,baby,that I forgot to pick you up..But I promise that'll never ever happen again..I don't like you getting angry with me..I can't stay without talking to you..I Love you.."
I sighed and sat down,"Really sorry?"
"Truly,totally,Fully,Sorry."
I hugged him,"You're forgiven."
"REALLY?",he seemed shocked,"You're talking like you sensed this joke earlier."
"Yeah,I did.",I said,breaking the hug.
"But...,Then why did you come back to me..?"
"I came back for you..",I replied.


It was the same routine for her now,talking to a senseless person..but today,when she related the incident,Armaan stirred.
She pinched herself thrice,but saw it wasn't a dream....Her Armaan was coming back.

"Dr.Keerti!"

The events that followed dazed Riddhima..She was kept out of Armaan's room and the doctors checked him,did the test..And finally,she was allowed to go inside.
Armaan sat there,smiling his dimpled smile at her,and holding out his arms for her.She ran to him and hugged him,and Armaan brought her face to his and kissed her deeply,and passionately.Riddhima felt as if she had got her world back. Her eyes brimming with tears..she could barely speak..

"Armaan..I Love you..I Love You.."
"I Love you too Basket..I know...how much u suffered..I'm sorry,baby.."
"Are you okay?You're really back...To me?"
He kissed her forehead,very gently,"Yes baby..I'm here with you.."
She laughed and cried as he gently carressed her hair,whispering constantly,"I'll not go anywhere..I'm here.."
"Armaan..I can't believe it..I.."
He smiled at her again,"Riddhima..I came back for you.."

Please..Please Comment!I know it was kinda silly..but still!
Love,
MaitreeEmbarrassed

 



 



Edited by MaitreeluvKajen - 08 February 2011 at 11:22pm

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Posted: 08 February 2011 at 11:26pm | IP Logged
 
 OS #2 : Because You're Mine..(MaYur)
 
He looked at her,she didn't look back.She was chatting happily,laughing and joking with Samrat.
Mayank clenched his teeth.
Mayank was annoyed.He just didn't know what to do.How could he tell Nupur?
But he had to.They were living in the same,without even talking properly to each other.They were married.They were close,yet so far.
He had to.He needed to.He JUST had to tell Nupur that he needed her.He loved her.
"Nupur."
Samrat and she looked up.
"Yes Mayank?",she answered,a bit too formally.
"We need to talk.Right Now."
She looked at Samrat.He nodded and left.As Mayank came close to sit,Nupur shifted her chair away from his,to the other end of the table.Mayank closed his eyes and took a deep breath.
"Why are you doing this to me,Nupur?"
"What am I doing?"
"Nupur.",Mayank sighed,"Why do you try to be away from me every time?Why do you want a divorce?"
"Because....",she hesitated,"Its just that....I-I think I'm not your type."
"NOT MY TYPE?!?!",Mayank was shocked,"Nupur,you're my WIFE!"
"Mayank...I'm not..We're Just N-not..destined to be together."
Mayank felt as if a gunshot had just passed though his heart.His throat dried up.
Nupur didn't love him?Then why did she marry him?
"Nupur..Look,if its about you being pregnant,I have no problems about having a child.Its our last year in college,and I will get a job soon.Even Ma and Bauji are with us,what is the problem here?"
"Mayank,I really,,,TRUST ME..Really happy that you want your baby.But its about us,Mayank.We need a divorce."
"What do you want Nupur?Really?"
"Nothing."
She walked away.
Mayank was speechless.What was this happening in his life?
Why suddenly,Nupur wanted a divorce?
Why was Nupur behaving this way?
"Jeeju,Can I talk to you?"
Gunjan's voice startled him.He looked up,smiling meekly at her.
"Gunjan...Can we please talk,um,later?"
"No,Right Now.Its important.Please Jeeju,Its about Di."
Mayank nodded in a trance.Gunjan continued,
"Jeeju,Di has cancer."
Mayank felt as if he had not heard right.Cancer?
No way.
"W-What?"
"Yes,Jeeju,Di has Cancer",Gunjan repeated.
"B-but",Mayank felt a loss of words,"Why?H-how?"
"Doctors say it can be cured.But there are two conditions,First that having her baby might interfere in her curing,and the treatment requires a lot of money.Di thinks she'll be pressure for you.That's why she wants a divorce.So that...You can learn to live without her,when she d-dies..",Gunjan's voice broke on the last word.
"But,she cannot."
Gunjan didn't answer,she went away sobbing softly.
Mayank sat stunned in his chair.He felt as if the world was ending around him.
How will I live without Nupur?,he thought
Mayank was lost.How could he not understand?He felt like a culprit,maybe he was the reason why Nupur's life was shattered.
Why couldn't he love her as much she loved him?
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Nupur was fighting with herself.
Mayank,she thought desperately,I Love you.How will I-How can I spend my life without you?Even if that life means a few months?
She clutched the pillow closer to her chest.
The image floated in her mind.Mayank,on one knee,a ring in his hands and a dimpled smile on his face.She could not forget that smile.His smile..Her Mayank's Smile..That made her forget all her worries.
The memories spurlged in her mind.
The first touch,the first talk,the first hug,the first eyelock,the first feel,the first smile,the first fight,the first kiss..
Everything was just so perfect.
But,why couldn't it last any more?
 
Nupur,You have Cancer.And You're Pregnant.Its a harm to your baby.If you want your baby,you will die.If you live,your baby doesn't.
 
Nupur tried to ignore the Doctor's words.She had lied to Mayank.He was finally ready to have a baby oftheir own,excited and happy.
It didn't matter if he lost her...Would it?Maybe he'd just get over me,Nupur thought as a tear rolled down her cheek.
"Nupur."
She knew that voice.His voice,he who she wanted,desired,loved and needed.Her Mayank.Her husband.Nupur kept her head down,and sighed.
"Mrs.Nupur Mayank Sharma."
This time she looked up.Something in his eyes told her that he could understand her pain.That he knew exactly what was happening.
"Why didn't you tell me?",his eyes softened.
"Y-You...... know?"
"Yes,Gunjan told me.Nupur,Am I not a part of your life?"
You're My Life,Nupur thought
"Mayank,I-"
"Nupur I need you.How can you...even think that I would live without you?"
"Mayank if I live,our baby will die.You want our baby...And I want your happiness.Wouldn't it be better if you got our baby instead of me?"
"I Love You Nupur.",it was complete,honest and sincere.Mayank closed his eyes,they were already wet.

"I-I-d-don't d-deserve-you."
"But I want you to get better,and you will."
"Mayank,the baby ...the m-money."
"Nupur,I won't let you go anywhere.You don't need to worry."
"You won't....You don't..want our baby?"
"I want my life."
She threw her arms around his and cried.Mayank's shirt was wet.He held her in his arms and gently kissed her forehead.
"Mayank?",she whispered.
"Yes..?"
"Its Not fair.Why do you love me so much?"
"Because You're Mine."
 
 
I have cried a lot while writing this.Please do comment!
Love,
Maitree.


Edited by MaitreeluvKajen - 08 February 2011 at 11:49pm

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Posted: 08 February 2011 at 11:59pm | IP Logged
Dear Maitree.
 
I cant believe you write sooooooo well ahahaaa guess what i have become a total fan of yours heheee O-M-G the AR OS (I came back for you) was just beautiful. Ridhimma's emotions, flashbacks, AR moments were just written Beautifully!
Omgsh the way he doubts that he isnt good enough for her was just soooo totally and adorably cute! the joke Rahul & Armaan played on Ridhimma in order for her to talk to Armaan was just awwww. The last line I came back for you Ridhimma omg what a cutie! Sorry i didnt read the Mayur OS as i never watched mile jab hum tum. Please Write more AR OS's and DO PM ME pleaaseeee.
 
Love Priyanka.

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Posted: 09 February 2011 at 12:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Kajenrsmecxi

Dear Maitree.
 
I cant believe you write sooooooo well ahahaaa guess what i have become a total fan of yours heheee O-M-G the AR OS (I came back for you) was just beautiful. Ridhimma's emotions, flashbacks, AR moments were just written Beautifully!
Omgsh the way he doubts that he isnt good enough for her was just soooo totally and adorably cute! the joke Rahul & Armaan played on Ridhimma in order for her to talk to Armaan was just awwww. The last line I came back for you Ridhimma omg what a cutie! Sorry i didnt read the Mayur OS as i never watched mile jab hum tum. Please Write more AR OS's and DO PM ME pleaaseeee.
 
Love Priyanka.
 
Babe you can't even imagine how HAPPPPPPYYYY you've made me!!! I am SOO happy that you liked the OS.Thank u SSSSOOOO much! Muah Muah..Love u!!
Its alright that u didn't read the Mayur one..I can truly understand..dat is no problem! Sure..I'll PM u if I write another one and I will atleast try to write another!Thank You So Muchhh<3
Love,
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Hi Maitree.....
Really liked this OS.....Clap

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Posted: 09 February 2011 at 2:51am | IP Logged
Hey Maitree aww such a cute OS oops i mean 2 OS :P
I loved the AR one most it reminded me of KaJen aww i miss them now :((
Do write more nd wen u write do PM me :)

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