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Posted: 06 June 2011 at 7:18am | IP Logged

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STORM OR JUST…….US

 

dm hand move on her cheek in slowly …….he just want to feel her skin her soft skin that he was whole day dreamed to touch ……..his warm hugging her with his closing to her……..dm fingers move in away making santo heart beat in craziness and in scared too

She was waiting for this…… for more than this ……here santo raise her eyes in soo shyly sweet slowly way

Her half opened eyes meet him ……and……… suddenly the window opened in surprising nosily way bec of the storm out side ……the storm which be like there storm only ……dm and santo storm

Santo scream in scared along the sudden opening window as her whole body shivering  she closed her eyes in stronger way ever ……..in same time she move in crashing way to dm lap only envelop between his arms which raising near her body ….hugging her to him…….trying to making her close and more close to him

Soft shining smile start appears on dm face …..

In himself (thanks god thanks to make her here where I was wishing she be…. near and closer to my beating heart …..The heart which beat for her…..for her only)

Window keep moving in craziness as the wind be wild along the falling rain

In moment santo be like a deaf listen to nothing except the heart beating under her ear …………feeling nothing except the moving chest under her cheek

They be like this for sometime

Dm hugging her tightly to him and she lost in him completely

No one of them knews how much time been passed but they know one thing what they been wishing for whole day ……just happened

When suddenly santo just noticed what she doing ………omg omg what I am doing ….to herself trying to pull herself away as in same dm arms push her more to his lap

But santo just put her hand on his chest pushing herself in hard away from him saying  to herself ….HE DON'T LOVE ME HE NEVER DO I JUST NOTHING FOR HIM HA I JUST NOTHING…….tears start to run in her eyes when suddenly

S: aaawshhh ……..raising her hand covering her mouth while moving away from her heaven from his arms trying to shut her pain trying to be stone in quick she  give him her back

Dm surprised looking at santo back surprising from her act as feeling that it just hurt him deeply that she just push him away like that ha that seem was nothing to her but ……hummm he need to go ha he need to …….saying to himself

Dm: I just came to ……to…..to…………his voice disappears as he surprised

Saying, u ear bleeding???!!!!

Moving toward her …… his finger touch her ear edge feeling the warm blood on his hand

Again asking …….in pain …………

Dm: u bleeding??!! Why????

Silent is all what he getting as reply from her……..and in second He just found why by himself

Dm: u earring!!!...pressing his finger on her wound

S: aaawww…….ehhh………..and silent

Her low paining shout attack him more he feel her tears her pain……dm just turn her making her faceing him

And he just draw near her ear …….and he kissed her wound as licking her blood ….she shocked holding his arms for support as her legs just can't support her anymore

S: ahhh

This mans make dm continue licking her pain along her blood

She is him ………he feels it……….her body say it

Her body say it all

Santo move toward him more feeling him more ……..she just not want him to her self she love him…………………..

At the background rain keep falling down as wind make the voice of raising storm which is about to begin in stronger way ever in sanraj life…….

There is santo gift hide waiting for her to be just …………with him

And here

TBC

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~   next will be sooon ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

 

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Posted: 06 June 2011 at 8:17am | IP Logged

omg...its awesome...so romantic...


plz cont soon...

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Posted: 06 June 2011 at 9:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by hbuy

omg...its awesome...so romantic...


plz cont soon...

sometime eyes speak more then words na
happy u loved
 
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Posted: 06 June 2011 at 1:19pm | IP Logged
Brilliant Sara...Jusy now read parts 15 and 16 at one go... dyeing to read the next part... plZZZ post the next part ASAP.

Edited by cuckoo_chand - 06 June 2011 at 1:23pm
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Posted: 06 June 2011 at 2:28pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by cuckoo_chand

Brilliant Sara...Jusy now read parts 15 and 16 at one go... dyeing to read the next part... plZZZ post the next part ASAP.
 
awww cuckoo i start soon will continue
and more coming upHug

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Posted: 06 June 2011 at 4:42pm | IP Logged
lovely part saraClap...
you always leave me with the question what will happen next...
and i'm waiting for next part soon Smile

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Posted: 07 June 2011 at 4:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mimi10

lovely part saraClap...
you always leave me with the question what will happen next...
and i'm waiting for next part soon Smile
oh mimi the sanraj magic make u always want to know what dm up to ;p
will continue soon lats see what dm will do Heart
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Posted: 08 June 2011 at 9:10am | IP Logged
    Embarrassed  awww lovely part sara spacial their closeness suparb postr next soon..Big smile.:) WAITING FOR THEM TO BE CLOSE TO EACH OTHER  SOON... LOL  Wink Embarrassed

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