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'Two Breaths of Fresh Air' . . . (Page 17)

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Posted: 24 April 2011 at 3:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by PinkSugars

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Edited *~*


PS: This one is not gonna be a big one. Em feeling too drowsy to write a long comment.


Heya! Hug

How you doing.? (Ok, i must say you updated fast. For me, it was. But for the rest, naaa!)


Anyway, cuming to the main point: The part.

"Betrayal". The word said it all..of what the chapter is all about. The lead thinks that he isn't doing the right thing with the girls. He thinks that he is destroying their lives. Well, it is natural for him to think like that.

I won't mention about the Boyfriend and the Girlfriend part much. But i liked the way you jotted it down. And especially, the proposal part. Giving away different roses, each for a different reason. Liked it. And the simplicity of the gurl.. the calm and the sweet way she accepted him. Awesome!


Jumping onto his virtual sis..he adores her. Very much. Duznt want to lose her at any cost. Having a talk with her makes his day. BTW His virtual sis duzn have any idea about the piercing in his heart na?


Anyhow, i end my comment here. It's short. I know. But can't help myself at the moment.


Eagerly waiting for the next update.


Take Care.


None of the girls know about his ailment. And I am alright, how do you do? No problem, with the comment's length. I am grateful you took out time. 

Thanks a bunch! I will update when I can, I dunno. Approve

You too. 

xx

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Posted: 24 April 2011 at 3:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by snazzychamp

Brilliant update!! I have doubt though...will PM u.
Waiting for the next update...gosh I can b a sucker!! :P

Yes, sucker. Thank you very much. (:

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Posted: 24 April 2011 at 5:48am | IP Logged
Currently, I'm busy thinking something! Hence, this is meant to be a reserved post! 
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Posted: 24 April 2011 at 6:05am | IP Logged
awesome update! really waiting fr d nxt update!!thnx fr d pm!Embarrassed

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Posted: 24 April 2011 at 6:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Nikita-Sharma

awesome update! really waiting fr d nxt update!!thnx fr d pm!Embarrassed

Thank you very much. Smile

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Posted: 24 April 2011 at 7:09pm | IP Logged
It reminded me of.. 'the betrayal of the butterfly effect' ...and betrayal is the only truth that sticks: can only happen when you love!

I liked it!




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Posted: 25 April 2011 at 4:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by night13

It reminded me of.. 'the betrayal of the butterfly effect' ...and betrayal is the only truth that sticks: can only happen when you love!

I liked it!



I dunno what you mean, but love is hell of a shitty thing, whatever you say is right, hence. And thank you very much, I am glad you like it. Approve
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Posted: 25 April 2011 at 6:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Kanky-

Originally posted by night13

It reminded me of.. 'the betrayal of the butterfly effect' ...and betrayal is the only truth that sticks: can only happen when you love!

I liked it!



I dunno what you mean, but love is hell of a shitty thing, whatever you say is right, hence. And thank you very much, I am glad you like it. Approve


the betrayal of the butterfly effect.. meaning if no one ever loved, there would be  no butterflies...all your left with is misery!

'love is hell of shitty thing'...  strong statement?



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