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Brilliant update!! I have doubt though...will PM u.
Waiting for the next update...gosh I can b a sucker!! :P
Originally posted by: dmgmjht4ever
Kanky, could you pm me? Please? I need to acquire something.
Wonderful update, I'll explain everything in the pm.
Originally posted by: PinkSugars
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Edited *~*
PS: This one is not gonna be a big one. Em feeling too drowsy to write a long comment.
Heya! 🤗
How you doing.? (Ok, i must say you updated fast. For me, it was. But for the rest, naaa!)
Anyway, cuming to the main point: The part.
"Betrayal". The word said it all..of what the chapter is all about. The lead thinks that he isn't doing the right thing with the girls. He thinks that he is destroying their lives. Well, it is natural for him to think like that.
I won't mention about the Boyfriend and the Girlfriend part much. But i liked the way you jotted it down. And especially, the proposal part. Giving away different roses, each for a different reason. Liked it. And the simplicity of the gurl.. the calm and the sweet way she accepted him. Awesome!
Jumping onto his virtual sis..he adores her. Very much. Duznt want to lose her at any cost. Having a talk with her makes his day. BTW His virtual sis duzn have any idea about the piercing in his heart na?
Anyhow, i end my comment here. It's short. I know. But can't help myself at the moment.
Eagerly waiting for the next update.
Take Care.
Originally posted by: snazzychamp
Brilliant update!! I have doubt though...will PM u.
Waiting for the next update...gosh I can b a sucker!! :P
Originally posted by: Nikita-Sharma
awesome update! really waiting fr d nxt update!!thnx fr d pm!😳
It reminded me of.. 'the betrayal of the butterfly effect' ...and betrayal is the only truth that sticks: can only happen when you love!
I liked it!
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