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Story - KISSA SCOOTY KA (Page 9)

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Posted: 09 February 2011 at 9:40pm | IP Logged
I am sure it wont be Visrom, but I wont be able to concentrate on work today.
Chalo its fine, Abhijit ke liye ek do daant bhi sun lenge!

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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 1:03am | IP Logged
@visrom - Nice story di ... Last scene was the best...Thumbs Up  " Daya calls Abhi , followed by DUO convo related to the case investigation and Daya concludes saying to Abhi " tum hote tho eh case jaldi solve ho jata "  I liked it the most Tongue 

waiting for the next part to be released soon !! Big smile

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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 1:14am | IP Logged
 wow... wonderful story.............and yeah last scene was the best..........as  twinky said beautifully described story yaar... i must say you are too good in writing. viz.... oops visrom.... LOLLOL you should try in FW.. at least we would be able to see some good stories.....ClapClap

waiting for the next part ......TongueTongue

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I have a small doubt. Need some clarifications from someone who lives in Mumbai. Anyone ready to answer me? I cannot finish the story without your help on Mumbai geography.
 
Edit: Got my answer...writing the climax scene...


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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 1:28am | IP Logged
i loved the dialogue which daya used for abhi, "Tum yahan hote toh ye case jaldi solve ho jata"Smile...

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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 1:38am | IP Logged
Originally posted by visrom

I have a small doubt. Need some clarifications from someone who lives in Mumbai. Anyone ready to answer me? I cannot finish the story without your help on Mumbai geography.
Need some more clarification?
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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 2:57am | IP Logged
Lovely so far!!Clap
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Lovely continuation di..... and the last scene was soooo very good!!!!Clap Waiting for the climax scene di.....

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