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preethia IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 11:45am | IP Logged
loved it................thank god it was dream....................
i wud prefer if she knows abt it after they declare their love as it doesnt matter if she knows after engagement she can anyways break it up so no pt to go thro all that............if she knows after marriage then there is something diff.................i wud prefer if maan tells her himself after expressing his love
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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 11:59am | IP Logged
lovely update..... 
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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 12:13pm | IP Logged
interesting... cont soon Smile
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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 12:55pm | IP Logged
after both fall for each other...........awesome part............plzzzzzzzzzzz update soon
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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 1:42pm | IP Logged

Hope maan does not harm geet

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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 2:59pm | IP Logged
Thank god it was jst a dream. I thnk its better if geet knws d truth before engagement, aftr declaration of their love 4 each othr
smj1977.shruti IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 9:51pm | IP Logged

hi

so you started a new SS
sorry did not get hold of it earlier
 
I liked the characterisation
 
few questions as usual
1. as you said Maan is a new Don, so why did he become a bad man?
2. has someone killed his wife? or family?
3. is Rohan Maan's son?
4. are Geet's past and Maan's past/ present connected?
 
now for the question you asked
why do you want Geet to know his truth?
if I were you I would not let Geet to know his true identity
 
and if you want her to know
please do it before she completly falls for him
 
let her fall for him even after knowing the truth
let her become his strength
this may also lead to her taking him out of this dirt
 
rest is your own way
this is your FF and whatever you do will be the best
 
Shruti


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Posted: 11 February 2011 at 4:30am | IP Logged
awsomeeeee!!!!! loved ur ff........
amazing parts......plz add me 2 pm
tanx

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