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SaJan-SaJan Goldie
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Posted: 13 March 2011 at 6:49am | IP Logged
hi...
loved d update...
maan finally realised wat he had been doin 2 geet.....
i wud love 2 read both d past n d present.... abt hw maan had been doin aftr geet left....
thnx 4 d pm...

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Posted: 13 March 2011 at 6:59am | IP Logged
omg maan was so aggressive in past n now wt will happen when he will meet geet
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Posted: 13 March 2011 at 8:28am | IP Logged
nice update
poojaaddis Senior Member
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Posted: 13 March 2011 at 8:48am | IP Logged
please do co rordinate with past n present n yy maan is so over poseesivee i hope he realises his mistake soon n when he sees  geet  he should nt be poseesive n try to egret about  his behaviour
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Posted: 13 March 2011 at 9:04am | IP Logged
maan smacked geet?
divareena IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 13 March 2011 at 9:19am | IP Logged

 

Flashback

 

So sad that maan's extreme possessiveness and violence drove geet away from him. I can imagine the pain geet's father must have faced when he saw the bruises on geet's arm.

 

No father can see his daughter in pain.

 

Present

 

So maan thinks that geet is dead and is now drinking. Ranjits words made him that he drove geet away but I would not say that he is responsible for her death.

 

Please continue in the present now as I want to see if maan has changed.

 

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Posted: 13 March 2011 at 9:40am | IP Logged
Precap is interesting please continue present I think past is done thx...
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Posted: 13 March 2011 at 10:19am | IP Logged

Well the past & present co-ordination will work good for this ff coz I guess you would be telling the present scenarios with  some references to the past especially Maan's reaction after this coz till now we mainly got Geet's POV. Whatever you do I want Maan to really suffer big time Angry for what he did to Geet ... 

Whichever way you write its fine as you ' ve etched out a gripping plot
so won't mind past - present co-ordination or timely episodes Thumbs Up

All in all  A  BRILLIANT  UPDATE   Clap  ...

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