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Mayur FF..[Kabhi Hum Bhi Khoobsurat The]last pt123 (Page 54)

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Posted: 23 February 2011 at 1:38am | IP Logged
Originally posted by maria-soniarti

Originally posted by sizzlingsehr

hey mariaHug
hope u goin fyn!!
first of all big sorry to u for not reading ur ff earlier but today  i decided to read ur whole ff in one go


CS and concept:
awesum s and concept loved ur concept
and introduction poetry was reallyy heartouching loved it



btw congrates on wrirtng first ever FF and m lovin it HugHug


part1:

awesu mstarting loved nupur ... innocent lovely
but hated sneha and diya sooo rude Angry
thank God gunjan is here to take care of nupur Embarrassed
but poor npuupr ... dnt get love of brothers
hope she wuld get soon
and wowww npuur entering college
her dream gonna cum true
thts great now heading toward 2nd update
 
heyyy seherHugHug
 
i m f9...h r u yaarHug
 
Thanksssss yaar for liking the conceptHug
 
awwww i m happy u liked it..Hug
 
 
 


m fyn yrrrr

yeah i ts intersting m gonna read whole ff
and will conmment accordingly ofr eachLOL update

and ur fab writer Clap

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Posted: 23 February 2011 at 1:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Faria-

Originally posted by maria-soniarti

Note...

Hiiiiii Friends i have done some changes in the story becaz of Dhamiks of my friendsLOL.but friends its not fair na.........
its reality of our socitey..There are many innocent girls are in our society like Nupur who are suffering due to the most disguisting crime or sin 'Rape'...some have their family support...but even some have not their family support...how they live in our society...we cannot even imagine their pain..i just tried to convey my feelings about this sin...next time i wont listen any dhamkiLOL


Mari we know it re
and we knw the realty.
u r right there r so many innocent girls who faced this prob and our society dont support them.
why ppl blame this innocent girl- why they r giving disgusting looks towards them??
what ws their fault????
GOD knws......................

yes we cant go through their pain- its unbearable and not measurable.
 yup i cant v nups in this way- but I've already accepted the truth of ur story
thotugh i hate it but really i accepted the truth bcoz i knw maynk was there for
anyway ab tu change kar he liya tou main aur jaida baat nehi badaungi.

aur rahi baat tujhe threat deni ki- wo waqt he batayega...................kya karna hai aur kya nehi karna

i just wanna say- loved ur story
and do cont it.




 
@Faru...yeah yaar we cannot imagine their pain...u know yaar when i was writing that part..i had tears in my eyes...i can not even write what the girl felt at that time...its soo painful yaar
 
 
Thankssss one again yaar for ur support and love....means a lot to meHugHugHug
 
 
 
 

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Posted: 23 February 2011 at 1:45am | IP Logged
part 2
amazing
hate dia to the chore
urghhhh

but gunjan is soo lovely always suport nupur
and aid staring her
kya bura hone wala hai hope kuch bura na ho

lovely update
loved itt a lot

now heading toward third partHugHugHug

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Posted: 23 February 2011 at 1:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sizzlingsehr

Originally posted by maria-soniarti

Originally posted by sizzlingsehr

hey mariaHug
hope u goin fyn!!
first of all big sorry to u for not reading ur ff earlier but today  i decided to read ur whole ff in one go


CS and concept:
awesum s and concept loved ur concept
and introduction poetry was reallyy heartouching loved it



btw congrates on wrirtng first ever FF and m lovin it HugHug


part1:

awesu mstarting loved nupur ... innocent lovely
but hated sneha and diya sooo rude Angry
thank God gunjan is here to take care of nupur Embarrassed
but poor npuupr ... dnt get love of brothers
hope she wuld get soon
and wowww npuur entering college
her dream gonna cum true
thts great now heading toward 2nd update
 
heyyy seherHugHug
 
i m f9...h r u yaarHug
 
Thanksssss yaar for liking the conceptHug
 
awwww i m happy u liked it..Hug
 
 
 


m fyn yrrrr

yeah i ts intersting m gonna read whole ff
and will conmment accordingly ofr eachLOL update

and ur fab writer Clap
Thanksss yaar for liking it...HugHug
 
seher.....its a big compliment for me...as ur brillliant writter...Big smileHug
 
Thankss for  ur love n support..Hug..missing u talking with uEmbarrassed

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Posted: 23 February 2011 at 1:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by maria-soniarti

Originally posted by sizzlingsehr

Originally posted by maria-soniarti

Originally posted by sizzlingsehr

hey mariaHug
hope u goin fyn!!
first of all big sorry to u for not reading ur ff earlier but today  i decided to read ur whole ff in one go


CS and concept:
awesum s and concept loved ur concept
and introduction poetry was reallyy heartouching loved it



btw congrates on wrirtng first ever FF and m lovin it HugHug


part1:

awesu mstarting loved nupur ... innocent lovely
but hated sneha and diya sooo rude Angry
thank God gunjan is here to take care of nupur Embarrassed
but poor npuupr ... dnt get love of brothers
hope she wuld get soon
and wowww npuur entering college
her dream gonna cum true
thts great now heading toward 2nd update
 
heyyy seherHugHug
 
i m f9...h r u yaarHug
 
Thanksssss yaar for liking the conceptHug
 
awwww i m happy u liked it..Hug
 
 
 


m fyn yrrrr

yeah i ts intersting m gonna read whole ff
and will conmment accordingly ofr eachLOL update

and ur fab writer Clap
Thanksss yaar for liking it...HugHug
 
seher.....its a big compliment for me...as ur brillliant writter...Big smileHug
 
Thankss for  ur love n support..Hug..missing u talking with uEmbarrassed


thnxx dear
HugHugHug
and yeah missinng u too its being long tlaking to u 

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Posted: 23 February 2011 at 2:01am | IP Logged
mariaHugamazing update .. i loved it.......cant wait to wat happenes next in mayur's life..

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Posted: 23 February 2011 at 2:05am | IP Logged
OMG....
i knw its adiraj.......
i hate him, want to kill him..
i was not able to even read it...
feeling extremely bad for Nupur....

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Posted: 23 February 2011 at 2:11am | IP Logged
Thank God....
it was attempt to Rape, i mean still want to kill adiraj..
thanx for changing the story Maria...
now i am bit relax.......
but i really want to see Adiraj in worse conditions........

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