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Mayur FF..[Kabhi Hum Bhi Khoobsurat The]last pt123 (Page 53)

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Posted: 23 February 2011 at 12:54am | IP Logged

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Hiiiiii Friends i have done some changes in the story becaz of Dhamiks of my friendsLOL.but friends its not fair na.........
its reality of our socitey..There are many innocent girls are in our society like Nupur who are suffering due to the most disguisting crime or sin 'Rape'...some have their family support...but even some have not their family support...how they live in our society...we cannot even imagine their pain..i just tried to convey my feelings about this sin...next time i wont listen any dhamkiLOL


Edited by maria-soniarti - 23 February 2011 at 12:58am

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Guys u are all feel that Nupur was Raped victim but there is another twist in the story...My friends Pallu,Faria,Pari my readers sariska,and everyone ...i have surprise for u in this update. ...i hope u all liked it

                    Part 13

Nupur was in shocked...she did not even tought in her dream about that incident....Mayank was sitting beside her...he was holding her hands...

when a Nurse came in room...Mr Sharma..ap ko Dr Mihir bula rahe hain....she said and left the room...Mayank stood up from bed and kissed her forehead ...Nupur main abhi ata hoon...but Nupur hold his hand.....

he turned and looked her...he caressed her cheeks...i m here with u always...main abhi ata hoon

He entered in Doctor Mihir cabin.... Mayank take a seat

Mayank sat on chair....Thanksss

well Mr Sharma.it is a 'attempting Rape case'. Rapist could not succeed in his bad intention...Nupur is safe...he tried to intimate with her physically but could not succeed...

Mayank....... Thank GOD ...tears in his eyes.

but why Nupur was unconcious....he asked

because of fear...and she must be struggled to freed herself but could not succeed and was scared lost her scenes.and got unconcious....she is fine now. .but now she needed ur support and love to came out of that incident...us se aik min ke liye bhi akela na chorain....she was in shocked...

Thankss Doctor...Mayank said while stood up from chair...i ll take care of her

They shakes hand and Mayank left the room...

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Nupur was waiting for her brothers...but they did not came....she was heart broken and scared...she was in her toughts when Mayank came and sat beside her....He holds her hands...I LOVE YOU Nupur...he said lovingly...stroking her hairs

Nupur looked in his eyes...she saw same love in his eyes...

I love you too Mayank..Tears were in her eyes....he wiped her tears

Mayank ab hum ap ke qabil....Mayank put his finger on her lips ...she did not even complete her sentence...Aisa kabhi sochna bhi met...Nupur jaisa tum soch rahi ho aisa kuch nahi hua...

she saw him in disbelief...she tought...she was raped....

Thank GOD main waqt per pohanch gaya...

She hugged him tightly...Mayank he tried to intimate with me.he kissed me ..he touched me...i felt disguisting

Nupur words pierced his heart...he wanted to crushed him...crushed his hand....who tried to hurt her..he clutched the bed sheet tightly...he was boiling in anger but he controlled himself...he did not wanted to made her more upset becaz of his behaviour.Mayank .hum bohat dar gaye the...hamain kuch hosh nahi raha...hum samjhe ke us ne....she cried loudly...she was broken in his arms

Nupur bas ab aur met rona...jis kisi ne bhi aisi herkat kerne ki koshish ki hai...i will kill him...he was fumming in anger....

he was slowly patted her head to made her calm down....

Nupur ab main tumhain aik min,ke liye bhi akela nahi choron ga...hamesha tumhare saath rahon ga...

Mayank hamain bohat dar lag raha hai.....sab hamare bare main kya sochain ge...bhaiya,bhabhi sab...woh is incident ke liye hamain kasoorvar samjhain ge...

he cupped her face and kissed her eyes....she closed her eyes to feel his touch...Nupur looked at me....she looked in his eyes...tum mujh pe trust kerti ho...

sab se zayada....she said

he smiled...toh phir tumhain derne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai...main hoon na tumhare saath..main hamesha ke liye tumhain apna bana loon ga...duniya kuch bhi soche kuch bhi kahe mujhe is se koi farq nahi pardhta....jo hua us se bura sapna samajh ker bhool jao..

she hugged him tightly..

 
Nupur did u saw his face.?Mayank asked..
nahi...she replied
 
Mayank was stroking her hair...she was peacefully sleeping in his arms....

jis kisi ne bhi Nupur ko hurt kerne ki koshish ki hai...us se toh main nahi choron ga

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@Pallu....ab khush ho ja...aur acchi si smile de......i love you sis...main teri koi baat nahi taal sakti

@Fari..tujhe mujhe marne ki ab zaroorat nahi pardhe gi...ab toh khush ho ja

@Pariii....aww my sweet sis..now plzz can give a sweet smile for me...i hope now u ll be happy

@sariska...i hope tumhain ab mujh se koi shikayat nahi rahe gi..u ll liked the update



Edited by maria-soniarti - 23 February 2011 at 1:04am

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no need to tell u mari how much i m happy and loved the update.....u can assume it urself...thanks a lot 4 considering my request..love uHugHug



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Posted: 23 February 2011 at 1:17am | IP Logged
Mariiiiiiiiii tu  N tere twist- dono ko goli marna chaiye
yaar heart attack dilakar ab tu dawai ki baat kar rahe hai
but i really loved this twist-sacchi
haye my nups is safe now
my mayu with her- he will take care of my nups
and Mayu plz go and murder taht jerk
i hate Adhi- i knw its adhi - hai na????
Mari dil se ek bojh utar gaya
thank u so much for ue twistwala update
loved it to the core.
keep it up



Edited by -Faria- - 23 February 2011 at 1:26am

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Posted: 23 February 2011 at 1:19am | IP Logged
hey mariaHug
hope u goin fyn!!
first of all big sorry to u for not reading ur ff earlier but today  i decided to read ur whole ff in one go


CS and concept:
awesum s and concept loved ur concept
and introduction poetry was reallyy heartouching loved it



btw congrates on wrirtng first ever FF and m lovin it HugHug


part1:

awesu mstarting loved nupur ... innocent lovely
but hated sneha and diya sooo rude Angry
thank God gunjan is here to take care of nupur Embarrassed
but poor npuupr ... dnt get love of brothers
hope she wuld get soon
and wowww npuur entering college
her dream gonna cum true
thts great now heading toward 2nd update


Edited by sizzlingsehr - 23 February 2011 at 1:29am

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Posted: 23 February 2011 at 1:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Faria-

Mariiiiiiiiii tu  N tere twist- dono ko goli marna chaiye
yaar heart attack dilakar ab tu dawai ki baat kar rahe hai
but i really loved this twist-sacchi
haye my nups is safe now
my mayu with her- he will take care of my nups
and Mayu plz go and murder taht jerk
i hate Adhi- i knw its adhi - hai na????
Mari dil se ek bojh utar gaya
thank u so much for ue twistwala update
loved it to the core.
keep it up

FaruHugHug
i m so happy u liked this twistHug
warna kal toh tu mera murder hi kerne wali thiLOL
 
Thanksss yaar for ur support and love...love u allHugHug

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Posted: 23 February 2011 at 1:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by maria-soniarti

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Hiiiiii Friends i have done some changes in the story becaz of Dhamiks of my friendsLOL.but friends its not fair na.........
its reality of our socitey..There are many innocent girls are in our society like Nupur who are suffering due to the most disguisting crime or sin 'Rape'...some have their family support...but even some have not their family support...how they live in our society...we cannot even imagine their pain..i just tried to convey my feelings about this sin...next time i wont listen any dhamkiLOL


Mari we know it re
and we knw the realty.
u r right there r so many innocent girls who faced this prob and our society dont support them.
why ppl blame this innocent girl- why they r giving disgusting looks towards them??
what ws their fault????
GOD knws......................

yes we cant go through their pain- its unbearable and not measurable.
 yup i cant v nups in this way- but I've already accepted the truth of ur story
thotugh i hate it but really i accepted the truth bcoz i knw maynk was there for
anyway ab tu change kar he liya tou main aur jaida baat nehi badaungi.

aur rahi baat tujhe threat deni ki- wo waqt he batayega...................kya karna hai aur kya nehi karna

i just wanna say- loved ur story
and do cont it.




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Posted: 23 February 2011 at 1:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sizzlingsehr

hey mariaHug
hope u goin fyn!!
first of all big sorry to u for not reading ur ff earlier but today  i decided to read ur whole ff in one go


CS and concept:
awesum s and concept loved ur concept
and introduction poetry was reallyy heartouching loved it



btw congrates on wrirtng first ever FF and m lovin it HugHug


part1:

awesu mstarting loved nupur ... innocent lovely
but hated sneha and diya sooo rude Angry
thank God gunjan is here to take care of nupur Embarrassed
but poor npuupr ... dnt get love of brothers
hope she wuld get soon
and wowww npuur entering college
her dream gonna cum true
thts great now heading toward 2nd update
 
heyyy seherHugHug
 
i m f9...h r u yaarHug
 
Thanksssss yaar for liking the conceptHug
 
awwww i m happy u liked it..Hug
 
 
 

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