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Mayur FF..[Kabhi Hum Bhi Khoobsurat The]last pt123 (Page 35)

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Posted: 18 February 2011 at 5:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by tasfia123

awesome part maria..Big smile
it was so sweet...Smile
but why do i feel something bad gonna happen....Cry
aww.....pls sab thik rakhna......Embarrassed
but the update was amazing
continue soon

love
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Thank u so much for liking itHug
ur comments mens a lot to meEmbarrassed
i ll continue very soonTongue

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Posted: 18 February 2011 at 6:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -moona-

its really lovely part Maria...
very sweet and superb...
thnx for the pm Maria
 
@Moona...Thank u so much for liking itHug
 
i ll continue very soon

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Posted: 18 February 2011 at 8:50am | IP Logged

Thank u so much for ur precious comments.......HugHugHug

                              Part 9

she was trying to sleep when her cell phone starting buzzing and the name flashes on mobile screen made her happy....she picked the phone

Mayank...main ne socha tha koi mujhe yaad ker raha ho ga....mujh se baat kerne ke liye bechain ho ga...per Ms Nupur Bhushan ko toh farq hi nahi pardhta ke koi unhain kitna miss ker raha hai...Mayank trying to showed her his lil anger....she smiled

Nupur...Mr Mayank ko yeah jaan ker khushi ho gi..ke Ms Nupur bhi unhain bohat miss ker rahi hai...Mayank smiled knowing her feeling...he knew she was missing her but he wanted to heared from her ...

Mayank...I love u Nupur he said with passion,love....he wanted to show her how much he loved her...he was trying to feel her his love for her

Nupur...I love y too Mayank...she said those words with same affection same love....

Nupur...Mayank woh hum ne gunjan bhabhi ko ap ke bare main bata diya....she told him...

Mayank...bata diya..he said with shocked expression...he knew if shilpa aunty and gunjan will know about them...they will tease him about Nupur

Nupur...Kya hua....

Mayank...Nupur ab woh mujhe kitna tank karain gi he made his face and said

Nupur giggled...she knew very well shilpa aunty ...she will tease him...

hum ne bhabhi se aj tak kuch nahi chupaya...toh apni zindagi ki sab se bari khushi kaise chupate...

he knew Nupur and gunjan relation...Gunjan was a elder sis for her n she repected her...he was agree with her ....and morever happy...he did not want to hide his relation

Nupur tum ne bilkul theek kiya....main apna pyaar kisi se chupana nahi chahta....meri zindagi ka sab se bara sach hai ke main tum se pyaar kerta hoon...

Nupur was happy...she have a person in her life like Mayank...who loved her,care her,respect her.......

Mayank ab hum phone rakhte hain...raat bohat ho gaye hai..kisi ne hamari awaz suni toh bohat garbar ho jaye gi...she said...she wanted to talk with him but its not possible forher...she knew her brothers and Dia and sneha very well...

he knows her problems and understans her

Mayank...theek hai...bye love y...

...Nupur...bye love y too....

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Nupur decided to started her college....she did not want to show Adi...that she was cowrd n scared of him...she was now not alone...Mayank was there for her always,,,,,,

she was ready for college...she tied her hair in pony,dressed in light pink suit she was looking an angel...she took her notebook n pen...and went to downstairs...

Gunjan came out of kitchen...Nupur tu college ja rahi hai...per tu ne toh two,three days ki leave li thi....she asked

bhabhi ab hamari tabeet theek hai...toh socha college jana bhi start ker dain...she told her..

theek hai.jaisi teri merzi...gunjan smiled and replied her..ab ja tujhe der ho rahi ho gi...

Nupur smiled and went for college..

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she entered in her class....pooja was waiting for her...Adi was also present in class she was scared becaz of that incident but trying to control her feelings...she sat beside pooja...pooja who was worried for her why she was not coming to college asked her

Pooja...Nupur tum do din se kyun nahi aye....she was concerned for her

Nupur...woh...pooja hamari tabiat theek nahi thi...she did not want to told him about Adi

they were talking sometime...and then lecture started

Nupur was scared,,,she expected that Adi will surely try to harm her or hurt her but for her surprise he did not tried to flirt or even talked with her...she was satisfied now...but she did knew what was in his mind...what he was planning in his mind

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she came out of college and happy and shocked to see a person infront of her....

Mayank...she said happily .then she tought..nahi Nupur Mayank kahan hoon ge tu pagal ho gaye ...she tought it was her imagination and Mayank was not there...she hit her head with her hand and smiled ...she started walking

Onthe other hand Mayank was surprised at her reaction...she was not noticing him...

Nupur...Mayank called her name...she stood and looked again at him...he was there and smiling...it was not her imagination...he was there infront of her.....she was so happy to see him there

she went closed to him...and touched his hand..it was Mayank,her Mayank....she smiled

Mayank..main ne socha tumhain surprise don ga... tum mujhe dekh ker bohat khush ho gi...per tum ne toh mujhe noticed nahi kiya...he made face

Nupur smiled... she hugged him....he hugged her back...hamain laga ap hamari imagination hain...aur real main hamare samne nahi hain...

He smiled....accha toh ap hamare bare main hi sochti rehti hain.her jagah hamain hi dekhti hain..he said naughtily ...was teasing her...she hit her shoulder

both smiled

i love you ......Mayank said and kissed her forehead

i love you too...Nupur replied

They stood there for sometime in same position....

Mayank...Nupur

Nupur...ji

Mayank...Nupur mujhe toh koi aitraz nahi aise khare rehne main...per sab humain dekh rahe hain...he said

Nupur looked here and there some people watching them...she felt embarrased..and pulled herself back..she lowered her eyes...she tought she hugged him infront of many people..she blushed

..he noticed she was embarrased...so he tried to chaned her toughts

Mayank...Nupur hamain ab chalna chahiye.....he said her

Nupur...per kahan.....she raised her head and asked him with questioning eyes

Mayank...surprise...a wide smile was on his face

Nupur....surprise...she was said with surprised expression

per ghar main sab hamara intezar ker rahe hon ge...agar kisi ko pata chal gaya toh..

he noticed her fear ....

Mayank...he held her hand....hum ne Gunjan se baat ker li hai...hum ne us se bata diya hai...ke hum dono saath hain...aur main kuch waqt..Nupur ke saath spend kerna chahta hoon...he looked in her eyes

she blushed

toh chalain...he said with smile

she nodded her head....

both smiled...

She tought...Mayank is very nice and understanding person...she is lucky to have him in her life

when two love birds were busy to showed their love to eachother......there were another person also who was watching them.....

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here is update.......i hope u all liked it...plzzz do comments and press like button if u liked it

ur comments means a lot to me...

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Posted: 18 February 2011 at 8:59am | IP Logged

gr8

me first yupi...
 
tht was such a sweet update...
yaar why im sensing a drastic event happening in nupur's lifeConfusedOuch...pls...dnt spoil there such a sweet relation..
 
lovely , sweet n cute update


Edited by drfizaahmed - 18 February 2011 at 9:19am

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Posted: 18 February 2011 at 9:04am | IP Logged
maria..will was nice...ClapSmile

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Posted: 18 February 2011 at 9:21am | IP Logged
res......
comment tomorrow.
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Posted: 18 February 2011 at 9:22am | IP Logged
Brilliant update luving mayur's realeationship...y is adi behaving lik dis hop evrything is fine...hop he doesn't harm nupzi...Cry

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Posted: 18 February 2011 at 9:32am | IP Logged
wow nice part
mayur love story is really sweet here 
thanks for the pm
getting scared for nupur.
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