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..Mushkil Bada Yeh PYAR Hai ![1] {A SaJan FF} (Page 83)

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Posted: 05 April 2011 at 7:17pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by aashizin

woww it was awesome update Clap loved and enjoyed this update seriously reason for it , obviously deep impact of everyone's life which belonged to gunjan who is unaware with this fact most wonderful char gunjan who stole 3 person's heart with so deep impact , gunjan seriously made them hers in no time her innocent her purity touched their heart what  a gr8 effect and impact !! Clap

one thing i found in this update gunjan changed 3 lives with her presence around them Embarrassed

u know those rahul and gunjan's FB scene was most touchy it touched to heart while reading felt same pain which gunjan and rahul felt ,gunjan 's fate tested her and that little child didn't even know what is called death innocently craved to end her life only to get love of her parents , that touched rahul which changed him totally from that day he became her real friend one change in that boy which was taken by gunjan in childhood 

samrat sherill who found some different feelings for her with their first meeting her innocent and purity made him to feel for her samrat shergill who never compromised with his own self only for her changed his office's policy and appointed her to cover her with all evil eyes who can be dangerous for her in this cruel world no doubt she changed him in one day and this process will lead to change and bring out real emotion of real samart which is somewhere lost 

samrat thinks from mind but he always follows his heart gun's appointment was proof of it so now it would be very exciting to read how he will try to discover his real emotions which is dead reason u gave her father's betrayal to his mom and second marriage and her mother's death 

ok monish khurana i m surprise he wants to change himself for gunjan woww that's again one effect of gunjan which changed one casanova person to be family man 

i think this monishs's this desire will become reason for samrat to cover and protect gunjan which may lead gunjan to fall for him and he himself will find fell for her as well 

i can imagine painful sites of this story which will lead heartbreaks which will lead to follow responsibility to duties but i m sure love will find the way , love can't be forced to anyone it happens but one thing is clear rahul's reaction will be very much horrible i can feel with only one incident of gunjan's P.A job made him angry then i m sure gunjan will be on cross road to choose love or duties can't wait to read ahead thanks for this beautiful and enjoyable update Embarrassed btw u seriously described it wonderfully Thumbs Up thanks for pm and do continue soon 


Thanks a lot Aashi for this detail description of all 4 leads....Actually,You caught my point..... Gunjan's Character is center character of this story....She is too much simple,innocent n pure of heart.....and these quality of her...direct attract to every1.

RAHUL knows her very-well since childhood so,he is extra protective for her. He is not very ambitious person..he is satisfied with his Job....n wants to leave with his family... definitely, GUNJAN is part of his dream family. This FB scene of RaJan showed RAHUL as a Friend..... But,my next RaJan FB scene will show...RAHUL as a Lover.......I mean realization of love. and after that scene...you'll realise..why is she so important for his life?

SAMRAT 's character is very difficult character.....because,he is dealing with 2 personalities... first,a simple caring n lovable SAMRAT....and second,a hardcore,heartless Businessmen SAMRAT. he is very ambitious person.....Gunjan's simplicity,innocence n purity touched his heart..
but,he can't think...to LOVE her....because,his dream n ambition is different....he can't forget his mother death,childhood loneliness n his revenge feelings.....but,he is totally unexpected.....He can does anything....

n MONISH....his past was also not good....but,his approach for life is different....He is not ambitious like SAMRAT......He is alone too...so,wants to marry GUNJAN....but,his reason is different......He wants to change himself...only for Gunjan..because,he doesn't want to loose her...

This is really beginning of story.....Thanks a lot for your appreciation.Embarrassed n your long feed-back..Embarrassed(I think,First time....I have seen thisEmbarrassed)

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Posted: 05 April 2011 at 7:19pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by preety88

marvelous update.....cont soon


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Posted: 05 April 2011 at 7:22pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by monaya_sajan

super cool update.............loved it till infinity................


Thanks Buddy,for your appreciation.Embarrassed
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Posted: 05 April 2011 at 7:33pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by SwaNia_1

OMG....its amazing ....superb...mindblowing ...actually mind boggling update ...completely loved it .......spl FB scene brought tears in my eyes n i read trice ...it direct reached to my heart ...i must say u r an amazing writer ..........Rajan scene as always lovely Rahul is so caring towards Gunji n OMG  yeh Monish bhiApprove...kiya hoga ....iss LOVE RECTANGLE KA....I M WORRIED N CURIOUS  tooWink...pls plss Joseph cont soon  intezaar nahii hota .......n thnx for the PM dear.......


Thanks Sonia for your sweet words for this Update.Embarrassed Thanks a lot for liking RaJan FB scene.... Read trice....? Its a really big compliment. RaJan scene was important for show rahul's bonding with Gunjan...and Yes MONISH...bhi....Embarrassed Definitely, ....Mushkil Bada Yeh PYAR Hai !EmbarrassedWink I'll post my next update very soon.

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Posted: 05 April 2011 at 8:36pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by 1gunjan7

Hey Joseph Hello Smile.OMG!! Man U r too Awesome..Thumbs UpThumbs Up...What an amazing and magnificent updateClap..........Yaar Kabhi toh BAD update write kiya karo yaar so that I can criticize U..WinkLOL.....But Ur update is always so so so soooooooooooooooooo Goodddddddddddd ,so so so much Rockinggggggg and U write so well ,so excellently and properly that their is nothing 2 criticize......U r a brilliant infact Brilliant is a small word to describe Ur awesome writing skills ..So I will say U r an extra Fantabulous , Fantastic , Stupendous and Rocking writer.....U r really very good......I absolutely love ur FF and Ur writing skills......U r magnificent...Clap.........This Update was just Superb,Gr8,toooo Mindblowing and Fabulous..Clap..Infact Ur update is so Magnificent that I have No words 2 describe how I am feeling I am falling short of words and I Am speechless....Just speechless So I will say this BAHUT MAZZA AAYA Update read karkey........Thumbs Up........................U have described everything each character and their emotions and thoughts infact everything Each scene really well...Dialogues were fantastic..perfectly written update....Thumbs Up.....Clap..Good work buddyThumbs Up.

-Thanks a lot Gunjan for these compliments.....Embarrassed Thank God...I am still on earth...not in cloud 9.EmbarrassedLOL No yaar! I am very simple writer....and always use very simple words n emotions of humans.....I want to connect my story n Characters with some real peoples....with real feelings...nothing more.I am glad if,you liked it.Embarrassed


The update was not only Excellent but also Wonderfull , interesting and SHOCKINGShocked.........Shocking u will say how ? Well Shocking because Of MONISH OMG!!Shocked I am shocked after reading that Monish also wants her 2 be Mrs MONISH KHURANA....OMG!! WHATS thisShocked....HE ALSO
...ShockedApprove....First RAHUL wants her 2 be MRS RAHUL NANDA Rahul ka toh I can understand He and gunjan are friends and Family and grown up together..... But  Monish is dreaming also and he has not even talked 2 gunjan and he wants 2 marry herShocked.....and 3rd Samrat is also happy that he has met Gunjan and is changing Wink.

- MONISH wants to marry GUNJAN.....and change to himself...only for GUNJAN....  She is not a stranger face for him...very soon I show MONISH's  side story..till then WaitEmbarrassed....BTW,He is very strong 'Candidate'.....Embarrassed

1 Sweet innocent ,extra lovable, januable ,beautifull and caring GUNJAN and 3 Deewaney ..2 who r in love with her and Want 2 marry her and 3rd Samrat doesnt know he is in love with Gunjan But he will know soonWink............OMG!! KYA HOGAShocked
ConfusedWinkSmile...............BUT WHO WILL GUNJAN CHOOSE??????Confused...............MAN WHAT A QuadrilateralThumbs Up .(.WELL I cant call it a triangle as it has 3 sides and in this situation 3 people are in love with one Princesses SO quadrilateral which has 4 sides) .....MAZZA aa raha hai bahut....KYA HOGA??Wink.......story is getting more interesting.......kahin 4th person ki entry ho gayi toh kya hoga inn 3 ka??WinkBig smile..just joking..Plss Donot Mind JOSEPH.....But truthfully story is really progressing extremely well Thumbs UpI am loving this twists a lottt.....   1qs is who will Gunjan fall in love with??Confused........... letss see......Wink.

-Don't worry! Another 4th ki entry nahin hogi.....these 3....enough for her.Embarrassed
and,Who will GUNJAN fall in love with.....?? who will GUNJAN choose....?? This is suspense of this story... but,I can say.....they both are different person......and her marriage.... is biggest surprise for you......so...wait...!!


On the whole Rahul n RM scenes were amazing and Rm scolding was correct as Rahul was too rude with Gunjan....and their conversation was amazing it was a natural mother-son convo..Thumbs Up....thru this conversation rahul realised his mistake.... ButRahul Hates SamratShocked Shockedhe was jealous of Sam But HATE i think rahul is behaving little childishly Rahul thinks samrat is Hardcore heartless WELL U know I wanted 2 say This 2 rahul  U shouldnot judge the book by its cover as sometimes inside story kuch aur hi hoti hai Samrat is not heartless Infact he shows that he is 2 protect himself....

I feel Rahul is caring But he is too over possessive of Gunjan and over protective and Fb scene prooved why is he so over protective....and THIS  FB scenes were STUPENDOUS the way u wrote then Gunjan as a child and her pain after loosing her parents n wanting 2 go 2 GOD all this n more talk which she had with rahul Bought tears 2 my eyesCryCry.....I could feel her pain CryCry..U expressed a young child pain extremely well...Fb scene was too emotional...
Cry.and As 4 rahul as a boy feeling jealous of gunjan I feel as BOY rahul is the only child and suddenly another child came 2 live in his house and she was give whole attention so rahul jealousy which u showed was a natural reaction which can happen with any child N u showed this very well...Clap... and thru this RAJAN FB scenes I realised That gunjan is extra more innocent and  lovable girl......No wonder rahul wants 2 protect her from any pain n thats why he made a promise 2 be with her always.......she is just too sweet ....their whole talk was superbThumbs Up.

- RaJan FB scene is very important sequence of RaJan story......RAHUL's jealousy is natural.. he can't tolerate to share his things with another child......second side...Gunjan.......... she is suffering from her pain...she knows......this is not her house.....and she orphan....so, she isn't demanding......but,Rahul realized his fault on a very right time.... Thanks for liking this scene.


......But I think still rahul still is over possessive and he should give Gunjan space 2 make her decisions whether Good or bad happy or painfull as it is necessary 4 Gunjans groW*H in life............Gunjan has give promise 2 rahul this shows how much she trusts him  BUT What will happen if Rahul asks something which if she fulfills will break her heart......?????.....and give her pain .....Rahul has decided not 2 give gunjan pain ever I feel he will be the cause of her pain.....lets see kya hoga???..

-You will get all your answer soon till you have to wait...Embarrassed


Rajan balcony scene and conversation was too sweet ..
the way he apologised and calmed her down n cared 4 her and made her laugh also showed Rahul is a very nice person and cares 4 n loves gunjan a lotttt...........Smile............Loved this part very muchClap...........

Monish OMG!! Shocked....HE ALSOWink.......he is ready 2 change 4 gunjan but will he??Confused...and I want 2 know his past story how he met gunjan etc??????...his talk with the caller was also superb.....Thumbs Up................

- Thanks for liking RaJan Balcony scene n Monish part....very soon...I'll show....MONISH's side story...till then wait.Embarrassed

N now Samrat man he is dreaming about Gunjan and changing Wow! but he doesnt know yet he has fallen in love with her I hope he realizes soon.....and he is getting married in one month and WILL he change his plans 4 his love?? Samrats dad is responsible 4 sam this deep hurt Mr shergill is really SelfishAngry...................Sam wants revenge but doesnt he realize he will spoil his n richa life both............I feel samrat needs Gunjans love n her in his life more then rahul or monish as Only Gunjan can change n heel samrat n give him happiness.....But WIll Samrat let his heart rule over his mind ??? lets see what happens in these 4 characters lives??Confused

- SAMRAT is totally confused about his real feelings...because his priority of life is different.
so,No time for LOVE n all. lets see....what happens..but,not only 4...its 5.. RICHA is also thereEmbarrassed


The story is getting more n more interesting and  donot apologize 4 writing long updates Joseph as WE All love your Long updates a lottt infact they r not that long so RElax buddy ...I love ur updates n story line completely ...WELL Done ...Clap.........Do Update soon and Thanks 4 pm....Smile

1 qs I have U wrote this 2 swati ie Swania-2
I was also crying during writing that part....Cryactually,I wrote that scene in Oct.10 period.... WHAT DOES THIS MEAN OCT.10 period?? .......

- Actually,I wrote this story.....last year.....but,I was not confident about readers reaction...so,I postponed my Idea to post on IF.Embarrassedthat time,I was silent visitor of IF-MJHT Forum.Embarrassed....

Once again Stupendous update and story is progressing rockingly ..Excellent story Clap...................SORRY 4 SUCH A LONG COMMENT JOSEPH I hope I donot bore u with my long comments...........................

Love GunjanSmileSmile

Thanks again Gunjan for your this sweet long feed-back.Its really a lot to me.Embarrassed

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Posted: 06 April 2011 at 2:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SHAMSHIR-MJHT

Clap FABULOUS Part Bro.Clap Clap Clap Totally AWESOMEClap I loved whole parts...specially RaJan FB scene....It was so touchy n Emotional....I couldn't stop my tears after reading this....CryCryCry
Hats off to you for this......ClapClapClap I loved Son-Mother(RAHUL-RM) convo a lot....a very balanced n matured talk....Clap RaJan scene was extra spl. and SAMRAT....MONISH scene was Superb....I really want to know more about MONISH's character...Shocked I am surprised...did he know GUNJAN,B4...?? Please,Update soon....




Thanks Bro for your appreciation n your nice feed-back.Embarrassed Thanks for liking whole parts n specially RaJan FB scene....Embarrassed I'll display MONISH's character...very soon...Embarrassed in very proper way.Please wait... Thanks a lot for your precious feed-back here.Embarrassed

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Posted: 06 April 2011 at 2:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ekta_monaya

YAY! YAY! me 1st to comment.......LOL.....dekha joseph i tld u na WAIT & WATCH......i fulfilled my commitment......u knw wat i reserved my comment in morning 7'o clock......actully yesterday my laptop did not logout well due to some error & so while i was leaving 4 my xam in morning i suddenly rememberd abt my laptop & was logging out wen i thot to chk i-f ka page & then i got my 'GUT FEELING' again abt u updating & so i chkd & to my shock ur update was der.......i cud not blive myself & quickly reserved.....its just soooooooooo funny yaar.......m sure u must b ROFLING after reading this.....LOLROFL.
Yaa....Its really '7th Wonder' for me...because,It was totally unexpected....ShockedEmbarrassedBefore,sending PMs...how to you know about my Updates...Shockedn real posting time..??Shocked I must say your 'Guts Feeling' or '6th Sense' or 'Intention' whatever....WinkSmileIts very...very strong.SmileLOL and,I was On-line that time..n my expression was....ShockedShockedShockedLOL
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.....so m back in action & this is the '7th wonder' according to u......LOL
ok now cuming to the update........as always m going to repeat my words.......it was awesummmmmmmmmmmmm, mind-blowinggggggggggg, fantasticcccccccccc, superbbbbbbbbbbbb update........if u cont to give such updates to OXFORD walo ko taarifo ki nayi dictionary nikalni padegi........seriously man m just short of words.......like dumd-struck & speechless.......y din u join i-f before???? abhi tak humlog ko aur kitne fabulous FF's padhne ko mil jaate........but its never too late......m soooooooooooooooooo happy that u joined FF & we got 2 read MBYPH........really no one wud've been able 2 do justice to this FF & characters, the way u do........dil se HATS OFF 2 U YAAR........ClapClapClap......ur the biggest inspiration for a writer.........

Kyun OXFORD waalon ko pareshaan kar rahi ho....?LOLLOL n I didn't join I-F before....because,I was really not sure about readers reaction...that time....Embarrassed after all Its a very serious type of 'love story'....n totally dealing with relationship....very less light movements....Me and biggest inspiration for a writer...?Shocked Its funny Yaar....LOLKyun Future writers ki team ko spoil kar rahi ho....LOLLOLsabhi mil kar maarenge....LOL
ROFLROFL.

the scene of RAHUL & his MOTHER was soooooooooo emotional........really it was awesummmmmmmmmmmmmm but the best scene was the FB scene........OMG! poor gunjan.......CryCry.....seriously i had tears in my eyes wen i read it........u wer rite yaar.......it really bot tears to my eyes.....Clap.....gunjan is soooooooooooo innocent......god shez much more innocent & sensitive than the MJHT gunjan.......i was crying wen she was telling abt her parents to rahul.........poor girl & rahul used to hate her...????? i dont blive it.......its impossible 2 hate a person like gunjan.......m crying & reading that scene again & again yaar........Cry......u did complete justice to the scene yaar.........this is only for this scene.......ClapClapClap
Thanks for liking both scene....specially,RaJan FB scene....that scene is very close to my heart...because,first time I cried..when,I wrote it...and 2nd time....during typing that scene. Actually,RAHUL was feeling jealous that time.....he was the only 1 child of his parents....He didn't ready for share his parents love with Gunjan...this is natural thing....second side..,Gunjan knew..now,she is orphan because,she lost her parents....she is not demanding....she is alone....and in this scene....she is sharing her innocent thought n view about death n her parents memory..... so,Its really touchy.Thanks for your appreciation.Embarrassed
 
 
& then cuming to monish's scene.........god i dunno wat shud i say abt this guy......i mean isne itni lambi chaudi FAMILY PLANNING bhi kar li......i swear this RAHUL & MONISH r MAD!!!!!!! i mean koi usko Mrs. Rahul Nanda banane ki soch raha h to koi usko Mrs. Monish Khurana........
god this 2 people inka kuch karo.......kitne HAWA ME MAHAL bana rahe ye dono.......i mean they dont evn know wats der in gunji's heart......doesn't it matter to them....???? cnt this 2 guys think beyond thier love????
they dont evn know wats in gunjan's mind & heart.......chalo rahul ka to samajh me aata h coz maybe he can think gunjan luves him since they r best friends since childhood but monish???????? usne gunjan se abhi tak baat bhi nahi ki h.......i seriously dunno how to react on this one.......Confused& wats that GUNISH hmmm???? it sounds so wierd.....ugggghhhhh.....my head is spinning.....i think SaJan makes the best pair name so that's it......4 me its SaJan always.....bus ab 1 samrat hi bacha h jisne gunjan ko ab tak Mrs. Samrat Shergill nai banaya.......bas yehi reh gaya h........LOL but i'll b the happiest if samrat thinks abt Gunjan as Mrs. Shergill........Embarrassed

MONISH's story is also very interesting part of this story.....GUNJAN is not stranger face for him....EmbarrassedI'll clear his side of story very soon.....Actually,First I decide to edit his character...Embarrassedbecause,of his bold languages.....after all,he is Casanova....and most important thing is...his reason of pain n loneliness is very different....but,now i decided to show his character...without any cut or editing....definitelly,Language portion par again work karna hoga....Ouchbut,I'll not compromise with character's perfection.Embarrassed SAMRAT realization of love...is turning point of this story....but,not now.....Embarrassed
& wat is this??????????????????? samrat ready to get married to richa in 1 month?????????????????? no samrat, plzzzzzzzzzz dont do this yaar.......plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.......but his thoughts wer very emotional.......poor boy!!!! kitna saha h usne.........CryCry.....maybe more than gunjan.......coz gunjan k parents k death k baad she had rahul's Mom-Dad whu loved her as her Real Parents & rahul was also der for her but samrat, he was all alone.......he's ruining his & richa's life for revenge.......plzzzzzzz samrat dont do this plzzzz.....i hate Mr. Shergill.....aaj samrat ki jo bhi haalat h its only bcoz of him.......AngryAngry.....i think monish & rahul se zyada samrat ko gunjan ki zarurat h......he needs her more so that he bcums a normal fun-loving human-beign.......only gunjan can change samrat......m not saying this coz m a SaJan fan but i strongly feel abt this......maybe u dont agree with my POV but that's totally my look-out......Smile

I agree with you....but,here all 3 guys condition n situation is different.... MONISH is also suffering with his pain....RAHUL loves GUNJAN....beyond the limitations... SAMRAT is very clear about his Goal....Embarrassedhe wants to revenge with his father...and same side he loves his status too.... GUNJAN feeling is not important here... because,she is totally family person....she can't ignore her responsibilities....and,don't forget...here,all 3 guys in Grey shed....so,no compromise in this story......now,Race begines....Smile
& yes i admit that rahul is a caring & sweet human-beign......specially after the FB scene but that doesn't mean u can TAUNT me abt it.......LOL.....i still prefer Samrat over Rahul & will always.......awwww....rahul felt bad wen gunjan called Samrat 'ACCHE'.......awww....poor boy.....LOL.....hey BTW did u notice......the name RAHUL has a strong connection with SaJan......in my FF wen the concept came to my mind i was searching for a name 4 SaJan child & suddenly my mind said Rahul & i kept the name & even u have Rahul in ur FF as a vry important character.......but blive me it was unintentional.....i kept the name Rahul coz its really an awesum name.......it does not have any connection with ur FF ok......hope u did not feel bad abt the similar names....... & 1 more thing in my FF Rahul is ANGEL whu will unite SaJan again but in ur FF......well, u know it better.......Wink

Don't worry...I am not copyright holder of the name of RAHUL. I take this name from SRK...So,I think...after SaJan...RAHUL fever is full 'ON' in SaJan FFs....


it was mind-blowinggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg, superbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb, fantasticccccccccccccccc, awesummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm, out-of-this-world updateeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.......i dnt have words yaar.......plzzzzz koi 1 new dictionary invent karo ASAP........m short of words.......bus 1 cheez ki kami thi SaJan scene........m desperately w8ing 2 get bored by SaJan scenes yaar......wen will that day come???????? m eagerly w8ing 4 it.........Day Dreaming.....rest everything was just perfectttttttttttttttttttttt........ClapClapClap

I'll show next SaJan scene in my next update.....don't worry....and thanks for all appreciating words...these all enough for me...

ok so here ends my longest comment on the longest update.......aise hi long updates dete rehna, aise hi long comments milte rahenge......Wink & stop saying sorry 4 long updates coz we luv long updates so keep it up.....Thumbs Up.....hope u liked it......Embarrassed
Thanks a lot for this long reply.....Embarrassedactually,I say sorry to only some spl. readers....jinhen Long Updates pasand nahin.....EmbarrassedLOLAnyway,where is your Update...?Confused  ab toh exams bhi end ho gaye... and,yes...I want a long Update too...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
 
CONTINUE SOON
UPDATE ASAP
THNX 4 THE PM & DNT 4GET 2 PM ME..........(bolne ki habit ho gyi h...LOL) (I know....Tumhaare sabhi replies mein hai yeh LineLOLLOLLOL)

w8ing eagerly 4 nxt update........do cont soon........Smile


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Posted: 06 April 2011 at 5:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by gunurlove

Hey Joseph.....update was Awesome..Clap.Mind-blowing..LOL..and FabulouseThumbs Up....
What more would i say..as each and everything which i was feeling while reading the update..had already said by Ekta's comment.....LOL....
You r  truly a big big inspiration for the writers.....LOL
Rahul-Gunjan flash back scene was the Bestest Scene of the update.....even i had tears in my eyes by feeling Gunjan's pain n lonliness....Cry.Shez sooooooooooo innocent.....
i was  feeling her pain when she was missing her parents n crying....CryCryCry..........then Rahul's care for her....everything was Superb.......ClapClap
U know what 1st time i was thinking that Your SS is a Perfect...having a strong Concept..and completely full of Excitment..thrills and Passionate base Story for Monaya's new show..............WinkWinkWink.........
Truly its a veryyyyyyyyyy nicely wriiten and u completely justify with all characters.......i know Rahul and his family has taken care of gunjan..they love her alottttt ..and Rahul is possessive for Gunjan..and his possessivness is completly correct on its place....but still i dont want him to come between Sajan...........Confused
while reading the update i was feeling like....Gunjan was alone..but she got Rahul's family....but Samrat is still all alone as if he was in his childhood too.........what will happen when these too lonely persons fall in love with eachother...eagerly waiting for that scen..but now what is this....Samrat-richa marriage within one month.....whats this .........ShockedShockedShocked
 and really har koi Gunjan ko apni apni Mrs bnane k sapne dekh raha he....pehle Rahul...ab ye ek or aa gya.....
Oh Goddddddddd now who is this Monish.....Samrat-gunjan k bech me ek or HADDI.....AngryAngry
Koi Gunjan ko btae k 3-3 log us k peche Pagal hue ja rahe hen...n she doesn't know.. about it..even nor abt single person of them..... Tongue
Although there was no single scene of Sajan in this update...but it was Fantastic..Clap
plzzzzzzzzzz  update soon the next part....and hope soo Gunjan would continue her  job as a Sami's P.A
 


Thanks a lot Buddy..(Sorry! I don't know your nameEmbarrassed) for your precious feed-back.Embarrassed and about 'Inspiration' Embarrassed what can I say.....abhi tak toh koi inspired hua nahin...LOLEmbarrassed n EKTAA...she is also a very very good writer even 10 time better then me.....Embarrassed

Thanks for liking RaJan FB scene.....Actually,I really wanted to show a pain of little girl...who lost her parents suddenly. I think,maine kaafi saare bandon ko rula diya...Embarrassed n thanks for recommendation this story for MoNaya's New show...EmbarrassedLOLWinkLOL phir toh FORUM par waar hogi...SaJan vs RaJan vs GuNish Fan.......ROFLROFLROFL .....Show se zyada FORUM 'HIT'...sorry....'HEAT' ho jaayega......ROFLROFL But, woh nice experience hogaEmbarrassed...just kidding...Don't mind.Embarrassed

I agree,SAMRAT is still all alone...but,he denies this fact....He is ready to marriage with RICHA because,he knows this is the right decision for him. SAMRAT-RICHA marriage sequence is important part of this story so,I can't talk much more about this topic...please,wait.Embarrassed n who is Monish...? You'll know very soon.....Embarrassed I'll post my next part very soon.....n again thanks a ton for your long feed-back.Embarrassed

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Author: KSG.JW   Replies: 126   Views: 20205

KSG.JW 126 20205 20 December 2011 at 10:59pm by AMMY12
WAADA (sajan ff)romantic sajan pg19

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a sajan OS: union of sajan updated on page 12

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SAJAN OS : sajan forvever

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Delishus 15 7822 09 August 2010 at 5:35am by ar_sajan4evr
sajan oneshot gallery sajan pg8 notepg15

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