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..Mushkil Bada Yeh PYAR Hai ![1] {A SaJan FF} (Page 134)

starasdf IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 9:09pm | IP Logged


Sorry for the extremely late editEmbarrassed 

Awesome part as usual. First meeting of Monish and Gunjan as well as the instant disliking of each other, the two boys, Monish and Rahul.  
Its cute how Monish is happy when Gunjan even looks at him and when she talks, he's on cloud nine. But Rahul on the other side falls from his cloud nine and of course vice versa as well.

It found it a little funny that Gunjan couldn't recognize Monish at first, because of thier long and short meeting, but Monish is in love with her.

Samrat...Boy he must be seriously confused with these feelings that he's deciding to fire Gunjan, AFTER making her sign that contract where she can not quit. 

On the reply of my other comment you asked me who would I pick out of the three? My answer: No idea. They all have good qualities and bad qualities. Maybe I'll be able to pick later on in the story when the different faces of the three are shown. I'll remember this question and answer it one day (: Embarrassed

The last bit was written perfectly and very effective as well. (:



Edited by starasdf - 11 June 2011 at 6:19pm

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..Ambika.. IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 10:00pm | IP Logged

first of all a really big SORRY for replying so late..Embarrassed
i seriously forgot tht i have ressed here also..LOLWink
a brilliant updt was really wonderful...loved it to the core..
you guys are handling it soo well...

Continue soon and thnks for the pm and tolerating my resses..EmbarrassedLOL



Edited by ambikamuskaan - 12 June 2011 at 12:32am

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agreatperhaps IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 11:29pm | IP Logged


I am extremely sorry for the last edit!Embarrassed But I completely forgot and when you had sent I reminder I was extremely busy!Ouch So, now coming back to the part I really really loved the way you showed everthing!ClapClap Every single emotion, character was shown flawlessly!Clap I love it..

It was really nice the way Rahul-Monish had the sudden dislike for each other and the Car thing!LOL
I don't really remember what all happened as it was I guess last month!Tongue Anyways, all in all an awesome update!Big smile Thanks a ton for the PMs and ReminderBig smile and so sorry for the delay!Embarrassed

Well Congratulations on your new thread! It looks amazing and the updates are superbly executed.

Best Wishes and Love, NivritiHeart

Edited by SajanRox - 25 June 2011 at 12:07am

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cool_tuli IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 12:41am | IP Logged

''' edited''''
It was indeed a huggeee part...
Gosh it took me 2 days to finish the whole thing will all emotions...LOL LOL
LOLN I cudn't stop loving the SaJan red n blue siggy by aashi...Embarrassed
Well I really lykd the Nanda house parts... They were dramatic but really practical...
I am wid RAHUL... he is absolutely right...
That MONISH he is purposely doing that...
I don understand how can a person b sooo innocent that they can't even get an intuition about a person's intensions!!!Confused Confused Confused
Confusedthe way MONISH lukd at GUNJAN... everybody cud hav had understood that...Angry
Staring a girl on d first visit... GR8888 SANSKARS hun... Tongue Angry Ido MONISH...
SAMRAT was tooo gud... lyk I hav told u earlier that I love Bossy SAM more than LOVING one... I guess here his nature was d best one... I loved him allott... But is he really gonna avoid GUNJAN now??? Shocked Shocked haawww... nooo... plsss... arrey y shud i worry... he can neva avoid her Wink Big smile
Pyaala pyaala SAM...
The update was overall brilliant...
the writing skill was absolutely mind blasting...
Very very very nice update dear...!!!!
Keep it up...

Edited by cool_tuli - 27 May 2011 at 11:57pm

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358674 Goldie

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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 12:42am | IP Logged
excellent part 

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..Amira.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 1:10am | IP Logged
Awww Wink

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Glowing_Star IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 2:26am | IP Logged
It was really beautiful. Keep it up & the precap looks interesting. "The Black Monday"   looking forward to it... Day Dreaming

Edited by tasnin96 - 26 May 2011 at 2:26am

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-Kina- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 3:54am | IP Logged
awesome update
continue soonSmile

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