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Tuje kaisa lagta hai?~Maaneet~Thread 1 (Page 5)

komlika IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 2:58pm | IP Logged
haila........naughty naughty maaneet Blushing Blushing

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mitzi11 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 3:05pm | IP Logged
Geet "nahi main nahi jao gi muje muje sharam ati hai"...Maan smirked my God this girl wants to pretend that they do not do these types of thingsLOL "Acha Geet main dadima ko kehta hoo hum yaha 3/4 din rehe ge..teek hai?"..Geet nodded..Maan took his mobile and rang dadima to tell her they were not coming so soon he had some business to attend..samja karo darlingWink
love that part Maan turning naughty naughty
super update pls cont soon

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Manan-Pani4eva IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 3:57pm | IP Logged
Scene 7...

Geet was looking at their "MG lovemaking cottage"...well thats what Maan would have called itLOL...she was thinking how special and private this place was for both of them. It was beautiful from the last time she had seen it. She thought I never knew that Maan was so sentimental.

She entered the kitchen and saw that Maan had been so prepared for this all that he stocked up all the groceries...she admired him for his pragmatic style. He wanted her so much that he must have put so much thought for their "first time".

Geet started preparing food for the evening...while she was doing that she made Maan coffee..just the way he liked it. Maan was sitting down with his mobile talking to his clients. She passed the coffee he lovingly looked at her and mouthed "thanks". She turned back to the kitchen disapointed that Maan was not paying attention to herOuch...she slapped her head and said "pagli khud kaha ke aap ne muje zakhm diye aur khud hi umeed karti ho ke wo paas aye".

Maan finished tieing up his business loose ends and made his way to Geet to see if she had finished cooking. Both set the table and started eating. Maan looked at Geet and thought "maine kuch ziyada hi kal rath kar diya..ab main Geet ko recover hone deta hoo..aur Maan control karo apne aap ko"ROFL

Maan pretendded he was tired "Main sone ja raha hoo...meri neend poori nahi hui"..Geet felt upset what happened to her MSK that couldnt keep his hands off her.

Geet followed and alreadi Maan was playing sleepSleepyLOL Geet lay down on the other side of the bed and started looking Maan whom was facing the other way. Geet felt a strange feeling that she ached for his closeness, she wanted him crushing her, she wanted his kisses and she wanted him inside herBlushing

Her passion overtook her shyness..she moved closer to Maan and hugged him from behind..he opened his eyes but remained still...she hugged him tighter and tighter and then very tight. Her hands went under his vest feeling his stomach and chest..Maan shuddered but thought "ok sherni carry on"Wink Geet started kissing his back and back of the now she was half sitting..thinking why isn't this working on Maan. Then she explored his whole hott body and touched his manly parts...Maan instantly responded saying huskily "Geet"!

Geet felt like his lover that she did manage to turn him onEmbarrassed..Maan turned  around and pulled his wife on top of him and kissed her gently...fully aware that he had to be gentle. Then they both rolled on the bed kissing each other all over and at one point they were about to fallLOL

Maan for tonight became the gentle lover and slowly peeled off Geet's clothes and then his. He parted her and played around with her but Geet could not take it and she kept closing and he kept opening. Maan was giving her pleasures with his mouth and she was exploding.

Maan realised she couldn't take it anymore...he rolled her on top of him and said "Geet this is for you...for your comfort level" Maan led her by teaching her what to do and she forgot her soreness and looked after her pleasure and she knew this time it was her turn to please her husband her loverBlushing

It was pure bliss and both had gone into a new wave of emotions and passion...the second time was a exploring experience and both knew they could not control themselves now..every night was going to be filled with wild passion and desires.

Before nodding off Maan teased Geet "acha Geet muje ye batao tum mera rape isi tara karti raho gi aur ilzaam muj par laga do gi ki kiya halat aapne meri kar di hai!"LOL

Geet replied "jaise ke aap kuch nahi karna chahte te..."Tongue
Maan laughed and pinned Geet and held her hands and kissed her passionatley.

Edited by Mahi-Maan - 06 February 2011 at 4:09pm

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rsroopali IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 5:01pm | IP Logged
fullllllllllllyyyyyyyyy hottttyyyyy n naughtyyyyyy maaneet
mitzi11 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 8:24pm | IP Logged
wow Geet so naughty love the part Geet
seducing Maan fascinating  

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Manan-Pani4eva IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 07 February 2011 at 12:48am | IP Logged
Scene 8

The birds were chirping and Maaneet could hear the wind and then the pitter patter of rain. Both husband and wife lay hugging with Geet's head on Maan's chest.

Maan rubbed  his wife's arms and called her with a low voice "Geet?"
"ummmhhh?" replied Geet
"haan main kuch soch rahi thi"
"acha to tum sochti bhi ho?"LOL
Geet annoyingly turned to leave but Maan as always grabbed herEmbarrassed
"Geet main mazaak kar raha ta...acha muje ye batao tum kiya soch rehi ti?"
"..Main soch rehi ti ke aap ne humari actual suhaag rath main aap ne gaaya tha ke ...main teri mohobhat main pagal ho jao ga muje aisa lagta hai tuje kaisa lagta hai? lekin uss waqt tho hum ek dooje keliye taras rehe te lekin ab aisa maloom hota hai ke itna pyar har roz karke pagal ho jaye ge!"Blushing

Maan naughtliy looked at Geet, he knew she was referring to their intense love making...Embarrassed
"Geet tume ye sab kuch acha nahi lagta?"
"Nahi Maan darti hoo ke hum apni feelings ko parso rath se rok bhi nahi sakte hai"Ouch
"Acha tum mere excuse bana rehi ho ya apne liye?"Tongue
"Maan aapko shararat sooj rehi hai!"Angry

Geet annoyingly got up and went into the bath...when she came out in her bathrobe...Maan wasn't there...but she could hear him working outEmbarrassed No wonder he had such a good physique he was so dedicated to his workouts.Blushing

She opened one of her wardrobes and found it full of pretty clothes...she smiled at how caring and thoughtful Maan was...she selected his favourite colour...white.

It was a white choori daar dress with light silver embroidery..and a very well cut dress from the back. Geet put it on and thought it really flattered her figure and hoped Maan liked it on her. Geet started putiing perfume on her neck, forearms, stomach and back. She had read somewhere that  if you want your lover to kiss you where you want you should apply it in that place. Embarrassed

Sitting infront of the mirror she saw that her face was getting better...and in a few more days they can head home. She applied her makeup and did her eyes properly to make them stand outDay Dreaming Her mascara was well applied to give her eyelashes a long luscious look. Geet wore bangles on both sides and started doing her hair. She had gorgeous hair up to her waist.

Geet did a parting that she realised Maan had finished his workout and already had showered. He came out in his jeans lookingly smokingly hottDay Dreaming Geet blushed and he naughtily cam towards Geet. Geet got up and blushed..she was embarrased her husband was top half naked. At night it was dim and she was too carried away with her feelings to care about being shy.

"Geet aik cheez ki kami hai" she looked at him perplexedConfused he looked at the dressing table as if to find something. He took a pinch of sindoor and applied it to her maangEmbarrassed...Geet blushed. He didn't apply they way she does barely there..he made sure it was all on her maang. This made him satisfied that she was his. She looked so hot in sindoor he thought. Geet had placed her hands on his chest...Maan teased "Agar tume muje choona chahti hoo its ok with me".
"nahi wo main" Geet was looking for excuses but she had none.

Maan smirked and started walking towards Geet till they bumped against a wall...perfect! He softly with his hand raised her face and eyed up her face...teasing her where he will kiss...bringing his lips sometimes to her eyes and pulling back..her cheek pulling back, her head pulling back...Geet was getting frustrated what is her Maan doing?Confused

"Geet tum ne kiya samja main tume kiss karoo ga?" Maan looked at her with bedroom eyes...Geet stared at Maan and with both her arms lowered his head near her and crushed him to her thats what Maan wantedBlushing...The kiss was very passionate alternating from french to slow to biting to sucking...Maan took both of Geet arms and forcefully putt them behind her and started kissing her neck and then back to her lips....

Maan's phone rang and he looked disappointedOuch "ye koun hain kabab main haddi?" LOL It was dadima! "Haan dadima hum kal tak aajaye ge..aap fikar mat kare...haan Geet bilkul teek hai main uss ka poora kiyaal rak raha hooWink" he naughtly looked at Geet her hair messed up and her makeup ruinedEmbarrassed

Maan carrried on talking to his dadima and Geet quickly fixed herself and did a qick exit before her hubby grabs her againBlushing Her tummy was rumbling and she needed food...she made a full english brekkie and was about to take it to the table that Maan turned up and goes "something smells nice...acha english breakfast good very good!"

Geet realised her lipstick was all over his mouthEmbarrassed "Maan"
she got aa tissue and came near Maan...Maan thought  she is becoming boldLOL
She wiped his lips and he goes "ohhhhh thank you...he beamed a smile at her and said "chalo kuch ka le muje bhook lagi hai aur meri aaj muje meri biwil kelaye gi" Blushing

Edited by Mahi-Maan - 07 February 2011 at 12:58am

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very nice and romantic fic............................cont soon.................
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