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Scene 5...

It was 1pm and Maan had still not managed to get up...arre yaaro he deserved extra sleepTongueTongue

Geet had got up...she yawned and stretched...she felt like a completly different women...a complete womenEmbarrassed.

She slowly got up and made sure her hubby did not get up...he was sleeping like a baby and she smiled at her good luck of having such a goodlooking and loving husband.

When she got up she saw a red sari...simple but elegant and sparkly killer earrings...and a note saying
"Geet muje pata hai ke tum muj se pehle utt gai hogi...ye sab tumare liye hai kyonki aaj sai maano main tum meri hogai ho..aur ye meri biwi keliye hai jis ne muje kal rath bohath khushi di...love Maan xxx".

Geet blushed at the fact they had done the deed and was remembering how hott last night had become...Maan had always been a charmerEmbarrassed..well it seemed a long time since they had married but it had only been 5 days..so one can imagine the sheer willpower they had to abstain!LOLWink

She got in the bath and it felt she was erasing all the marks of Maan's love...she put on the sari wore the victor ralph flowerbomb perfume he had bought her..she knew he found it irresistable on her. Geet was going to apply makeup and she saw the state her face was...she didnt need makeup...he eyes were bruised, her lips were puffed up and her neck was covered with love bites...Maan had defnitley unleashed his wild side. She felt saddd that she couldnt look beautiful for Maan today.

Geet felt blessed and she went to pray to thank God for blessing her with Maan and keeping her safe...she actually cried when she was praying.

Maan woke up and saw Geet was in the small mandir he created for her..he smiled and went to have a shower. By the time he got ready Geet was making breakfast. He startled her with grabbing and turning her around...he noticed his poor Geet face and neck.

"Geet I am sorry kal rath maine tume hurt to nahi kiya...I am so sorry".
"Maan muje to pata nahi chala jab tak suba aaine main nahi dekha". Maan smiled and said "Geet kal rath was the best night wasn't it ummmhhh?"
Geet blushed and turned..."Maan thankyou sari aur jewellery keliye bahut khubsoorat hai"
"aur tumpar aur khubsoorat lagte hai"...Geet turned around like soemthing had overcome her she grabbed Maan's shirt. and  seductively turned her face up, her eyes had so much passion and love for him she moved her lips towards Maan and said seductively like a whisper "Maan I love you"...Maan was taken aback she never said "I love you" soooo passionatley and sincerly.

The next thing he knew he grabbed Geet and kissed her vigourously like he was sucking away her last breathBlushing

Geet had to stop him "Maan apka breakfast"...Maan looked sheepishly  and said "bhook kise hai jiske paas tumari jaise seducing wife hai!"Blushing

to be continued....




Edited by Mahi-Maan - 05 February 2011 at 9:24pm

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awesomeeeeeeeeee

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wow my dear its damn hot
BlushingBlushing poor Geet lovely
update pls cont soonnnnnnnnnn

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nice and hot updates ..... am loving it ...
 
lagee raho   LOL
 
love
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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 5:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sharmake11

wow my dear its damn hot
BlushingBlushing poor Geet lovely
update pls cont soonnnnnnnnnn


thanks honey...will update soon..wouldn't mind if guys could let me know which parts you likedTongueWink

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Originally posted by sindu555

nice and hot updates ..... am loving it ...
 
lagee raho   LOL
 
love
Sana


yeh will continue...please leave feedback of what parts you liked...cheersSmile

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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 1:45pm | IP Logged
Scene 6...continuation from scene 5

"aap nahi sudre ge!" blushed Geet...the mobile of Maan started ringing.."its dadima!" both got tenseTongue "Hello dadima...aap kaisee hai? ha wo main batana wala tha ke main aur Geet drive par ge te aur humari gari kharaab hogai...he winked at GeetWink acha aap Geet se bath kijiye"...Maan passed the phone to Geet.

"Dadima aap teek ho? sorry main janti hoon hume batana chahiye tha..." she felt Maan's long and sexy hands on her bare stomachBlushing...she got ripples inside her body and she felt ticklish...he pulled her close and she whispered "ye kiya kar rehe hai aap"? Maan whispered back "what do you think"?
Geet heart skipped a beat but she carried on "ha dadima hum jald ajaye ge"....Maan put her long locks on one side and gave her bare back wet kisses and blew on them....he was up to it again...Geet shivered and quickly cut the phone off she knew she would end up letting out a moan or say something and it would not look good infront of dadima.

"Geet tum dadima se bath kar rehi thi tum ne kaat kyoo diya" teased Maan.
"aap ko shararat sooj rehi hai...dekiye kiya halat aap ne meri kar di hai....
Maan gave a naughty look "acha? kya kiya hai maine..bolo na Geet"

Geet in her her mp3 mode started "mere chere ko dekiye aap ne kitne zakhm diye hai...aisa lagta hai kisi ne muje kitna peeta hai...meri gardan pe aap ke darto ke nishaan hai..main dadima aur Annie ko kaise miloo gee..wo kiya soche gee...main sehi tara chal nahi sakti kyon ki...Geet realised what she was saying...and stopped abruptly

Maan found it amusing that she was complaining about the way he loved her last night...but he kept a straight face.
"Geet tum teek keh rahi ho..tum iss halat main ghar tho ja nahi sakti..agar chali jao gi tho sab yahi soche ge ke Maan apni biwi ko kitna chahta hai"Embarrassed

Geet "nahi main nahi jao gi muje muje sharam ati hai"...Maan smirked my God this girl wants to pretend that they do not do these types of thingsLOL "Acha Geet main dadima ko kehta hoo hum yaha 3/4 din rehe ge..teek hai?"..Geet nodded..Maan took his mobile and rang dadima to tell her they were not coming so soon he had some business to attend..samja karo darlingWink


Edited by Mahi-Maan - 06 February 2011 at 2:56pm

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