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Tuje kaisa lagta hai?~Maaneet~Thread 1 (Page 128)

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 5:32pm | IP Logged

Scene 86

Geet was sitting alone thinking of her babies...about what she needs to buy them etc etc. Annie knocks on her door
"Geet kiya main andar aa sakti hoon?"
"Haan Annie".
Geet slightly shifted she was laying down.
"Sorry Geet tume disturb kiya"
"Koi baat nahin...Annie kuch kaam tah?"
"Haan Geet mera dost apni girlfriend ko surprise karna chahta hain...aur maine socha ke Maan bhai toh kaafi intense hain to unn se ziyada koun romantic hoga" Geet smirked "aur maine socha ke kuch ideas tum se lehti hoon ke tume kiya pasand ayaa tah jab vo koi romantic surprise karte teh"

"Annie waise toh bahut surprise unno ne muje diye lekin pehla surprise toh bahut hatke tah" Geet said shyly.
"Acha muje batao" Annie said excitedly.

"Maan ne muje ye kapre beje ke inn ko pehn kar main aao" Geet showed her the clothes

"Main tayaar hor kar ja rehi tih ke aik driver ayaa muje batane keliye ke Maan ne usse beja muje pick karne ke liye".

"Acha toh kaha gai tih tum" Annie wanted to know eagerly.
"Wo unn ka farmhouse hain na waha".
"Wowwww Maan bhai is so creative hain na?"Day Dreaming
"Haan ye toh hain"
"Acha aghe batao kiya hua"

Geet started telling Annie. Maan wanted to express his feelings to Geet physically he wanted at least a kiss from her. He had said I love you about a month ago so he wanted to take his relationship further.Embarrassed

Geet looked at her clothes she knew what was on his mind. *Agar nahin gai toh Maan Singh Khurana ka gussa jelna pare ga Geet chali ja..baaki Babaji ki marzi*.

Maan had sent those clothes on purpose to invoke feelings of Geet for him. Geet got ready she looked ravishing. She went and got to his farmhouse.

Maan was eagerly awaiting her..dressed in a navy shirt and jeans..he looked so dashing. His shirt as always was open flaunting his sexy chest. He was pure SOL.

Geet heart was beating fast *Babaji ye kiya iss tabela main muje le aye...pata nai kiya sooj raha hain Maan ko ab* she thought to herself. Now she was getting scared of being on her own.
"Maan...Maan kaha ho aap....Maan bahar aa jao muje dar lag raha hain".
She was actually getting scared....She saw a frog and she started running...Maan grabbed from behind holding her arms tightlyBlushing

...Geet knew Maan was close to her..he squeezed her arms she let out an "ouch"...her breathing quickened.

Both swayed to the beat...Maan looking seduced and Geet looking bewitched
Dhak dhak karne laga ho mora jiyara darne laga
saiyan haiya chor na kachi kaliyan tor na

Geet moved away Maan grabbed her choli dori seductively
Dil se dil milgaya mujse ye kaise haya, tu hain meri dilruba kiya lagti ho wa re wa

Geet takes his hand away that is touching her navelEmbarrassed

Dhak dhak karne laga mora jiyara darne laga

Maan aggresively grabs her hair and looks into her eyes
Apna jo piya kaha tune muje main mitte mitte sapne sajane lagi
Maan looks at her face and sings lovingly
Dekha jab rani jab maine tuje mere soi soi dharkan ghane lagi
Geet touched his torso feeling his silky shirt
Jadoo tera chahne laga meri nus nus main samane laga
Maan hold her tight and sways with her
Khud ko main bulane laga tuje sanso main basane laga
Geet kisses his foreheadEmbarrassed
Rishta hai rishta sathi tute ga na tore kabhi..Dhak dhak karne laga mora jiyara darne laga

Maan looks at her long locks with wild desires
Ulji hain khali khali lat teri, zar inn zulfo ko suljane toh de

Geet moves away to restrain his advancesBlushing
Itni bhi jaldi hain kiya tuje ghari apne miln ki toh aane toh de

Maan does not seem to care less and moves towards her

Aise na bahane bana meri rani ab toh bahon main aa

Geet covers his eyes to stop his eyes undressing herBlushing

Aise na nigahen mila koi dekhe ga toh soche ga kiya?

Maan grabs her and half lifts her
Masti chaye masti aaja lag ja ghale tu mere
Geet tries to run away from his grip
Dhak dhak karne laga ho mora jiyara darne laga
saiyan haiya chor na kachi kaliyan tor na

Maan moves towards her looking at her lipsBlushing
Dil se dil milgaya mujse ye kaise haya, tu hain meri dilruba kiya lagti ho wa re wa
By now he has her againt the wall
Dhak dhak karne laga mora jiyara darne laga

"Maan please muje jaane do" pleaded Geet.
"Agar kaho ke nahin jaane dhoo ga toh?"
"Toh main chilao gi"
"Chila lo yaha koi nahin aane wala"
"Maan aap kiya chahte hain"
"Main chahta hoon ke humara rishta aghe bare Geet"
"Matlab ye Geet ke I love you tak baat pounch ayi hain lekin aik mehboob ko aik mehbooba ko kuch aur bhi karna chahiye"
Geet knew what he was saying and she looked down feeling shy.
"Toh aap chahte hain ke main aapko kiss karoon?"
"Nahin bas tumari ijazat chahta hoon"
"Agar main inkaar kar doon toh"
"Toh Maan Singh Khurana zabardasti le lega"
"Pir aapne poocha kyon"?
"Bas aise hi...Geet tum meri ho..aur muje pata hain ke jo main chahta hoon tum bhi chahti ho"
"Acha? toh main kiya chahti hoon?"

Maan backed away and looked at her from her toes to her heavenily figure and face...he came near and held  her gently with one hand from the waist and the other hand cupping her face.

He flickered his eyes from her eyes to her lips..she trembled...her breathing seemed as if it had stopped.
"Geet you want this" he said in a husky voice
He gently moved towards her lips...she closed her eyes...she could smell his sexy perfume...he was real close...she rested her hands on his chest for support....she felt his warm breath near her...his breathing seemed heavy too..she felt his stubble near her cheek.

Maan placed his lips on hers...he knew it was her first time so he knew he had to be gentle and make her comfortable. She did not know how to respond so she stayed still. Maan placed a few kisses gently...and started to feel her back...she slowly started to respond she kissed him back...he built up the pace...he opend his mouth and parted her too to give open mouth kisses...she copied him....she placed her arms around his neck and came closer. He slid his tongue...she felt confused so she just let him explore her mouth. The kiss intensified...both started becoming aggressive. Maan hot blooded seemed to be getting carried away.

Geet had to do something she bit his lip "Ouch!"
"Maan behave yourself..humari shaadi nahin hui"
"Toh kiya hua hum shaadi toh kar  rahe hain na?"
"Toh iss ka matlab ke agar main aapko nahin rokti toh aap"
"Toh main tume kisi ke laik nahin chorta" he laughed.
"Maan! how could you say that to me?"
"Geet main mazaaq kar raha hoon agar tum comfortable nahin toh nahin magar agar tum chahti aaj kuch aur ho then I have no problem with it"Wink
"Maan iss se pehle aapki niyat badle Prem Chopra ki tara muje ghar chor de".
Maan laughed "Prem Chopra? good one".

"Oh my god Geet Maan bhai ne aisa kiya I can't believe it..bhai is so romantic and naughty too i must say".
Geet blushed...if only Annie knew that nothing still had changed.Blushing

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Edited by Mahi-Maan - 15 March 2011 at 5:40pm

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shah10 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 5:41pm | IP Logged
great part.
mitzi11 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 5:54pm | IP Logged
love it love it love it love it
love it super hit  scene
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pls cont soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
thanks pm
lakshmisalvadi Senior Member

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 6:03pm | IP Logged
Wink Wow
That was so sweet. Day by day tera Fanfic tho hot hotter hottest ho raha hai.
Keep it up dear.Clap
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preethia IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 10:21pm | IP Logged
wow...............very romantic first kiss bw maaneet...........loved it..............maan se zyada romantic aur koi ho hi nahin saktha
VSai2008 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 10:28pm | IP Logged
great partSmile
HawtieSeep Goldie

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 11:50pm | IP Logged
hey sorry that i couldn't leave comment before cause i had night school when i got ur pm i had about 3mints left so i decided to read it and press the like button but i couldn't leave a comment as i was gettin late i just got back now but don't ever dare to stop writing this otherwise u don't even know when i get i'm more rude then our MSK lol!!!!!!! just kiddin but mera gussa bahot i khraab hai seriously people had recommend it angermanagment classes to anyways so u better not stop cause i will do something that i don't know yetROFL.just kidin but pls continue and love u ClapClapClapClapClap r u happy i kind of wrote a hole paragraph........LOL
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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 11:55pm | IP Logged
u r one amazing writer......loved all ur updates....please continue soon! Smile a request - please adda link 2 ur updates and the pages no......appreciate ur efforts!

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