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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 2:31pm | IP Logged
great part.
love it.

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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 3:02pm | IP Logged
nice part
Loved it wen Maan tld her 2 4get her past and move on
Yayy Maaneet city tour in NY
Thanks 4 the PM
Cont soon Xx...
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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 4:49pm | IP Logged
wowwwwwwww want moreeeeeeeeeeeee

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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 5:02pm | IP Logged
Awesome FF...!!!
It's really different...!!!
Totally loved this Geet...!!!
Cant wait for the next part..!!
Do update soon and pls add me to your PM list

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Posted: 07 February 2011 at 7:33am | IP Logged
loved Maan -Geet convo...continue soon...

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Posted: 07 February 2011 at 7:38am | IP Logged
PART 7
Next morning.....geet came dawn wearing...
Short Prom Dress
 after some time maan came down wearing....

when both came came face to face get shockedShocked that....geet thought..
maan is looking dam hot....hmm on the other hand maan thought..
geet is looking dam sexy ..i dont belive that she is here....
for some time they r staring at each other then dm said..
dm:tum dono ek dusre ko he dekhte raho ge kya ya bahar bhi jana hai....
while geet maan ws emused that wat they were doing.....then they went out n geet said...
geet:maan i ll drive n that cool...
maan:sure ..ur city ..u r the one to show me soo y nt..with a smile..
geet thought he is nt that bad na hmm..
while driving they dint speak much... 
geet ws busy showing around the city to maan while maan who is staring n lisning to her non stop bak bak......hehehe
maan:geet chup bilkul chup....
geet:kya hua maan ..
maan:kya hua tum ...yeh muje puchna chiye ....geet confused
geet:aab bolo bhi nahi toh mai ja rahe hu...she turn arouund to go while maan grab her hand n pull her ....
maan:tum non stop bole ja rahe ho toh mai kya karu..
geet lost in his eyes n maan notice..
maan:geet..geet...geet come out of terance...
geet:uh - eh - mai - han toh tume city nahi dhekne ..joo asa bol rahe hoo mai tume ek toh dehka rahe hu or tum huh n moved away...
maan runs behind:geet ruko acha mere baat toh suno..
geet: what..
maan: can we b frnds if u want..
geet thought: hmm i think its nt a bad idea to b a frnd hmmm..
geet:ok frnds bt plz noo fight u know u fight alot.....n winks..Wink
maan: acha g mai nahi tum he start kate hoo huh..
geet: nahi g tum abhi bhi tum ne he ki hai....
maan:nahi tum...
geet:tum...
maan:tum...
geet:tum.....
with that they r arguing like small kids n people r staring at them n after some time they reliase n burst into laughter..
geet laughing n maan lost in her laughter......
maan:u should laugh offteen it good fr health u know...with a smile..
geet:hmmm i dint know before but now i know n i ll remember ....\
maan:lets goo n eat some thing..
geet:ok lets eat pizza wat says..
maan:ok lets go..
they went to pizza shop n order for 2 large mushroom grilled pizza..n when waiter arrived..they started eating n maan notice geet eating like a small kid with making sounds ..
maan:u r just like a kid....do u know that...
geet:hmmm wat that means..while eating..
maan:means making sounds while eating like kids...
geet :u should n its yummy to eat like this..
maan also started eating like her n he actually enjoyed it...after that 
...they roam around...
geet:see there is a ice cream parlor ..lets goo..
maan:ok
get:wat will u have..
maan:same as u..
geet:sure...
maan:yeah order nw..
geet:2 dark choclate cups with lots of cheery on top...with a wide smile...
maan n geet having there icecream while roaming the city n then sat saw a park..
maan:lets go ther n sit..
geet noded..
geet:maan thanx u..
maan confused:for what...
geet:for giving me a change...
maan:geet its not a big deal...okk
geet:it is n nw i really forget my past n i started living my life n u r the first person with whom i started soo i wana than u....
while maan got a shock of his life that geet said such a sweet words for him..
maan:ok know we shoud talk new..
geet hmm..
maan:geet..
geet:hmmm
maan:y u do nt want to come to india....
geet:i want lie bt my mom dad r in india nw day soo..
maan:soo wat geet,if u move on soo b with ur words..
geet:i think u r right maan....
maan:soo
geet: soo kya...
maan:r u coming to delhi next week or nt...
geet  :let me think...
maan ws confused that wat would she do know..
n geet laughed n said..
geet:i will b coming n dm also as she want to meet ur dadi..soo i guss i hve no options .....
maan:thanx u n i wana ask u ame think can i...........
geet:maan tum kab se permission le kar bolne lage...bolo aab...
maan confused hw to start...
maan:y dont u shift ur business to india...
geet shocked......
maan:bolo geet..
geet:y should i....
maan:y u wont...
geet:maan...
maan:geet......
geet:i hve all my frnds n all other here soo..
maan:soo it that a reason that u dont wana goo..
geet:yes...
maan:geet hve u ever thought of dm...that wat she wants..
geet:she has every think..
maan:no she doesnt....she also needs frnds n family which r in india....
geet:here also she hve...
maan:u really think soo..
geet thought bt dint say any think..
maan:geet she cares for u n i think nw its ur turn to return her way say......
geet:hmmmmm
maan:geet kuch bolo aab..
geet:i think u r right..
maan happy..
geet:ok then me n dm will shift n more over i m also having frnds in india also..
maan:thats great...
geet :soo lets go n tell dm..
maan/:ok

in evening they reached home...
dm opens the door...
dm:ah gye.....
geet:ohh dm i m soo happy n narates every think wat they did n where they goo...n dm is soo happr to see geet like this n daid thanx to maan with eyes n return he noded his head..
dm:bas bas saas le n i m happy that.....geet cut her n dais..
geet:no past dm ..i m moving on soo u r happy naa.
dm:more than u..
geet: n i more thing ..........we r moving back to indis....
dm get a shoch n said..
dm:maan plz pinch me....n maan did..
dm:ohh i m soo happy...n thought maan is the one fr my geet..i know that i sw in his eyes n know in my geets eyes god bless themm...

after some time...........geet ws coming out of her bathroom wearing her night suit..wen maan came n said..
maan:wem r u winding ur business n 1 more think.....geet looks confuse..
maan:in india i ll help u setlling ur new banglow is that ok..
geet :tahnx maan bt i can manage..
maan:no ways i m here n i ll do it n thats it..
geet:ok baba or kuch..han ek aur baat..
maan:bolo geet...
geet:pari going to come with me i cant let her away i love her...
maan:geet r u les******........with a smirk..Wink.
geetAngry angry:n throw a pillow on him again n again untill...maan grab her n pull her to his lap n said...
maan:wisper in her ear .....geet aur ek baar mara toh then he instantly kissed her ear n went away left shocked.Wink.........
geet thought:wat ws that god..help me y i cant say any think wen he grab my hand.........
on the other hand maan Smileis extremily happy that geet is shifting to delhi n wat happened in room ws more than a frndship he thought...
maan  n geet both lost in there thoughts that they forgets wen they fall asleep .....

NEXT MORNING....
geet in her room thought: wats goin on with me...do i like maan no no no no it cant b.....
maan came to her:geet y ant u get ready......wen he saw she ws in bed..
geet:its just 10 soo..
maan:soo get up u lazy girl..
geet:u called me lazy..
maan:yes...with a smirk..
geet:ahhhhhhhhhhh y r u irritating me....
maan:y want i......n smirk again..
geet:leave me alone... now goo..
on the other hand maan moving closer to her n she seemed scared n said...
geet: maan stay away...
maan nw 1 or 2 inch away from her ...n said..
maan:soo u dont like me coming closer to u han....in husky voice..
geet lost again in his eyes....
and maan moved his hand to move away the hair which is disturbimg geet n he did it ...he took the hairs n place it behind the ear n said...
maan: know i m sure u like me .....with all this geet get a shock n push him n runs in bathroom....
while maan smiles......

after some time down stairs on dining table maan n dm were chtting..
dm: so finaly we r moving back i m soo happy..
maan:i can see that..
dm:u like geet na...
maan shocked n coughed n dm smiles....maan bend his head down..
dm:i know u like her soo wats the problem nw..
maan:woh - eh --h,m,,..
dm:bolo maan...
maan: i dont know if she will accept me or nt...he said in one goo .....n dm laugh aloud...
maan: dm it is nt a joke..
dm:i thought u r msk soo wat happened....then
maan:dm u know her infront of her i also smetime get scared with a amile..
dm:hmmm do u really like her or...
maan: i want to  marry her .....n dm shocked n happy..
dm:i m soo happy fr u both..
maan: bt geet is confusing..
dm: thats nt a problem...
maan:woh kaise..
dm: i know she likes u..i saw her yesterday all her talks start from u n ended on u....maan smile
maan:soo wat should i do..
dm: jelosey the bst thing in the world..to make any one relise that he or she likes some one,,,.......maan shocked..
maan:dm u r great...
dm:i know bt plz dont hurt her..
maan:i wont n i think u know that.....n u know i told dadi about geet n she is more happy then u that finally i selected a girll...
dm: hmmm soo ajj se he kam pe lag jao,.....n she should accept before going to india ...maan confused..
maan: y before going......to india...
dm:coz i want ur engagement in the very next week....both r disscussing wem geet came n sit besids dm n kissed her..
dm:eat breakfast n come early we have to pack..
geet:ok dm..

after some time .....
maan geet both went to office..............


precap-----maan makes geet jelous n geets confession....

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Posted: 07 February 2011 at 7:53am | IP Logged
awesomeeeeeeeee hope geet accepts maans luv

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Posted: 07 February 2011 at 7:56am | IP Logged
awesome part...loved maaneet moments.....I am glad to know the fact that Geet has agreed to move to delhi...
waiting for the jealousy track...update soon...


Edited by namita25 - 07 February 2011 at 7:56am

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