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Posted: 15 January 2013 at 11:16pm | IP Logged
You know I read this chapter on the same day you posted it but I took this long to reply because honestly...I dont have words. Seriously I am out of them and I fear I have started sounding like a tape recorder that needs repair...

If we just remove Ansh from the scene, we can see how enamored Shilpa is by everything around her...mostly because everything links back to Sid.

The hall decor - his idea.
Her dress - his choice.
Seating arrangement's and all - Sid.

But with the presence of just one person, she is unable to enjoy the beauty or the atmosphere around her .

Observing her every move, assuming her thoughts, trying to decipher her every feeling, no...not only deciphering...he was playing with her feelings, trying to get into her mind and pretend he knew her better than herself.

Suffocation is the apt word that you used...because that is what Ansh has been doing to her since the past few days. Although if you look at it in an another way, his suffocation of her is making her see things more clearly now.

Like someone posted in their comment, the whole part with Ansh was so agonizing! I mean i could literally feel her suffocation...

On another note though, you are doing a fab job with your portrayal of Ansh. Clap

I so wanted Shilpa to slap him when he had her trapped in his arms. But the words he said, though cruel, was something Shilpa needed to hear... because she needs to realize that no matter what anyone says, Riddhima is a part of Sid's past. And if she feels something for him, then she neednt be guilty because at this point in time Riddhima is not a part of Sid's life anymore.
And didnt Sid tell Shilpa that he wouldnt go back to Riddhima even if she asked him to? Embarrassed

"It's not rocket science Shilpa. Even I've noticed it, when Sid's around, you're laughing with him without a care in the world. All your attention is fixated on him and the people close to him, and yet, as soon as he disappears out the room... it's funny isn't it, how I've not seen you smile properly, not once?...Even when he's gone all you seem to be doing is waiting for him to come back..."

 Aah! Shilpa needed to hear this...cruel I know but this will help her understand where her feelings are with Sid...and maybe a jealous ex-friend was needed to say them.

I was clapping excitedly when she pushed him away from her ...so needed!LOL

She noticed it had been a man, completely shadowed as he stood with his back turned towards the moonlight outside, the ends of his hair alone were tinted as if he was wearing a dusky halo.

Sid, her angel. ...she was escaping her troubled past where a demon was terrorizing her and on her way to her future, she collided with an angel. Awww! Nish I love how you mold all these beautiful little hints between the lines.

Poor thing she was so terrorized that she didnt even recognize Sid's presence.

Outside, she wasn't a threat to Sid's reputation.

How touching is that! She cares so much for Sid that she held herself back in the hall when she should have rightly slapped Ansh.

I have to applaud you... seriously! For the way you described her transition from being suffocated to finally breathing. Like she was drowning in her fears and anxieties but Sid's touch, his voice breathes life back into her...

The last part was simply, simply astounding and breath taking. After reading it, I had sat quietly for a long time, just thinking about that scene.

Somehow I had never liked Saans...which is surprising because SRK and romantic sngs are a hit combo for me...but this one had failed to impress me. But I had heard this reprise a few days back on TV and had liked it  a lot. Had been meaning to hear it again but wasnt getting the time. Now though when I heard it, I couldnt even think about SRK and Katrina...it was onkly Sid and Shilpa...wow right? Pat yourself on the back.Big smile

The lyrics were so, so apt that I felt as if the song has been written for SidShi originally.

*sigh*

Was that tornado within her rising or settling?

Why was she so restless? Why was her heart still racing, faster than before?

It felt as if she was experiencing a rush of a different kind ' something was still usurping inside of her, threatening to burst the longer she found herself looking at Sid...

So,so well written! Brilliant...As a fellow writer, I am in awe right now...

She felt overpowered by his smouldering gaze. His jaw set straight, he was merely observing her. Looking deep into her eyes, in the same unblinking manner as her eyes watched him. 

It was as if he was reading her thoughts, boring into her soul...

Still he said nothing.

She realised his hand was still on her cheek as she glanced hesitantly towards it. Immediately, she felt his fingers stretch further towards her, deeper, till they were raking through her hair, touching her neck.

*faints because of SidShi overdose* Too hot...Blushing Abhi yeh haal hai toh aage kya hoga?

All those things she'd heard should have destroyed what she felt for Sid, all those words should have made her feel terrible about even being associated with him, all those accusations should have made her ashamed to even look Sid straight in the eye...

Because that's exactly how she'd felt minutes ago.

And yet, as he watched her now, as he held her, she didn't feel anything like that whatsoever...

As if those words had completely been wiped from her memory.

ClapClap

Honestly I just want to post the whole of the last part.


The strumming of his heartbeat under her fingertips revived her. Her throat rasped as she inhaled a deep breath of air, as if she'd been brought back to life; finally reassured that he was really here, as she tightly clutched the material of his jacket in her fist.

Kab se meri saans ruki thi
Mujhe saans aayi...Perfect! So, so captivating! 


And in the end when she just lets go of all her insecurities and simply loses herself in his arms ...*sigh* * floating on a SidShi cloud*

This is, hands down, one of the most romantic scenes I have ever read. She has finally found home.

By far, one of your best works! I am totally, totally out of words here. A true and brilliant writer is what you are and I am happy I have been a given a chance to experience your talent.

Only one small thing though...I would also love to know what's going on in Sid's mind. Day Dreaming

And dont think just because you updated this quickly you can take a break now...because you have just manged to increase our excitement even more. So update soon!




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Posted: 16 January 2013 at 8:40am | IP Logged
AMAZING chapter !
U've described Shilpa's feelings , her 'suffocation' so brilliantly ! The last Sidshi scene was just PERFECT :D I could visualize the whole scene :) and the lyrics r so apt :D
Can't wait to know what happens next! Cont.soon...

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Posted: 22 January 2013 at 2:42pm | IP Logged
dear, where are you im waiting here for the next part

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when will you update the next part???
we and specially i need the next partBig smile

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Posted: 27 January 2013 at 11:48am | IP Logged
Question in Facebook style : Y u no update?! 

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 xSorry for the delay!
Unreserved!

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Honestly, thank you doesn't even begin to cover how grateful I am to have you guys!
Thank you all so so much!

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Nikki! : Thank you so much for taking the time out to comment! I know how busy you are and how eagerly you were awaiting that update! (Sorry!) Embarrassed Huge smile on my face as I read over your words for the fiftieth time, honestly it means so much!


Jazz Music LOL very fitting, I love it, cause it has the right amount of romance but keeps the atmosphere upbeat.

LOL So true! I never actually thought about that!
Yep, you never know what you have till it's gone, usually what starts off the jealousy journey but yes we're definitely all Team Sid here! Big smile Reading your words honestly, you are tooo kind! I can't thank you enough. I felt bad not letting Sid and Shilpa dance but I hope there are more opportunities in the future - let's see :) Thanks again!  x

Shona_Mayur: Thank you once again for a lovely comment! Seriously, I am really lucky to have readers like you, and for all the effort you take with your kind words :) Thank you so much for your reassurance - big jhappi from me! Haha, yes Ansh really irritates me, I've never had so much fun writing about a negative character though haha! It seems to happen naturally but yes, I agree it's the goodness in Sid which is getting attention Embarrassed Aw I'm honestly just smiling at the comment, it's so sweet of you really! Thank you sooo much! Haha, not at all the pleasure really is all mine! If people read my work and actually like it, I can't ask for anything more! I am the selfish one! Oh my gosh, also! You do suuuch a great job if you make avis! They're stunning really, I'm a fan always since a) they're amazing and b) it's a skill and talent I don't have, so I can only appreciate how well you've done! Big respect! Aww...thank you so much for the offer! Too sweet of you! For sure, if I ever need an avi made I will let you know! Big smileThanks for liking the dabba - it's all down to the wonderful members of IF :) Thanks again x

havokhotline, jas, masaf57: Thank you so much for commenting! Smile x

hangok: Thank you! Haha, I have updated with the new chapter, I know you were waiting! I'm so sorry for the delay! Again thank you for your lovely words, I hope you enjoy the new update and I'm glad you liked the old one! :) x

Sidra! : Thank you will never be enough - I'm the tape recorder. Honestly, you are too too kind! I never feel that good and yet you continue to put me on cloud nine honestly.  I remember reading your comment and especially the part about removing Ansh from the scenes, I was pleasantly surprised at how true your interpretation of Shilpa was - I didn't even realise I'd done that! LOLEmbarrassed Thank you so much for your words on Ansh too! It's a surprise but that's been the easiest part to bring across...so strange. I hope I can do justice to Sidshi in the coming update(s) :/  I love your comments, I feel as if I've read the update sat alongside you! LOL

'I was clapping excitedly when she pushed him away from her ...so needed!LOL'

Again, you always see a side I never notice...thank you so much for these comments Sidra, they truly enlighten me.


'Sid, her angel. ...she was escaping her troubled past where a demon was terrorizing her and on her way to her future, she collided with an angel.'

It's so weird! At first, I didn't understand 'Saans' hence it took a while to grow on me but definitely the reprise version is what got me through that last update...Huge compliment! Thank you!

'Too hot...Blushing'

Again, that emoticon just made me laugh out loud! Haha...thank you :)
Your words are forever going to be the biggest compliment. The fact you wanted to post the chapter renders me speechless, to say the least. I am so grateful! I respect you so much as a writer so there couldn't be anything greater for me than for such kind words coming from you about my writing! You really are tooo nice though!
P.s. Sorry for the delay Ouch haha!
Thank you again! Hugx

Harshu! : Thank you for cmmenting lovely! So glad you enjoyed the part! I'm glad you liked the lyrics in accordance with the chapter. The fact that you could visualise it is a huge compliment! Thanks again! P.s. ADORE your dabba! Best thing I have ever seen Big smile KW is beautiful... x

Thanks again everyone! Hope you enjoy the next part! xo


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Hello! I have to thank all of you for all the prompt replies to the last part and truly touched by your words and even the encouragement to update. That said, I'm really terrible I know - grr! These delayed updates. I will get better I hope...

Apologies for any mistakes in advance.

Please let me know your thoughts.

Without further ado -


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Part 39

You know, I'd do anything...


"He did this... didn't he?"

Sid felt her automatically stiffen in his arms. He didn't know whether it was his voice or the question he'd asked that had bothered her.

Minutes passed as he realised she was gathering her bearings. From the slight motion of her head that was resting against his shoulder, he imagined she was scrutinising the garden surrounding them, in a bid to establish where it was she was standing.

A slight pause then gradually, she peeled herself away from him, as if she was mustering all her energy into this one movement; using her arms that had been wrapped around him moments ago as leverage now as she pushed off from his chest, her hands holding onto his shoulders for support.

Her gaze was lowered, her breathing deep, hollow yet quick as he watched her. A wind blew around them, fiercely whipping her hair into her face and yet she didn't give it any attention, continuing to focus downward.

Sid waited for her to look up at him, ready to confront her again. Somehow he knew she was deliberately avoiding him...

Why?

He didn't know.

But it must have to do something with him.

Ansh.

Sid was sure of it.

Who else?

Everything had been going fine...

Sid had hurried back to the hall after Diya had fallen asleep, eager to finally share the last remaining moments of the evening solely with Shilpa, just like he'd promised.

The elation and excitement he'd experienced in mere anticipation of seeing her felt like a distant memory now as he observed the moisture under Shilpa's eyes, drenching her thick black lashes.

Course, he'd never actually managed to find her – when he'd reached the hall, Shilpa was nowhere to be seen.

At first, upon entering, he'd been overwhelmed by a slight restlessness, which had fast turned to disappointment when he'd scanned the room and hadn't managed to spot her. As if he'd been expecting her to be waiting for him at the entrance itself...

He'd dismissed the idea promptly, he knew he was just overreacting. This was a networking event after all, he'd realised that Shilpa would have mingled with the crowd and made some friends. She was the bubbly, talkative and social type after all...it wasn't hard to be blown away by her.

Sid, in turn, had chosen to conveniently immerse himself in conversation too. He figured maybe that way he'd have more chance of bumping into her before casually making his waythrough the room.

The lights had suddenly dimmed out around them and Sid had wearily acknowledged this seriously diminished his probability of catching her...

Immediately, he'd panicked recalling Shilpa's phobia.

It had only been the one occasion where she'd managed to come to terms with dealing with it but that had been in broad daylight in a spacious room. He'd been there to reassure her but...

What if the one time wasn't enough?

With so many people around, the room was packed and worse still with no lights on...surely it would affect how she she was feeling, claustrophobia was inherent in such situations.

No, he needed to make sure she was okay...

What if she wasn't?

Desperately, he'd studied the crowd, people huddled in groups, struggling to distinguish her features, her dress, her silky black hair in the darkness. He tried asking around, calling her name, yet with no response, nothing in the affirmative, anyway.

No Shilpa.

No one knew where she was...

He suddenly felt a chill on the back of his neck and had turned around to notice the open door of the fire exit and a flicker of hope had rekindled within him. Undoubtedly, if Shilpa wasn't comfortable inside the room she would have stepped outside...

She had to be there.

Yet, it's when he'd faced a vacant landscape of trees and greenery that the isolation of the view settled within him. The panic really started to seep through his whole body with a much fiercer intensity now, as he'd rushed back inside –

Only to bump straight into her.

It was so strange...whether caused by the mixture of sudden shock and sudden relief or something else, he didn't know,but he'd frozen to the spot.

The sight of her had completely startled him. He had been forced to do a double take. The way the dusky moonlight was shining onto her face, gleaming like a flame in her gorgeous eyes as she'd squinted at him oblivious to his identity. The sparkle reflecting off her cheeks, stunned him, her tousled hair looked even glossier amidst the rays which struck them as he continued to stare at her...

Eventhough he could see it was Shilpa, for a second, he hadn't been able to recognise her. As if he'd seen a completely different side of her altogether and yet...her face, those features, were all the same.

So what had changed?

It was when she'd disappeared past him that he'd broken out of his trance, hastily chasing her outside.

He hadn't realised she was upset until she'd squrimed away from his hold without turning around to look at him.

"Leave me alone..." he'd heard and a mixture of shock and pain overcame him, as if he'd been shattered into a million pieces.

Without thinking, he had obliged – but only when he'd let go had he realised it was not 'him' she'd been speaking to...

Something had happened in his absence. Something bad, worse than what he'd foreseen.

Sid had forced her to turn around and look at him, just so that could see it was him standing there. That he was here now. Sid.

He needed her to know she was safe but then he'd seen her terrified expression, the way she was quivering uncontrollably, desperately pulling her arm from out his grasp. Her features furrowed with pain and he'd looked down in the same direction-

Why was she so afraid...?

And there it was.

On her arm, the unmistakable outline of fingers etched into skin, slightly bruising in places from where her skin had been savagely compressed.

Instantly, anger had surged through his veins, he could feel his vision blurring the more he looked. His teeth gritted, a burning sensation had travelled from his head through to his chest, a spark beneath his trembling fingertips which were touching her arm, as he had lightly traced near the pink mark which was tainting her beautiful skin.

He'd touched Shilpa.

He'd hurt Shilpa.

Those tears, her pained expression, her defenseless state, the mark. The images flashed one after another over and over in his mind.

Sid could feel heat rising in his eyes, his vision everything was becoming unfocused.

The one thing clear in his mind, he just wanted to find him.

Shilpa was suffering because of him...

Yet when Sid turned to look at her, affection had poured out from his heart at how devastated she looked.

Forgetting Ansh for the time being, it was definite, Shilpa was always his priority. He just wanted to make her better. He just wanted her to be okay.

Console her, embrace her...

Sid couldn't see her like this, not ever and especially not when her pain had been inflicted by someone else, and that too so deliberately.

He clenched his fist.

Sid never should had left her alone. This was all his fault... but he'd never ever thought it would come to this. How could he have predicted the night to turn in such a way.

That he'd find Shilpa in this state... That Ansh would, could hurt her?

How dare he touch her!

What had he done to her?

Sid needed to know.

He knew she'd heard his question and yet she'd not answered.She needn't be afraid though.

He was here.

Lowering his head to look into her eyes, instantly she'd writhed in his hold, obstinate that she'd not comply as she suddenly clinched her eyes tight shut.

Exhaling, as if he'd expected the reaction, he'd softly traced a finger against her fringe, holding it off her face as he used the back of his other hand to gently stroke down across her cheek.

He'd not failed to notice how she'd shuddered from his touch yet he continued to cup her face into his palms before raising it up towards him.

"Shilpa, look at me..."

She frowned, trying to pull away as he tried again, "Look at me, Shilpa".

It wasn't a request.

Hesitantly, as if burdened by the weight of her tears, her eyes weakly fluttered open, hovering uncertainly on the lower part of his face, cautiously averting his fixed regard.

"Shillpa..." he urged.

With the same anxiousness, she raised her gaze and instantly they were locked with his own, unblinking.

He softly caressed her jawline once with his thumb, "Did Ansh do this?"

He was taken aback by how she had managed to remain unresponsive, as if his voice had completely washed over her without any effect. He might as well needn't have said anything as she simply continued to observe him, her eyes vacant.

It was almost as if she didn't recognise him, as if she'd only just met him and was acquainting herself with his features, studying the depth of his eyes for the first time.

She seemed so confused, her inspection of him felt...so alien.

Sid folded his lips with regret, troubled by the state she was in, a frown instantly creasing his brow.

He should have been there for her.

What has he done to you, Shilpa...?

What did he do...?

He clasped her face, his eyes narrowed with desperate urgency, "What...What did he say to you, Shilpa?!" he cried.

Immediately, she gasped as if a bad memory had come to her recollection – her round, terrified eyes tearing up as she backed away with such force she never noticed, neither did Sid, her diamond pendant that had entwined around a button on Sid's shirt. The feeble chain automatically snapped from around her neck as she distanced herself from him.

"Shilpa?" Sid gaped at her, puzzled by her behaviour.

She turned her back towards him as he looked on flabbergasted.

"What the hell?" he murmured.

Ambling forward he came to stand infront of her, blocking her path.

"Shilpa, why-?" Raising an arm, he found himself deliberating what to do, whether he should touch her, whether it was right to console her.

The way she'd look at him, it made him feel no less than a stranger.

Maybe she was in shock.

Cautiously he took a hold of her shoulders, clearing his throat awkwardly, "Shilpa, it's me..."

Her face was twisted in displeasure as she refused to look at him. Her gaze dodged from the ground to the side, her arms weakly shrugging out of his hold.

"Shilpa..." he called her name uncertainly, before holding her face again as she folded her lips, her eyes shut as a river of tears rushed out from under her dark lashes.

And it struck him – her aloofness, it wasn't normal.

She was trying to keep a distance between them, purposely deflecting him – which again in itself, wasn't normal.

It could only mean that somewhere Sid had become involved in whatever had been said or told to Shilpa.

Why would she believe anything Ansh had to say though?

What had happened in his absence?

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"Well, well...look who we have here.."

The sound of his voice sent a tremor through my whole body as my eyes flew open. A trail of goosebumps formed over my exposed skin, but it wasn't due to the chilly gust which had suddenly picked up around us. It felt as if I had suddenly gone from boiling hot to sub zero cold in the space of a second.

I was vaguely aware of the warmth from Sid's hands on my cheeks slowly disappearing as his fingers grazed against my skin before he peeked over his shoulder to where the sound had come from. Turning around fully, now a barrier between us, he faced Ansh.

From over Sid's shoulder, I felt the tears spill unhindered over my lash line as Ansh's eyes pinned on mine. An eagle watching his prey, contemplating his attack, ready to pounce.

Suddenly, his resolve shattered as Sid shifted his weight to the side, my own vision suddenly blocked by the dark curls of his hair and fabric of his jacket; a deliberate move as I stood shielded behind his frame.

Subconsciously, I had inched closer to him as my feet shuffled forward, yet still not touching Sid as I found my face was level with the collar.

Peeking from around his neck, I stared at Ansh, his attention now fixed on Sid.

"Dr. Modi..." Ansh's lips curled into a forced smile yet it wiped away in the same second, presumably because Sid had failed to respond to his greeting.

An owl hooted in the vicinity, making me jump as I shuddered, the chill engulfing me once more before I heard Sid's low tone:

"What did you do?"

"I-?" Ansh's glanced towards me, his eyes glimmered, understanding the meaning of his question. "Oh...of course"

As Ansh took a confident step forward, my hand instinctively reached out, tightly clutching the material by Sid's waist. In my own panic, as I stilled, my raspy breathing echoed in my ear, the heat from my breath on Sid's shoulder, the bottom half of my face had been pressed up against his back.

I gathered my eyes were the only thing visible, yet still exposing me to Ansh yet as I dared a glance in his direction. I was eased and yet surprised to see that he was distracted, ignoring my presence.

Instead his full attention was on Sid, he seemed nervous.

I could feel myself frowning. Why did Ansh look ill all of a sudden, as if the colour was draining from his face? And he'd stopped dead in his tracks, swinging precariously on the balls of his heels, as if Sid had done something to discourage him in his step.

It was so odd...

Hesitantly, I swivelled my gaze towards Sid, instantly noticing how his jaw bone wasaccentuated, his teeth clenching as he glowered at Ansh.

I held my breath.

I'd only seen Sid this angry once before.

The vision of the street fight, that boxing ring when he'd saved Armaan from a fallacious opponent flashed before my open eyes.

My breath pitched drastically in my chest, knocking against my throat as I felt nausea overwhelm my senses.

The only time I'd ever seen Sid violent, he'd punched that man repeatedly, he'd been so blinded by his rage.

I felt my insides quiver from the memory.

Ansh's voice interrupted my thoughts, "Nothing...We were just catching up for old time's sake. I may have pointed out a few home truths along the way, but that's just who I am. Always her well-wisher..." he chuckled sardonically, "Shame, your dear Shilpa couldn't handle the brunt of her own self made debacle..."

Under my lips, I felt the muscles in Sid's shoulders tense as I moved my head back in surprise. Watching him in awe, I couldn't help but feel surprised by this reaction.

Why the anger?

Why was he allowing this tension to build inside him?

Ansh hadn't even said anything yet...

The truth about our conversation. He hadn't even come close to revealing this secret I was trying to bury in my chest.

Rather, I was afraid, that once he did Sid wouldn't be able to justify this anger he was feeling.

He would judge me the same way Ansh had done...

He would express his disgust just like Ansh had.

He'd know why I was nothing but a disappointment, he'd realise why I was resenting myself so, why I felt lowly and characterless. He'd know why I hadn't been able to look him in the eye before...

Because though I could deal with Ansh's judgement of me, I couldn't live with myself if Sid did the same.

But I knew he would...

Because he'd agree with everything Ansh would say.

Because he'd know, just like I did...Ansh was right.

"I'm only going to tell you this once..."

My pulse increased as the cloth drifted from my hand when Sid took an unexpected step forward, moving till he was face to face with Ansh, my eyes helplessly watching him go.

Now with them standing inches apart, my heartbeat drummed in my ears as I anticipated the worst. I could just about make Sid's voice in the whistling wind, "Leave Shilpa alone-"

I blinked when Ansh's eyes met my own, immediately looking away to avoid his scrutiny.

"And what if I don't?"

It all happened so fast, I'd returned my gaze and a sharp gasp had escaped my lips. My eyes fixed on Sid's fist which was now raised in the air, his knuckles bone-white as his other hand clenched around the collar of Ansh's shirt.

Ansh gritted his teeth, lowering his eyes to where Sid's hand was before peering directly at me again, he smiled coyly.

Regarding Sid, I watched him mutter dangerously, "Stay within your limits, Doctor Modi-" I noticed him swallow when Sid didn't flinch. "Needn't I remind you, I was the chief guest at the party hosted by your brother this evening. If he gets word of this misbehaviour, make no mistake, removing you from the project will only be the beginning...". Cranking his neck in an attempt to look more confident than what he felt, I was sure that if I could see how petrified he was Sid could too? I swatted away the notion, a new thought winding me as I heardAnsh finish, "You'll be saying goodbye to that license, that you've slogged so hard to earn, too..."


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Thank you for reading! xo


I've been struggling to write this part. I'd start reading and give up. Having to run over and over and see where improvements could be made. Even this part I wasn't too happy with before posting but honestly, the delay was getting ridiculous. The title was from Grenade by Bruno Mars (Lyrics can be found here http://www.directlyrics.com/bruno-mars-grenade-lyrics.html ) I'm hoping you'd have interpreted in your own way - for me, it's Sid's mindset of being there for Shilpa through thick and thin so technically I knew the whole song didn't fit (crying about her taking the breaks out the car I obviously didn't associate with Shilpa lol)  I have the next unfinished part waiting in a word document LOLOuch - I know where I'm headed it's just getting words down onto a page. Will really need to know your thoughts, my mind is muddled up with words  and sometimes those words which aren't enough! At a creative slump right now.
Thank you once again for being so patient with me.
I'll be waiting to hear from your guys, please! :)

All my love, till next time N xo

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