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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 12:54pm | IP Logged
As if snapping out of his trance, he added, "aur waise bhi ab jo tum mujhe mil gayi ho, then I'm sure ke hum apni adhoori dosti ko pura kar sakenge...so no regrets!"

I loved this line........wonderful chapter! My fav part was your description of Shilpa's feeling that she was being watched...........loved SidShi's interaction.
I get why Shilpa is hesitant to start their friendship again.....they will always be reminded of the reason they both are alone right now....

Your FF is really exciting Nish...I cant wait to see what happens next.

I personally liked this part a lot so dont worry about it being bad.Smile

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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 1:17pm | IP Logged
it is amazing, i like it alotClap

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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 1:29pm | IP Logged
You were fantastic...............why are you so worried .......... I really really liked it ............ Sid Shilpa conversation was wonderful.............. the way Shilpa is thinking at the moment .........so correct......... that's the first thought that may come to a person's mind ......it's but obvious and you have capture it beautifully through Shilpa's dialogues..........

"Shilpa.. please...mat jao na", Sid murmurs.  ...........this small dialogue puts across Sid's feelings so well............. He truly considers Shilpa as a true friend and it's always difficult to let go of them.........

Fantastic chapter............... now waiting to see how everything will shape up Keep up the good work

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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 2:19pm | IP Logged
Great
 
I can sense why Shilpa doesnt want this friendship, coz this friendship will always be a foundation esp now that why they are alone and for what reason and why they met each again
 
But i hope the SidShi is all about coming together, they were suppose to meet again............

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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 7:43pm | IP Logged
Awesome update !!

SidShi convo was wonderful

Loved d way u described Shilpa's feelings
I can so understand why she is hesitant to start their friendship again Bcoz it will always reminds dem dat why dey r here today & 4 what reason dey met each other..

Looking forward to d next part..
Do continue soon..

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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 10:13pm | IP Logged
Nish awesome update !!!!!!!!!!!!
i can imagine this part............feel sid shi pain........
i really like this part.......i m not upset with u.........some memories r so deep rooted in person's life......he can never forget that..so i can understand shilpa........
last part made me cry..........Cry
update soon.

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Posted: 07 February 2011 at 1:31am | IP Logged
Awesome Update
I loved it

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