HUM TUM, MJHT FF, CH:9, 23/3 - Page 2

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

sweet heart i told u im ur mommmm😉😆😆

MOM hokar tum apni bete ko dhoka kaise de sakti ho???
fiza - not fair
me totally katti with u.

Originally posted by: -Faria-

iiiiiiiiiikkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

moon i'll kill u

maine  first nehi ayi
uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

sorry honeyy😆Edited by -moona- - 13 years ago

heyyyyyy fiza darling...........its great to see ur new story......................

Originally posted by: -moona-

sorry honeyy😆

hey moona dont b sorry
its ok dear
i was joking

congratz fiza for ur new ff.........
it'll be fun.....
loved it

Are u shocked…n u paka know im mad

 

Ok now basically ths shud b considerd first chapter as previous1 u all have readed before..

 

@Sam..thnku so much dear…lovly to cya back n active after so long..so now v can expect loads of updates….n apni dost se kahu..plz woh bhi ajay wapas…I mean Ruchi

Thanks evry1

@mona…I love u..thnks for comenting first

@faria…dnt worry dear abhi aur buhat mukay aay gay

@achose..thnks sweety

Thnku all for cuming back here…

 

Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago

nice start..😊thnx for d pm😊

Chapter:2

 

They were sitting beside the showers'feeling content in each others embrace'.

 

Mayank: ab batao  hum se chup ker jao gi kaha'

Nupur: kahin nhi'.she said seriously

 

Ths wasn't like Nupur

Mayank: kya hua ..

Nupur: I want to say sumthing

Maynk: yeah tum baat kerny se pehly kab se pochny lagin'bolo kya baat hai

Nupur: mayank'woh I want k pehly'.gunjan

Maynk: he broke apart n looked in a shook'kyaa''nupur tum ko shadi nhi kerni tu seedha seedha bool do'..gunjan ko beech mein kyun la rahi ho..

Nupur: mayankkkk

Mayank: kya mayank'..tum ko pata hai na Samrat..us ko shadi nhi kerni..aur gunjun kisi aur se shadi keray gi nhi'thinking a bit'actually ek dossray k elewa un ko mein kisi aur k sath imagine nhi ker sakta tu un ki tu rahny do'..tu in short 'humari shadi tu imposible na

Nupur: per mayank

Mayank: mera kya kausur hai'.mein kyun tumharay pyar se vanchit raho

 

Nupur: tum meri baat sun rahy ho ya nhi

Mayank: bolo'ab bhi hai kuch bolnay k lyan

Nupur: dkho 'samrat wasy tu shayad khabi na many '.above all gunjun us se is baray mein khabi baat bhi nhi keray k..na us ko push  keray gi

 

Mayank: ofcourse woh gunjan hai Nupur nhi

Nupur: mayank dnt interrupt'..han tu'.per agr tu sami se yeah bolo k mein tum se gunjun ke wajah se shadi nhi ker rahi tu shayad koi chance banjay

Mayank: Nupur yeah galat hai'.us ko bad mein regret ho tu '.ur playing with gunjan's life

Nupur: ufu mayank'..wasay bhi kya woh apni pori life asay guzar ker regret nhi keray ga'tab buhat dair hogai hogi

Mayank: hmm yeah bhi hai'

Nupur: n thn I cant just leave her like tht

Mayank: I know my jhasi k rani..she needs u'.but I need u too na

Nupur: tu tum sami se baat kero gay

Maynk: koi aur option hai

Nupur: thnku my sadu

Mayank:any thing for my drama queen

 

 

Maynk's Home:

 

DING DONG

Shilpa Anty: wah wah'log ghar se naha ker jaty hain,..ap bhar se arahy hain'.

Mayank: maa..plzz

SA: plz kya

Mayank: agar ap ki aagiya ho tu mein andhar ajo

SA: zaroor beta..apna hi ghar hai'per ..tu yeah bata k tu bahu  k hatho zinda kasay bach gaya

Mayank: he smiled'yeah Maynk Sharma k jadu hai'..maana liya'sadly'but I missed the performance'

Leaning hs head back on sofa'.she settle down to touch hs hair

Mayank: maa..ba

SA: han han pata hai..yeah ly'handing him handy cam..record kerli mein ny

Mayank: maa..ur the best'hugging her

 

SA: ek min '..yeah kya hua..he loked at her surprisingly'..yeah aj tu ny mjhy Nupur ko bahu bolany per toka kyun nhi'.warna tu hamesha HONY wali laga ta

 

Myank: he was smiling like n idiot'..tu' taking handy cam n opening it excitedly

 

SA: she took it..n he glared her with disappointment'maa' chal isay hata''seedha seedha bata kya baat hai

Mayank: sedhi baat ker tu '.hum soch rahy hain shadi kerlain..aur us ny bhi haan kerdi'ab maa diturb maat kero

 

SA: tera tu jawab hi nhi'itni bari baat ..itni bari khush khabri tu mjhy asay suna raha hain''

 

Mayank: he glared at her'tu aur kasay sunao

SA: dramtically..tu aata..meray galay lagta aur kahat'"maa..nupur maan gai maa'tum soch nhi sakti mein kitna khush hoon maa"

 

He looks at her n shook his dead in disbelieve

Mayank: tum dono na'.hit jodi ho'film join kerlo 'dialogue writer k bhi zaroorat nhi paray gi

 

SA: array kuch tu excitement show ker'.asay lagta hai tujhy koi farq hi nhi parta

 

Maynk: maa plz'tum asa maat kaho'mein ny khabhi nhi socha tha k tum loog meray emotions k asay mazak urao gay'maa'dramticaly

SA: ab melo drama kaun ker raha hai

Mayank: ab k hi beta hoon

SA: tu thk hai mein kal hi us k father se baat kerti hoon

Mayank: nhi maa

SA: kyun

Mayank: maa..actually woh chahti hai..k..gunjan ke shadi pehly hoo'.aur sami ko tu tum janti ho..mein us se baat kerta hoon'dkho phr kiya hota hai'

 

 

SA: dkh mayank..us ko galat mat samhj'woh sirf Gunjan k behan nhi hai

Mayank: maa..i know'n I really respect tht of her'.chahy woh jitni bari nautanki ho..he smiled 'per jab gunjan k baat ati hai tu she is like her mother..even gujan is as important for me too'.but maa ab sami ko serious hojana chaiy 'so I need to talk to him

 

SA: han tu kam se kam tab tak hum tum dono ki sagai tu ker saktay hai'.kam se kam mein aur meri bahu thori shoping keray

 

Mayank: matlab ap dono ko meri mehanant k kami urani hai'.

 

SA: han bilkul'aj akair mera bete is kabil hoa hai..tu kyun n uraaoo'

Mayank: bilkul' forwarding his wallet'aur ek cup coffe pilao plsss

SA: han thk hai..aj pila rhi hoon phr bahu  se maagna

Mayank: done'ek kam keray gay..dodno arms se rest keray gay aur us se coffee banwaya keray ga

SA: acha tu tu meri bahu ko islyan la raha hai'

Mayank: maa tum ko nhi lagta tub hi aj kal Nupur ki tarah argument kerny lagi ho

SA: adat dalo

Mayank: plz maa meri life mein ek hi earth quake kafi hai'tum plz maa k role nibhao

 

She left n

 

Mayank: so mission samrat on

 CHAPTER 3

Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago

Fizaaaaaaaaaaaa jana

I m really  very happy with ur 2^nd part

It was too good-sacchi(its my honest opinion)

 

Mayur were so  sweet and cute as usual

And what -u hav made maynk  full nautanki from sadu

Wah wah apka tou koi jawab he nehi hai

 

Mayank: mera kya kausur hai….mein kyun tumharay pyar se vanchit raho

 

U knw this line reminds me the  bathroom scene  of mayur.

Haye kitna cute thi wo.

 

And then…………..

Shilpa Anty: wah wah…log ghar se naha ker jaty hain,..ap bhar se arahy hain….

Mayank: maa..plzz

SA: plz kya

Mayank: agar ap ki aagiya ho tu mein andhar ajo

SA: zaroor beta..apna hi ghar hai…per ..tu yeah bata k tu bahu  k hatho zinda kasay bach gaya

And this lines reminds me the beach scene

Oye hoye superb update sweet heart

 

M.MOM and Maynk convo was very nice

hmm so now mayu is ready for mission Samrat

hmm lets c how will he mange everything

beautiful update fizaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

fantastic

keep it up and do update next part soon

take care dear

Edited by -Faria- - 13 years ago

aww fiza api.......ek aur ff🤗
it will be so much fun.................i am so happy......
par mere pagal mayank ko matlab ardhangini ko bhool na jana😳🤣.....tumhe to pata hain na mai usse kitna pyar karti hoon...☺️
but waiting for this one too.😃
continue soon

love
tasfia