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My Only Mistake! I'm A FEMALE (MG) #1 (Page 141)

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 7:08pm | IP Logged
i know why maan
obeying her because
he think she is child
& think nobody ever
called him by his name
dont just guessing tht one
wow geet is managing good
KM in her second day
evil dev doesnt know
what coming to him
i know is still teenage
but she strong make
her self busy & smile
brilliant update
pls cont soonnnnnnnn
i hope yu enjoy ur vacation
with ur family
 
 

We Wear the Mask

We wear the mask that grins and lies,
It hides our cheeks and shades our eyes,-
This debt we pay to human guile;
With torn and bleeding hearts we smile,
And mouth with myriad subtleties.

Why should the world be overwise,
In counting all our tears and sighs?
Nay, let them only see us, while
    We wear the mask.

the pain and suffering of a us,
 that doesn't want others to know about it.
The kind of people that always look happy,
but  cry themselves to sleep.
We wear the mask.
 
the the third part its my own poem i wrote
this is for geet hiding her pain
make herself smile
i hope yu like it
 
 


Edited by sharmake11 - 24 March 2011 at 9:43pm

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 7:25pm | IP Logged
awsome update.
geet was supreb

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 7:35pm | IP Logged
did you like the way Geet started her new day?
 Yes i loved the way Geet started her day n waiting for the verdict

hey shruti how was ur trip yaar?


Edited by hinal_maaneet - 24 March 2011 at 7:35pm

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 9:00pm | IP Logged
welcome back sweet heart..
thanxs for the updated...longing for it..
wow maan in doti kurta...
dramy

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 9:58pm | IP Logged

Hey!!!!!!

Wonderful update!!!!!!!
You made Puja so special yaar!!!!!!!!amazing......
 
Hmmm so Maan does puja...nice to know of that....
Dev and NT wont believe it........so does all mischief things.......
Sameera........oh beauty queen.........
Great....saare ke saare namoone...........
 
Loved the way Geet made Maan to perform puja........
 
And I absolutely loved the way Geet started her day........
all active and spiritual...........
 
hmmmm waiting for breakfast and breaking news..........

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Kawaljeet1 Senior Member
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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 10:48pm | IP Logged
amazing starting of the day n plz bring the rest of the day soon

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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 12:29am | IP Logged

finally u updated................... thanks.....................sweet part................... loved to understand their understanding for each other....................................... devtara is defo going to get punishment from maan.............................. loved maan doing pooja...................................

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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 2:12am | IP Logged
Nice updtae. I liked how geet's first day started with surya namaskar and pooja. plssssssssssssssssssss continue soon. 

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