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ShaNak new love story updated part 52 on page 99 (Page 79)

shiksha_03 Goldie

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 8:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweta16

Hi everyone, my name is Sweta. I m new in this forum and i m 16 years old. I used to read your ff and i liked every part of it. Will u be my friends? 

hi sweta & thanks for liking my ff & obviously all f us vl b frnds wth u & let me tell u...u vl hve a blast in dis forum people here r realy sweet & supportive so hve fun

shiksha_03 Goldie

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Originally posted by -Manita-

I have told again n again...that your Shanak is the cutest !!
loved that he proposed...very cute !!

manita it feels superb to knw frm a writer like u dt my shanak r d cutest...thanks a lot for liking it

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Originally posted by saaaz

You are one of the few FFs with dialogues in hindi...I like that a lot...it is so in character...and your shanak is extremely cute and there is some innocence about them...very nice!!!

thanks a lot saaz it realy means a lot 2 me

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thanks a lot 2 all those who pressed like


d next update vl b up tomorrow

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 9:18am | IP Logged
oh thanks shiksha

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amazing update!Big smile

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Originally posted by adventure_gurl

amazing update!Big smile

thanks a lot

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Posted: 24 May 2011 at 8:06am | IP Logged

Part 45

They moved at the corner of the garden & khanak looked at shaan & said:- ab bolo

Shaan:- khanak woh……………………………..main………………tum…………………..tumse

Khanak made a confused face & could not understand even a word of what shaan was saying so she said with a confused expression on her face.

Khanak:- shaan kya bol rahe ho mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha hai

Shaan was for the first time feeling very nervous though he knew that khanak would say yes but still he was nervous.

Finally shaan thought to just say it & so he went down on his one knee & took out the ring & put his hand in front of her & said in a very intense & caring voice

Finally he spoke what he wanted to ask her since yesterday & he said:- khanak main koi lambi si speech nahi dena chahta aur tumhe bore nahi karna chahta isiliye main tumhe direct pooch raha hoon

Shaan:- khanak………………….., after a pause he said:- will you marry me

After hearing what shaan just said, for once khanak was totally shocked & although she wanted shaan to ask her this since such a long time but today she was least prepared for it & so was totally shocked but was realy happy at the same time.

Shaan:- bolo na khanak……………………..will you marry me

Both shaan & khanak stared at each other for some time & they were totally lost in each other & so they were totally oblivious to 4 pairs of eyes watching them since the beginning.

Tears had welled up in khanak's eyes & she said while crying:- yes

Shaan & khanak were so happy that shaan stood up in front of khanak & both of them hugged each other tightly.

Shaan broke the hug & saw khanak crying & gently wiped her tears & said:- khanak main tumse waada karta hoon ki ab main tumhari zindagi mein yeh aansun kabhi nahi aane dunga I promise khanak………………………..ab tumhari zindagi mein sirf khushiyaan hogi aur inn aasuon ki koi jagah nahi hai ab tumhari zindagi mein………………………………………..main tumhari zindagi mein inn aansuon ko kabhi nahi aane dunga I promise khanak, shaan said all this while holding khanak's face in his hands & they both stared into each other's eyes for some time.

Then after sometime sunil, madhvi, akshay & khushboo who had seen the whole thing through a distance because akshay had told everyone & all of them were very happy with shaan & khanak's decision so they went out to see what shaan & khanak had to talk & they were really happy that shaan & khanak wanted to get married to each other.

Sunil:- ahem ahem………………..he cleared his throat intentionally so dt shaan & khanak knw dt dey r present here.

Shaan & khanak looked away from each other & then looked at sunil, madhvi, akshay & khushboo & saw them smiling at them.

Sunil & madhvi moved towards shaan & khanak & stood in between them & akshay & khushboo moved after sunil & madhvi towards shaan & khanak.

Sunil kept his hand on shaan's shoulder & gave him a side hug & madhvi hugged khanak & smiled & akshay & khushboo were smiling seeing the things going on.

Sunil:- beta hum dono bahut khush hain tum dono ke iss decision se

Shaan:- sach dad mom

Madhvi:- haan beta humein kya problem ho sakti thi tum dono ke iss rishte se ulta bhai hum log toh sabse zyaada khush honge agar aisa kuch hoye toh

Sunil:- toh phir ab der kis baat ki……………………….kal hi pandit ji ko bulate hain aur inki shaadi ki date fix karwate hain…………………………kyun kya kehte ho tum sab

Madhvi nodded her head in a yes & akshay said:- haan dad aap bilkul sahi keh rahe ho

Khushboo:- haan dad baat toh sahi hai…………………….par acha hoga agar aap ek baar shaan aur khanak se bhi pooch lein ki woh abhi hi shaadi karna chahte hain kya ya unhe thoda aur waqt chaiye

Sunil:- haan khushboo beta tum theek keh rahi ho

Sunil 1st asked khanak:- khanak beta tum batao kya tum abhi shaadi ke liye taiyaar ho

Khanak was a little hesitant to speak at first & shaan understood dt she wanted to say something but was not able to say in front of everyone so shaan spoke.

Shaan:- dad mom main aur khanak ek doosre se kuch baat karna chahte hain toh hum aapko ghar pe bata dein

Madhvi:- haan haan beta zaroor tum dono aaram se ek doosre se baat karke decide kar lo aur humein kal subah tak bata dena

Shaan:- yes mom

Someone had called sunil & madhvi so they went back in the hall & akshay & khushboo followed them & shaan & khanak were in the garden only.

After everyone left shaan asked khanak what she wanted to say

Shaan:- kya hua khanak kya bolna chahti thi tum

Khanak:- shaan woh actually……………………………….

Shaan:- bolo na khanak kya hua…………………………tumhe abhi shaadi nahi karni toh bata do……………………main mom dad se baat kar loonga

Khanak:- nahi shaan aisi baat nahi hai, she looked down & blushed a little & said:- mujhe abhi shaadi karne se koi aitraaz nahi hai

Shaan:- toh phir kya problem hai khanak

Khanak:- woh shaan mujhe tumse ek baat poochni thi

Shaan:- haan toh poocho na

Khanak:- shaan woh………………………….khanak was very hesitant to ask so she looked down.

Shaan saw her looking down & turned her around & made her face him by holding her shoulders & said very caringly:- kya baat hai khanak

Khanak:- shaan kya tum………………………….kya tum shaadi ke baad bhi…………………

Shaan:- shaadi ke baad bhi…………………kya

Khanak:- kya tum mujhe shaadi ke baad kaam karne doge matlab  tumhare saath office mein kaam karne doge.

Shaan smiled & started laughing after hearing what khanak wanted to say & khanak saw him laughing & said:- kya hua shaan tum has kyun rahe ho

Shaan finally composed his laughter & said:- arre tum baat hi aisi kar rahi ho…………………….obviously yaar agar tum chahti ho toh tum shaadi hone ke baad bhi office mein kaam kar sakti ho mujhe koi aitraaz nahi hai

Khanak:- sachi shaan

Shaan:- haan baba aur waise bhi mujhe bhi acha nahi lagta agar tum shaadi ke baad kaam na kar paati toh kyunki jo ladies independent hoti hai aur working hoti hai woh mujhe bahut achi lagti hai

Khanak:- thanks shaan

Khanak couldn't control her happiness & so she almost jumped off & hugged shaan & shaan hugged her back.

Shaan said while hugging khanak:- kya khanak tum bhi na itni choti choti baaton ki chinta mat kiya karo………………………….

He then broke the hug & held her face in his hands & said:- toh ab toh tum abhi shaadi karne ke liye taiyaar ho na

Khanak nodded her head in a yes & both of them again hugged each other.

After sometime they went to the party & the party went realy nyc & then everyone was realy tired so they went back & the khandelwal family (including khanak) also went back to their house. Shaan & khanak were going back in shaan's car & akshay, khushboo, madhvi & sunil were going back in the other car.

Since everybody were very tired, as soon as they reached home all of them went to sleep & decided to talk in the morning.

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